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From: Rubenmon1
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  • @FutureWHC Once I perfect the voices, I will. ;)

  • what the fuck?

  • @nrom what did you epxect? The ORIGINAL LYRICS?

  • Nice it made wanna tel a gurl how much I love her

  • dont even rhyme

  • whos the luky girl

  • Wow homie. Lol. You got the melody, my attention, and the instrumental I was searching for. Try to keep going.

  • wrong llyricas deff wrongg

  • @alwayswaterford He said he wrote them himself. Obviously not the lyrics to the actual song, which would be pointless on the lyrics video.

  • @BanqoutNiqqas okiess

  • its kool dude foreal tho

  • dont try to sing dis without volume...you get really lost, believe me

    source-*experiance*

  • Good lyrics dude.

  • it is hard to come up with your version so credit where credits due mate nice lyrics

  • good lyrics man keep it up!!

  • dis is sooooooooo good its so sweet you should realy sing it to yr girlfriend lol

    :)

  • You shouldn't mess with the bruno's magic :/

  • your bars are pathetic mate.. growsomeballs.

  • @jstanist that's right mate!! i agree! Lol

  • @jstanist Why don't you make one then if you think you have balls puss.

  • @jstanist hahaha dude growsomeballs??? he had the guts to put his own lyrics up!!! and its a song called "nothing on you" which is about girls and it was one of the biggest songs in the world at one point! Growing balls to rap on this would be the dumbest idea ever! haha and the pathetic part...your just too funny i swear! xD as for the person who made this...GOD FUCKING JOB!!! :D

  • HOLY COW!!! wtf is this shite? look! i like the instrumental but to be honest, the lyrics sucks so bad. you should've not changed the lyrics. you should've sticked to the original cos i was reading the lyrics and they went nowhere, honestly! its got no direction mate! but nice try though man. keep it up and keep on working hard. who knows you might be able to come up with good meaningful lyrics on ur upcoming remakes. haha

  • almost cry :(

  • love it hey can you put the Hook next time plzz (:D)

  • dude!! thumbs up!!!

  • The lyrics are nice but honestly, I don't think the lyrics flow smoothly with the song here and there.

    "Without you I wouldn't be livin"

    "Till I can embrace you" etcetc

    I mean you can try to make it fit in, but it'd sound a little funky if you'd cram a buncha words in one line then the next its smooth again, yknow?

  • @angelheaven7 . that's right matey! and that's what i was talking about on my comment. i mean, am not trying to be sarcastic here! matter fact, this dude is kinda talented in his own ways and i appreciate the instrumental. its just the lyrics that i think has no direction. haha. just saying anyway. xD

  • you know thoses are not the lyrics, right?

  • @yugogel You know, you shouldes to read the title more accurately and the description.

  • Wow! This is by far the most amazing karaoke so far. And the lyrics that you wrote are wonderful. I mean, wo wouldn't want to have that sung to them!? Great, well done! I bet you are a good singer aswell, you should upload some videos of you singing.

    I'm doing a movie maker of my photography, would you mind if I used this in it? I will give credit to you if you want :)

  • @SkyPhotographer101 Sure go right ahead. Thanks for the comment.

  • I've NEVER seen such a HORRIBLE SONG like this. Don't know why those 26 people like this one. what's wrong with you, people? you guys have serious problems and i know you need help. god bless xD

  • @icesauce39 What's wrong with them liking some thing like this? For any thing what's your problem? You don't even give a reason of why you dislike it and why they should dislike it. You're probably one of those lame people who listen to "Lame Wayne" huh?

  • haha, nice lyrics. i could give respect to it.

  • Rubenmon1 u r amazing ur lyrics are sick i luv dis it inspired me to make my personal remix of the song n it turned out pretty gud , but not nearly as gud as urs gud work n srry 4 all those HATERZ like @chikwin tht dnt know gud music wen he or she hears it

  • u know wat! if u didnt like it then y even comment.l it just proves tht u stupid, ur also a natural born hater get lost and find ears so u can hear and experiance wat good music cos this personal remix is beautiful mr or ms. @chikwin cuz u suck

  • This sucks dick.

  • @chikwin Then why the fuck you saw it bitch? Go suck nuts.

  • Some of the lyrics are fantastic, but some didn't go with the beat :\. Other than that, I loved it :D

  • can you send me the instrumental

  • @Altoplayer90 Sorry I don't have it.

  • :( It reminds me of my old gf. She was MY world, until she broke up with me. I always tell her "I love you" but she doesn't want to hear it...

  • your lyrics+ horror= horrible song written by you

    

  • @MsSmileyface91 Thats better then me! I can't write crap!

  • @MsSmileyface91 that equation doesn't make any sense.

    you+writing comments=suck like hell :P

  • @Rubenmon1 guess wat i know the president and you don't want to know what can happen to you

  • @MsSmileyface91 shut the fuck up. write some songs if you think this one is bad. u fag

  • @MsSmileyface91 not a damn thing cuz im a marine and a songwriter in my spare time too. Ruben, keep doin ur thing. MsShittyface, go become the next Monica Lewinski and become the butt of every joke for the next decade. Better act right before you get smacked right

  • @MsSmileyface91 HAHAHAHA! Wow, this made me laugh. ooo, wow, quite an imagination you got there, how old are you? 9 or 10?

  • Really people, really? You don't know how to read? Did you not see the part that says "with lyrics I wrote"? That's it I need to put a note that says "Yeah the title says it all, they're not gonna be the original lyrics!"

  • if u didn't put ur lyrics on it i would use it on facebook

  • @lherby93 oh well, your loss. ;)

  • Ek!!! Wrong lyrics! What the heck

  • im sorry but i didnt like the lyrics

  • dude.....sing ur lyrics brah

  • You + song writing career= meant to be

  • i love ur song GOOD JOB

  • dang ur BEAST at dis!

  • like the video guys!

  • my most fav song

  • This is Amazing! ypu are very talented!

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