your not dancing to the music and you dont point ur toes when ur suppossed to and u tend not to finish ur lines but good luck it dance :) still good job
i agree, i think you could've added some variety and pointed your toes every now and then. and your energy kind of puttered out after the first few seconds; would've been much better if you'd kept up that energy!
@dancinboi89 you're right, but if you don't point your toes you have a reason not to and that reason should be obvious--either flex purposefully or the limp foot should match the movement. Every choice in choreography should have a purpose, down to the minute detail. And never flexing or pointing your toes just equals bad technique.
this is amazing, im using this song for my higher dance choreography :D!
stevinharrisx 3 months ago
R u a beginer?????? ?????
laylaydabiznezz 10 months ago
This is really good, but sometimes the music doesn't suit with the steps
MsVampire11 11 months ago
I think they mean that your movements are too quick for the music, but other then that, it was very good
Egirl1000 1 year ago
your not dancing to the music and you dont point ur toes when ur suppossed to and u tend not to finish ur lines but good luck it dance :) still good job
heat0cheer0girly 1 year ago
wow that was beautiful!! i loved it :D
jessalena14 1 year ago
Thanks for all the feedback! I will use this when I do something next.
emdancesox 2 years ago
sheesh, whenever i try and dance like that , it looks so bad
vballlover16 2 years ago
i agree, i think you could've added some variety and pointed your toes every now and then. and your energy kind of puttered out after the first few seconds; would've been much better if you'd kept up that energy!
dismaltwilightt 2 years ago
I thought she was having a spaz attack tbh.
elladude101 2 years ago
you are wayyy to overchoreographed.
JayJayBayBay123 2 years ago
@JayJayBayBay123 How can you be 'overchoreographed'? that makes no sense, I'm afraid
Kirsty0601 1 year ago
Reach harder, i dont like how u start the beginning with such a poweful part.
Moderndancer16 2 years ago
Its contemporary, u dont "have" to point ur toes.not from what ive learned and seen.
dancinboi89 2 years ago
@dancinboi89 you're right, but if you don't point your toes you have a reason not to and that reason should be obvious--either flex purposefully or the limp foot should match the movement. Every choice in choreography should have a purpose, down to the minute detail. And never flexing or pointing your toes just equals bad technique.
snowdancr14 2 years ago
and point your toes more, goddamnit !
N1N4R3B3CC4 2 years ago
you need to use your wrists more and you need to reach from your WAIST, not just with your arms.
N1N4R3B3CC4 2 years ago 2
i like it!
andipandykrub 2 years ago
wtf?
unclechristy20 2 years ago