this is great
17EdwardBella 2 years ago
Oh, was I supposted comment here? At about 3:50ish, it says disgraceful, but you say crazy. I think crazy goes better. Just FYI. And I think this story would be much better if you added a fight scene. If you need ideas, I'm full of 'em.
maximumjustice 3 years ago
this is great
17EdwardBella 2 years ago
Oh, was I supposted comment here? At about 3:50ish, it says disgraceful, but you say crazy. I think crazy goes better. Just FYI. And I think this story would be much better if you added a fight scene. If you need ideas, I'm full of 'em.
maximumjustice 3 years ago