One thing I think you could have improved: the bullet wound in Cassie's head. From that angle, it would probably have made a long furrow in her skull, rather than a direct hit.
Bad: Scope should wave more. It's so hard to make it steady especially when you're just holding it like that guy was. Lead guy took an unrealistic amount of blunt head trauma and still was perfectly fine. Shakey cam is poorly done - camerawork in general is kinda suck. Good: Chick knocking the guy down and lead guy kicking him in the head, and the blood spray on camera was bad ass.
Scope was set on a tripod, guy was an expert sniper.
Also, it wasn't THAT much head trauma. In moments of stress or adrenaline, one can deal with it better than you'd think.
Fight scenes were MUCH better in this. Previously, they were okay, but a bit weak: especially the sound effects and acting. You fixed all of this. Great job.
Awesome! I've been waiting for this for a while. Nice job! Not sure if you know but this is Shadow013 from fxhome. And you used my logo I made when you first started this. Nice! Does this mean there's going to be more? Once again, good job!
One thing I think you could have improved: the bullet wound in Cassie's head. From that angle, it would probably have made a long furrow in her skull, rather than a direct hit.
TerminalVelocity14 1 year ago
@TerminalVelocity14 Ya true. When I saw you mentioned Cassie's bullet wound I thought "crap!" Do you know why?
CarpeDiemSeries 1 year ago
Should I know why? Cause I don't.
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Now I feel stupid... :P
Is this a trick question? Haha.
TerminalVelocity14 1 year ago
@TerminalVelocity14 the hole was added digitally :) i was afraid someone was gonna yell FAKE! lol
CarpeDiemSeries 1 year ago
Gosh, really? It blended perfectly; I was totally fooled.
TerminalVelocity14 1 year ago
This is pretty awesome. Nicely done!
shuja87 1 year ago
Bad: Scope should wave more. It's so hard to make it steady especially when you're just holding it like that guy was. Lead guy took an unrealistic amount of blunt head trauma and still was perfectly fine. Shakey cam is poorly done - camerawork in general is kinda suck. Good: Chick knocking the guy down and lead guy kicking him in the head, and the blood spray on camera was bad ass.
JoeSlayer 1 year ago
Scope was set on a tripod, guy was an expert sniper.
Also, it wasn't THAT much head trauma. In moments of stress or adrenaline, one can deal with it better than you'd think.
Fight scenes were MUCH better in this. Previously, they were okay, but a bit weak: especially the sound effects and acting. You fixed all of this. Great job.
TerminalVelocity14 1 year ago
Awesome! I've been waiting for this for a while. Nice job! Not sure if you know but this is Shadow013 from fxhome. And you used my logo I made when you first started this. Nice! Does this mean there's going to be more? Once again, good job!
thedarkshadow13 1 year ago
@thedarkshadow13 I honestly forgot who made the logo lol though I knew it was someone from fxhome. thanks again for the 'Chosen' poster!
CarpeDiemSeries 1 year ago