Hi there I agree nice pacing, but the cuts should be more consistent. Also sound should be a lot better, better mic, more near the actors vocal cords, also record some dead air , which makes the sound more consistent, you will learn all this in Film school,
I have been a professional film/ video producer for 10 years.
Remember this, Great acting, excellent consistent sound, and good script, are the main ingredients that makes a great movie.
It was great. I have a friend that stutters and I know people can be very rude to those who stutter. I was wondering if tyler really does stutter in real life?
I really enjoyed the end, and some of the pacing was good, but there are a couple of awkward cuts that I personally would have edited differently. Also, the directing was not always consistent. By this I mean to say that some your cinematography was very well set up, but that created contrast with the rest because it was stylistically much different. However, for a student project, this was respectable. There is a lot to work on, and I only say all of this to help, but overall, well done!
@DanielWFilms I really appreciate your opinion. And you're right, I do need to improve directing wise. I'm going to Columbia College to major in film directing. Thanks! :D
Hi there I agree nice pacing, but the cuts should be more consistent. Also sound should be a lot better, better mic, more near the actors vocal cords, also record some dead air , which makes the sound more consistent, you will learn all this in Film school,
I have been a professional film/ video producer for 10 years.
Remember this, Great acting, excellent consistent sound, and good script, are the main ingredients that makes a great movie.
Good luck
Have fun
Danny
dupsdell1 1 week ago
Story of my life, man...
squizz222 3 months ago
My bf stutters but i think its adorable
MsFRITO123 3 months ago
It was great. I have a friend that stutters and I know people can be very rude to those who stutter. I was wondering if tyler really does stutter in real life?
hlpdavis28 7 months ago
its coool :)
vivustemporis 7 months ago
I really enjoyed the end, and some of the pacing was good, but there are a couple of awkward cuts that I personally would have edited differently. Also, the directing was not always consistent. By this I mean to say that some your cinematography was very well set up, but that created contrast with the rest because it was stylistically much different. However, for a student project, this was respectable. There is a lot to work on, and I only say all of this to help, but overall, well done!
DanielWFilms 8 months ago
@DanielWFilms I really appreciate your opinion. And you're right, I do need to improve directing wise. I'm going to Columbia College to major in film directing. Thanks! :D
TIEStudios 7 months ago
@TIEStudios No problem! And if you ever feel interested, check out some of my shorts :p
DanielWFilms 7 months ago
im upset
awesomeguy3211 9 months ago
This is very good!!!! I stutter and this was done very well. Brings spotlight to an issue that people do not talk about much:)
brlaranjo 9 months ago