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  • Me: (still unconscious losing a lot of blood on my arm)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Me: W-What happened? *Fades away again*

    Ayame: *Gets a clot and wraps it around Kiva's arm* Is it still losing blood, Kiva?

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  • Me: (still has blood coming out of my arm starts to feel lightheaded) Keira please come back I'm a what I'm a what please....Keira.....come......­.back (then was unconscious due to losing a lot of blood on my arm)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Me: *Eyes widen as Kiva became unconscious* K-Kiva! *Gets my Ocarina and plays the song of healing in front of Kiva then I fade*

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  • Me: (still has blood coming out of my arm then spots Keira) Keira speak to me are you okay

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Me: *Looks at you slowly and sadly fades away* Kiva...I'm a...

  • Ayame: *Feels something* Guys! Keira's in danger! She's here somewhere!

  • No one noticed that they were footprints of Me going to a direction. They didn't even know that I was a ghost, I was finding something that will bring me back to normal and wouldn't be a Change Of Hearts spirit or a ghost.

    At the place I was walking...

    Me: *Sits* W-What happened to me? *Sees the future* Am I wearing the Millennium Necklace Ishizu gave me? *Looks at my neck* I'm not... *Saw somebody* W-Wh are you....Somebody help me.... *Drops unconsciously*

  • Me: (some blood coming out of my arm) what was it inside my arm

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I'm not sure what it is.

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm still panicking in pain) I can't it really hurts Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Kiva, it's gonna hurt more if you don't hold still. Now please don't move.

    Kiva (you): Okay.

    *then Kelly manages to get the something painful out of your arm*

    Kelly: Okay, it's out.

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm starts panicking in pain)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Kiva, just hold still! Please!

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) that's why I'm panicking about it Kelly (tears coming out of my eyes)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I think i got it. Hold still!

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow Kelly it hurts so much

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I'm trying to get it out, okay?

  • Seto: Please, anybody. Have you seen this girl? I need her, she's my sister.... *Shows a picture of me*

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow the inside of my arm hurts (tears coming out of my eyes)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: *starts trying to get rid of whatever painful thing is in your arm*

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow Kelly there really is something painful inside my arm it hurt really bad

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I'll try to get it out, okay?

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow see Ayame is painful inside my arm

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) I don't know Ayame there's something painful inside my arm like some kind of sign

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Ayame: Kiva...

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow Kelly there really is something painful inside my arm it might be a sign for me

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Ayame: *Walks to you guys* What are you guys doing here? Oh, I am Ayame. I'm a half wolf and half human. *Goes to Kiva* Oh! Ms! What happened to your arm!?

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow still hurts inside my arm and no Seto I haven't saw her

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) ow Kelly i got a feeling that something painful is inside my arm like some kind of sign for me

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Mokuba: *Follows Seto*

    Seto: Mokuba! What are you doing here!? It's dangerous!

    Mokuba: I heard that sister was lost, our neighbors witnessed that Keira was the card Change Of Hearts.

    Seto: You mean! She's a Change Of Heart spirit!?

    Mokuba: Yes. Our neighbors also said that she was quiet and was heading to this place.

    Seto: *Talks to Kiva* Your arm....What happened...? Did you saw this girl? *Shows a picture of me*

  • Me: (still feeling something painful inside my arm) (thinking) maybe its not on my arm but I'm feeling something painful inside my arm which is a sign or something for me

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Seto: *Goes to you guys* Keira! Keira! ....Guys....Have you seen a girl with long black hair, white skin, and black eyes? *Shows a picture of me* She's my sister. I heard a crash, and when I went to the direction of the crash, I saw....Blood. She might be kidnapped or....Killed....Or Suicide....

  • Me: (still felt something painful inside my arm) ow

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 *then you start to feel less pain*

    Kelly: Just about done.

    Kiva (you): Okay.

  • @tigerman531 Me: *Appears as the Change Of Hearts and walks away on a direction* *Whispers I am now...A ghost....I need to....Find....Something....Bri­nging me back to....Human....*

  • Me: (still felt something painful inside my arm) ow

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Me: *Appears and smiles softly*

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Almost done, Kiva.

  • Me: Kelly please be gentle i felt something painful in my arm

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I will. *starts cleaning your wound*

    Kiva (you): ...! *groans in pain, but not entirely*

    Kelly: Sorry.

    Kiva (you): Don't worry about it.

  • Me: ow Kelly that hurt

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Sorry. *looks at your hurt arm again* Your wound isn't entirely bad, but it's showing signs of infection. I need to clean it out. Hold still.

  • Me: (feels something painful in my arm again) ow (still has hand on my painful arm) i don't know what's going on with my arm like I'm feeling something painful on my arm

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Hm. Let me see. *looks at your hurt arm* Hm...

  • Me: yeah woo we did it (but then feels something painful in my arm) ow (put hand on my painful arm)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: You okay?

    Kiva (you): Yeah. 

  • Me: Belladonna harmed you Zoe that's bad

  • Me: what happened next Zoe

  • Me: what do you mean Weeble Zoe can't be curse

  • Me: don't worry Zoe I'll get you out of the mud (but then i get stuck in the sticky mud too) oh man now I'm stuck

  • Me: Zoe are you alright

  • Me: hey Ivy give back Zoe to us right now

  • Me: Huh? Where's Ivy?

    Ivy: *uses the soul card*

    Me: AHHH!!! Atem... I'm scared...! AHHHH!!!! *had soul absorbed into the card*

    Yugi: *sees me get absorbed* Oh no! Ivy got Zoe!

    Weeble: Oh gosh no!

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: Oh no, you don't! Soul Release!

    *my spell destroys Ivy's soul card and sends Zoe's back into her body*

    Zoe (you): Thanks, Tigerman.

    Zoe's Eevee: Eee. *licks your cheek in a worried way*

    Zoe (you): It's okay, Eevee. I'm all right.

    Atem: Okay. Now to take you three down once and for all!

    Ivy: Now what do we do?

    Butch: I don't know.

    BlackGatomon: I say run away!

    *then Butch, Ivy and BlackGatomon ran away in fear*

  • @tigerman531 My Eevee: Eee!

    Me: You said, Eevee. *hugs Tigerman* Thank you for saving me, Tigerman. If it wasn't for you, I would be in the cramped card with fear.

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: *hugs you back* No problem. Now let's make sure they do leave! Pikachu, Thundershock!

    Weeble: Charizard, Flamethrower!

    *the combined attacks hits Butch, Ivy and BlackGatomon and sends them flying*

    Butch, Ivy and BlackGatomon: AAHHH! We're not Team Rocket, but we're blasting off again!

  • @tigerman531 Me: Next time, don't take their lines! Yay! *notices my foot is stuck in sticky mud* Oh! I'm stuck!

    Riolu: Wait, how--- Oh.

  • @Yamisangel456 Impmon: Where did that mud come from?

  • @tigerman531 Me: How should I know? Aw man! It's like the time when Pooh got stuck in Rabbit's house hole!

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: Leave it to me. *uses my psychic powers to get you out of the mud*

    Zoe (you): Thank you, Tigerman.

    Me: You're welcome.

  • @tigerman531 Weeble: I think someone's put the curse on Zoe.

    Me: Yeah, just like the Black Samurai.

    Riolu: The what?

  • @Yamisangel456 Patch: What do you mean "curse"?

  • @tigerman531 Yami Zoe's Spirit: Zoe, you might as well tell them.

    Me: *thinking* Alright. *to the others* Since I've ran away, I was sobbing and crying because of the incident. I went to the good looking house on a stormy night. I knock on the door and the old peasant woman opened the door. I begged for shelter. Of course, she welcomes me in. I told her what happened. She told me that he didn't mean it. But I told her yes he does.

  • @Yamisangel456 Piglet: Oh, d-d-dear.

  • @tigerman531 Me: Before I left, she magically vanished from her cloak and reappeared as the enchantress. She's a dear friend of the Dark Magician Girl. She's upset of the darkness inside my heart. She places the spell on me, making bad things happened to me instead of others I've met. Before she left, she decree that if I understand to love my brother again and earn his love in return than she'll break the spell. As I left, the curse has begun as Belladonna harmed me.

  • @Yamisangel456 Charlie: ...!

    Itchy: ...!

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain still hugging Kelly still hurt very badly and not letting go) i know Kelly. but you and me are hurt very badly and I'm scared Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I'm scared too, but we can't stay like this. Can you still use your healing powers?

    Kiva (you): I'll do my best.

    *then you managed to heal both Kelly and yourself*

    Kiva (you): We're okay now, but we better be careful.

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain still hugging Kelly still hurt very badly and not letting go) what do you mean Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I mean about not telling you i was your sister sooner.

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain still hugging Kelly still very badly hurt and not letting go) what is it Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I'm sorry about this.

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  • Me: (still in a lot of pain) (crawls to Kelly (still in a lot of pain like me) hugs Kelly and never lets go) see I'm hugging you and I'm not letting go Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Weeble: Sis, you okay?

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: ...

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain) Kelly I'm going to use my last energy to crawl to you and hugging and not letting going

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Kiva...

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain) Kelly i feel so weak I can't move (groans in pain)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I can't move either...

  • Me: (still in a lot of pain) Kelly you and me are feeling weak and in a lot of pain (groans in pain)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: ...

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  • Me: (in a lot of pain) Kelly are you in a lot of pain like i am

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Yeah... *groans in pain*

  • Shere Khan: hahaha it looks like you two mice are in pain and with that I'll give you two more pain (uses his sharp teeth that hurt Kiva (me) and Kelly even more)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: *yells in pain*

    Kiva (you): *yells in pain*

    *then the Penguins attacked Shere Khan*

  • Shere Khan: (gets angry then uses his claws that hurt Kiva (me) and Kelly very badly)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: *groans*

    Kiva (you): ...

  • Shere Khan: (starts attacking Kiva (me) and Kelly)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 *but you and Kelly punched him together*

  • Shere Khan: well well well two mice hugging each other so they won't get hurt I'm afraid the two of you will be more than hurt. just two killed mice

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Do your worst!

    Kiva (you): Yeah! We're not scared of you!

  • Me: (hugging Kelly) is Shere Khan still there

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I see him.

  • Me: gosh (sees Shere Khan) uh Kelly you and me should hug each other hoping that Shere Khan won't see us

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Right.

  • Me: why would you be worried about me Kelly

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Cause if i lost you like we lost our parents, i wouldn't know what to do.

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  • Me: thanks. so Kelly why did you say that you were scared

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: Cause i felt worried that i was gonna lose you.

  • Me: okay Kelly besides my left arm is hurt very badly and in a lot of pain (puts my hand on my very badly hurt left arm)

  • @KivaMarieTurbo1 Kelly: I got it. *uses the first aid kit and the wrap bandages around your arm* There.

  • Me: Alright, Ivy! You asked for it! Hiya! *charges at Ivy*

    Ivy: *dodges and punches me*

    Me: AHHH!!! *got up* You're tougher than I remember. I'll give you that.

  • @Yamisangel456 Ivy: You think that's impressive? Check this out. Go, Tangela! *throws a Poke Ball, letting out Tangela*

    Tangela: Tangela!

  • @tigerman531 Me: I have no Pokemon! I'm in big trouble!

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: Here. *gives a poke ball* It's a female Eevee.

  • @tigerman531 Me: Thanks, Tigerman!

    Ivy: Aww, letting Tigerman give you a pokemon? How touchie!

    Me: You leave my friends out of this! Eevee, spot light! *chucks the pokeball*

    Female Eevee: *comes out from a pokeball* Eeevveee!!

    Me: Whoa, I called her out!

  • @Yamisangel456 Ivy: I'll admit your Eevee's cute, but my Tangela's better. Tangela, Energy Ball!

    Ivy's Tangela: Tan! *uses Energy Ball*

    Zoe: Eevee, evade it!

    Zoe's Eevee: Eee! *avoids Tangela's Energy Ball, then uses Dig*

    Zoe (you): *thinking* Eevee using Dig. I hope it works.

  • @tigerman531 *my Eevee jumps from the underground and attacks Tangela dodges*

    Me: What the--?

    Ivy: Attack!

    Ivy's Tangela: *attacks my eeveer*

    Me: Cheater!

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: Thanks, Tigerman! I needed that!

  • @Yamisangel456 Me: No problem! You know what to do.

    Zoe (you): Okay! Eevee, Tackle attack!

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  • Me: (comforts Kelly) its okay Kelly. your little sis is here (gets out my first aid kit then uses the wrap bandages on Kelly's very badly hurt leg) there you see Kelly (hugs Kelly) i promise everything is going to be okay (then uses a little bit of my clothing then wraps it on my very badly hurt left arm) (hugs Kelly again)

  • Me: (touches Kelly's very badly hurt leg) yep it looks like your leg is hurt very badly (puts hand on my very badly hurt left arm) ow like my left arm that hurts very badly

  • Me: (at a safe spot with Kelly) there you and me will be safe here Kelly (puts my hand on my hurt left arm) here let me see if your leg is hurt very badly Kelly

  • Me: (still hurt very badly) Kelly is there any part of you that is hurt very badly

  • Kowalski: but skipper what about Kiva and Kelly

    Private: Kowalski is right skipper Kiva and Kelly are hurt very badly

  • Injurin Joe: grrr now you're going to get it weak mouse (punches me really hard)

    Me: (hurt very badly from Injurin Joe's hard punch) Kelly I'm hurting

  • Injurin Joe: (smacks Kelly out of the way) its time for me to hurt the weak mouse

    Me: (scared tears coming out of my eyes in fear)

  • Me: (notice that Kelly is in front of Injurin Joe) Kelly what are you doing in front of Injurin Joe

  • Me: (still scared still has tears coming out of my eyes in fear)

    Injurin Joe: (smacks Kelly off then gets ready to hurt kiva (me))

    Me: (scared starts crying in fear again)

  • Me: (scared tears coming out of my eyes in fear) be careful Kelly

  • Injurin Joe: so what your mouse pal is a weak mouse

    Me: (hugging Kelly tightly still crying in fear)

  • Injurin Joe: finally now to get my revenge on you weak mouse

    Me: (starts crying in fear)

  • Me: (tries to run but trips over something) Kelly (saws injurin joe coming this way crawls backward then stops injurin joe getting closer to me) help

  • Me: (still scared hugging Kelly tightly)

  • Me: (scared hugging Kelly tightly) guys Injurin Joe will come back for revenge on me. I'm scared

  • Our heroes with Tom and others climbed up the tree.

  • Nicole: ...

  • Wynn: Any sign of Injurin' Joe?

  • Trill: So do I.

  • From 0:06 to 0:50, Our heroes listened to what the people chitchatted about Mutt. And the sheriff with the head of the church and Becky's father were heading for the crowd to hang him. Everyone gaped at this. And this time, our heroes with Tom and Huck are trying to think of something.

    Tom: We can't let them hang Mutt.

  • And that something shaking the ground, is the greedy, corrupted Injurin' Joe heading our heroes' way to see the sight of the hang of Mutt. Worst of all, Shere Khan, Brer Fox and Brer Bear were with Joe!

  • Zorron: (whispering) It's Injurin' Joe! And he's not alone.

  • Michael: (whispering) What are those blockheaded creeps doing here now?

  • Gabriel: (whispering) I'm betting they're here to watch Mutt get hung at the hang.

  • Stinger: (whispering) We better keep an eye on those creeps while we watch what's gonna happen to Mutt.

  • The villains were going to watch this. And Injurin' Joe sits down to where our heroes were watching from the top of the tree.

    Oh and I just skipped the argument between Brer Fox and Brer Bear, pal. Just that you'll know.