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  • dat ass

  • pleeaaseee pretty please make a second chapter? it seems like u abandonded this story and alot of people want to know what happens.. :(

  • What's with all the jewish douche faggots?

  • love it.. but i hope you're still alive somewhere.. is it writer block?

  • are you still posting...

  • are you gonna post the second chapter?

  • Are you still posting this? Cause I really like chapter uno!

  • yo u still postin

  • That's cute. I really like it!

    I like joe. His character draws you in. (:

  • IDK if i commented on it alread, but I love it already! Please post soon!

  • This was amazing! I can tell this story is going to be awesome :D

  • aww i can tell this is gonna be such a cute story!!!!!!!

    your stories are always amazing anyway ^_^

    love it xxx

  • *exciting

  • how old is Joe in this?

    Great chapter though. it's so exiciting, to see you post!

  • He's a senior in high school, so probably 17 or 18.

  • great chapter! (: its great that your uploading again!!! (:

  • awesomefalicous!

  • It's pretty good. Not as good as "Untitled Longing" in my opinion but it's good. Are you gonna continue writing that story?

  • OMG you are so perfect!

  • Please post more !! I'm. Addicted. Need. more. story...!! : D POOOST! <3

  • oooooo i loooooooved it! awesome!

  • love :D

  • i love this! post more soon :D

  • amazing. you're so talented.

    can't wait for more(:

  • That was really good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series =)!

  • Tis good... you're an amazing writer... even though its not much anyone can tell it'll be a great series again... :)

  • i love it already! :)

  • AWESOME :)

  • oh wow sounds awesome

    love it!!!

  • love love love it!

  • I LOVE IT!!

  • I'm really liking this chapter..& I'm sure I'll love it! :]

  • sounds good!

    I wonder if he walks in on anything he shouldn't...

    post soon xx

  • [==

  • I like this storey already it's amazing

  • aww :) soo cute :D

  • like this story

  • Facebook Like. (:

    haha. awesome, awesome first chapter :)

    Can't wait for moree

  • Sounds awesome so far ! :)

  • Love it';D

  • Ahhhh Love it!!! I'm going to like this A lot

  • Yayy!

    I LOVE your stories you are an amazing writer!

    Can't wain for the next one(:

  • It sounds really goooood :)

  • sounds amazing so far;p

    ii,m so happy that you're back!

  • i'm glad you posted something! i missed your writing so much!! thank you!! i loved this so much!

  • i think im going to really like this story:}

  • Really Good :)

  • this is really good. i love it.

  • Thank the good lord you're back. :)

  • sooo cute!

    wait what about the other series with summer? that was the best! i miss it :(

  • soo good

    what song is this?

  • Love it, but I love whatever you write. =)

  • YAY! your back in business! ;)

    lovvved itt! sooo amazing! ha

    please post mroe sooon! :D

  • looks good so far:]

  • Very cute. I like the whole 'in love with your best friend thing'. :)

    Can't wait for more.

  • Aw, I like it. It's kind of a twist on the classic 'I'm in love with my best friend' only it's more like 'I'm in love with my tutor' haha. "Winter in Jersey is rough." Tell me about it! I swear this is the most snow I've ever seen in one winter! Haha =)

  • Sounds really nice so far. Joe's obviously way head over heels for this girl. I just wonder if she feels the same for him. From what I read, doesn't sound like it.

    I have a feeling Peyton will tease Joe about Carter. She probably already does.

    Great first chapter.

  • it's so cute so far && i think Peyton may be doing something Joe won't approve of. maybe i'm reading too much into it, maybe not. in any event, i loved it. pmsp <3

  • yayyy, Happy you wrote :)

    It was goood, Can't wait for chapter 2 :)

    Your stories are the only ones I read now, I don't find the other ones good enough hehe

  • amazing as always....im sooooo glad you're back!

  • i loveee it already :D<3

    pleasseeee post more(:

  • woot woot woot!

  • awesome start! love it so far :)

  • Haha, soooo good! Did you use your iphone? When I use my iphone and upload it i get those random cut offs too! But you know, it's whatever! Haha :))))) POST SOON

  • Love it!

  • this is amazing! please post more again soon!! i missed your stories :(

  • PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

  • Omg this is SO good.... post soon

  • Very intrigued! (if that's the word, my spelling check likes to mess with me on a regular basis) I've heard you talk about this story for a while now and I'm glad you decided to share it. It and your amazing writing skills.

    Love you.

  • I love the story already : )

  • i reeeeeallllyyyy like it!!!

    post more!

  • hmmm.... i really like this and it's only the forst chapter! =]

    but you can make anything work! =]

  • oo.. am liking this stroy already ;)

    loved itt. post moree

  • loved itttt :)

    i'm reading IWK over again heehee

    but yeah, keep it up, i like it

  • Awesome! Next please.

  • Aw! Joe & Carter are so cute :) Hopefully they'll be a couple soon!

    I can tell I'll love this story, I love all of your writing :D

  • sooo good :D

  • great job! aw joe and carter! wht a cute little couple they (hopefully) will be! great job girl :)

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