That said, if I were being really critical I would ask for a bit more variation in the left hand. But maybe that's the style that you want, so I don't know. But you've got a patterned bass in the left, nice descending line, but I may like steady variation that geleidelijk develops into something . . . that comes to a climax maybe with an "answer' to what the thing was developing to.
But that's just an idea. I hope that you get a good grade, and I repeat, the most important thing is to just keep writing! A lot of good stuff in this piece.
Great Michael. Most importantly I would say just to keep writing. Do that in your own style, your own way, despite whatever critiques that people give you.
O.k. I wrote this whole thing, and I used too many characters. So you have to read the last one first, then read the next and the next . . . . .
NeRienII 1 year ago
That said, if I were being really critical I would ask for a bit more variation in the left hand. But maybe that's the style that you want, so I don't know. But you've got a patterned bass in the left, nice descending line, but I may like steady variation that geleidelijk develops into something . . . that comes to a climax maybe with an "answer' to what the thing was developing to.
NeRienII 1 year ago
But that's just an idea. I hope that you get a good grade, and I repeat, the most important thing is to just keep writing! A lot of good stuff in this piece.
NeRienII 1 year ago
Great Michael. Most importantly I would say just to keep writing. Do that in your own style, your own way, despite whatever critiques that people give you.
NeRienII 1 year ago