i think the scene would improve with more distinctive beat changes. there really weren't any distinctive ones i could see. really listen to each other. what do you WANT from each other in every moment? if you don't want something from partner, then that moment is dead. What is the arc of the scene? Nina, why are you even there in the first place? Nina, you need to also listen to what you are saying. you just called yourself a bird. let yourself hear the craziness of that. let that resonate.
i think the scene would improve with more distinctive beat changes. there really weren't any distinctive ones i could see. really listen to each other. what do you WANT from each other in every moment? if you don't want something from partner, then that moment is dead. What is the arc of the scene? Nina, why are you even there in the first place? Nina, you need to also listen to what you are saying. you just called yourself a bird. let yourself hear the craziness of that. let that resonate.
singeileen 11 months ago 2