Aw, I like it. It's kind of a twist on the classic 'I'm in love with my best friend' only it's more like 'I'm in love with my tutor' haha. "Winter in Jersey is rough." Tell me about it! I swear this is the most snow I've ever seen in one winter! Haha =)
Sounds really nice so far. Joe's obviously way head over heels for this girl. I just wonder if she feels the same for him. From what I read, doesn't sound like it.
I have a feeling Peyton will tease Joe about Carter. She probably already does.
it's so cute so far && i think Peyton may be doing something Joe won't approve of. maybe i'm reading too much into it, maybe not. in any event, i loved it. pmsp <3
Haha, soooo good! Did you use your iphone? When I use my iphone and upload it i get those random cut offs too! But you know, it's whatever! Haha :))))) POST SOON
Very intrigued! (if that's the word, my spelling check likes to mess with me on a regular basis) I've heard you talk about this story for a while now and I'm glad you decided to share it. It and your amazing writing skills.
dat ass
Shawnsingerftw23 1 month ago
pleeaaseee pretty please make a second chapter? it seems like u abandonded this story and alot of people want to know what happens.. :(
musicismylife1597 1 year ago
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VcfddrGytru 1 year ago
What's with all the jewish douche faggots?
blairjere1 1 year ago
love it.. but i hope you're still alive somewhere.. is it writer block?
EliANDLilmel 1 year ago
are you still posting...
ramansidhu007 1 year ago
are you gonna post the second chapter?
emster2012 1 year ago
Are you still posting this? Cause I really like chapter uno!
silverguitar92 1 year ago
yo u still postin
iffy66 1 year ago
That's cute. I really like it!
I like joe. His character draws you in. (:
xXxiheartjbxXx 2 years ago
IDK if i commented on it alread, but I love it already! Please post soon!
silverguitar92 2 years ago
This was amazing! I can tell this story is going to be awesome :D
MyNameIsMusicGirl 2 years ago
aww i can tell this is gonna be such a cute story!!!!!!!
your stories are always amazing anyway ^_^
love it xxx
alohaxahola 2 years ago
*exciting
HealthyMarshmallows 2 years ago
how old is Joe in this?
Great chapter though. it's so exiciting, to see you post!
HealthyMarshmallows 2 years ago
He's a senior in high school, so probably 17 or 18.
iPodluvr287 2 years ago
great chapter! (: its great that your uploading again!!! (:
GossipDramaQueen 2 years ago
awesomefalicous!
Summiewhoo123 2 years ago
It's pretty good. Not as good as "Untitled Longing" in my opinion but it's good. Are you gonna continue writing that story?
Live4Jesus08 2 years ago
OMG you are so perfect!
FoShizzleMyJonas96 2 years ago
Please post more !! I'm. Addicted. Need. more. story...!! : D POOOST! <3
synne16 2 years ago
oooooo i loooooooved it! awesome!
novideos102 2 years ago
love :D
raybansforlifee 2 years ago
i love this! post more soon :D
chazzleFanFics 2 years ago
amazing. you're so talented.
can't wait for more(:
lovecloudbby 2 years ago
That was really good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series =)!
JBEpicFan 2 years ago
Tis good... you're an amazing writer... even though its not much anyone can tell it'll be a great series again... :)
MsDramaQueen913 2 years ago
i love it already! :)
melissaxxnicole 2 years ago
AWESOME :)
JBKevinJonas 2 years ago
oh wow sounds awesome
love it!!!
eskimogirl147 2 years ago
love love love it!
ajT15JoBros 2 years ago
I LOVE IT!!
Whiteflowereddress 2 years ago
I'm really liking this chapter..& I'm sure I'll love it! :]
xxlilxxkweenxx 2 years ago
sounds good!
I wonder if he walks in on anything he shouldn't...
post soon xx
23jellyfingers 2 years ago
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CarysLOVESjonas 2 years ago
I like this storey already it's amazing
nonaboo208 2 years ago
aww :) soo cute :D
alyssacc5196 2 years ago
like this story
iffy66 2 years ago
Facebook Like. (:
haha. awesome, awesome first chapter :)
Can't wait for moree
MakeItLovely 2 years ago
Sounds awesome so far ! :)
CrazyChick2606 2 years ago
Love it';D
McDreammmy 2 years ago
Ahhhh Love it!!! I'm going to like this A lot
sarahsmoothie123 2 years ago
Yayy!
I LOVE your stories you are an amazing writer!
Can't wain for the next one(:
irongirlstri 2 years ago
It sounds really goooood :)
TinaMarie08xo 2 years ago
sounds amazing so far;p
ii,m so happy that you're back!
EliANDLilmel 2 years ago
i'm glad you posted something! i missed your writing so much!! thank you!! i loved this so much!
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
i think im going to really like this story:}
bettyboop3465 2 years ago
Really Good :)
nickjonasismyhero988 2 years ago
this is really good. i love it.
erickaandemily 2 years ago
Thank the good lord you're back. :)
poly820 2 years ago
sooo cute!
wait what about the other series with summer? that was the best! i miss it :(
zefronbleu101 2 years ago
soo good
what song is this?
SKATERgirl0x 2 years ago
Love it, but I love whatever you write. =)
mayandnickj4ever 2 years ago
YAY! your back in business! ;)
lovvved itt! sooo amazing! ha
please post mroe sooon! :D
krenke015 2 years ago
looks good so far:]
jonaslovex2 2 years ago
Very cute. I like the whole 'in love with your best friend thing'. :)
Can't wait for more.
musicismylife500 2 years ago
Aw, I like it. It's kind of a twist on the classic 'I'm in love with my best friend' only it's more like 'I'm in love with my tutor' haha. "Winter in Jersey is rough." Tell me about it! I swear this is the most snow I've ever seen in one winter! Haha =)
JonasLove916 2 years ago
Sounds really nice so far. Joe's obviously way head over heels for this girl. I just wonder if she feels the same for him. From what I read, doesn't sound like it.
I have a feeling Peyton will tease Joe about Carter. She probably already does.
Great first chapter.
madison50364 2 years ago
it's so cute so far && i think Peyton may be doing something Joe won't approve of. maybe i'm reading too much into it, maybe not. in any event, i loved it. pmsp <3
cecesingergrrl 2 years ago
yayyy, Happy you wrote :)
It was goood, Can't wait for chapter 2 :)
Your stories are the only ones I read now, I don't find the other ones good enough hehe
gaudetst 2 years ago
amazing as always....im sooooo glad you're back!
audieleann 2 years ago
i loveee it already :D<3
pleasseeee post more(:
iluvriverphoenix95 2 years ago
woot woot woot!
ewizzle06 2 years ago
awesome start! love it so far :)
kellyx2211 2 years ago
Haha, soooo good! Did you use your iphone? When I use my iphone and upload it i get those random cut offs too! But you know, it's whatever! Haha :))))) POST SOON
LoveBeautifulFiction 2 years ago
Love it!
softballchick2197 2 years ago
this is amazing! please post more again soon!! i missed your stories :(
LoveLiveLife0107 2 years ago
PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D
misslyss96 2 years ago
Omg this is SO good.... post soon
PushinMeAwaystory 2 years ago
Very intrigued! (if that's the word, my spelling check likes to mess with me on a regular basis) I've heard you talk about this story for a while now and I'm glad you decided to share it. It and your amazing writing skills.
Love you.
jessicannamaria 2 years ago
I love the story already : )
brothersjonasluver2 2 years ago
i reeeeeallllyyyy like it!!!
post more!
acoustichearts94 2 years ago
hmmm.... i really like this and it's only the forst chapter! =]
but you can make anything work! =]
The2009hotgirl 2 years ago
oo.. am liking this stroy already ;)
loved itt. post moree
LoopyNatalie 2 years ago
loved itttt :)
i'm reading IWK over again heehee
but yeah, keep it up, i like it
nvbrox16 2 years ago
Awesome! Next please.
insaneJBluver1 2 years ago
Aw! Joe & Carter are so cute :) Hopefully they'll be a couple soon!
I can tell I'll love this story, I love all of your writing :D
xxDasweetiexx 2 years ago
sooo good :D
ScottishJonasLove 2 years ago
great job! aw joe and carter! wht a cute little couple they (hopefully) will be! great job girl :)
lrx001 2 years ago