well, it wasnt bad. but i didnt think it was that funny either. maybe something more surprising or weird. doing nothing to partying and back to nothing have done before.
The editing was good, the dialogue was smooth, and the comedy was able to deliver. It would have more impact if you had a better mike. Overall, an excellent start for a series.
Need a boom mic for the part on the couch. Editing during the party part was good. Don't talk over each other, it's hard to understand. The umbrella is funny.
Don't wave the balloon in front of your face. It's OK overall. The overall episode is a little disjointed between the couch scenes and the party part. The line with Patrick Swayze documentary on TV is funny.
I feel the magic betweeeen you and Iiii. lol
Rubyjuke719 3 years ago
lol
Nutella XD
sweethomealabama150 3 years ago
*sings hungry eyes*
:D
naty214 3 years ago
This is very good!
66richardson 3 years ago
I think it would of been funnier if there was more people at the party.
cn560 3 years ago
well, it wasnt bad. but i didnt think it was that funny either. maybe something more surprising or weird. doing nothing to partying and back to nothing have done before.
derssan 3 years ago 2
The editing was good, the dialogue was smooth, and the comedy was able to deliver. It would have more impact if you had a better mike. Overall, an excellent start for a series.
AluminumJacket 3 years ago
Yeah..
Some advice
Good editing, get that boom mic.. Cut down on just chillin' and talkin', unless you make it as funny as this first episode is..
Good work
codaquinn12 3 years ago
yeah need a boom stick or something but t was pretty funny
woolfdevile 3 years ago
the couch and accents are memorable, i kinda got lost after the drinking in the party :(
it felt like u were forcin to have a conversation and rushing, but everything else was normal, its a nice effort
sherwinjtb 3 years ago
Um, some advice on how to improve...
Need a boom mic for the part on the couch. Editing during the party part was good. Don't talk over each other, it's hard to understand. The umbrella is funny.
Don't wave the balloon in front of your face. It's OK overall. The overall episode is a little disjointed between the couch scenes and the party part. The line with Patrick Swayze documentary on TV is funny.
TheGreat2000 3 years ago
erm.... it made me laugh (at the end) but I'm not sure why.
*befuddlement*
0161sweetlikehoney 3 years ago