Thanks for the constructive criticism. However I don't care if you read the rest. You are right about one thing though, you should have read the rest of the it before commenting on the whole story idea. Btw if your gonna say " just work on it a little" you should probably explain what you think I should work on in the story, you know be specific.
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bookrazy 3 years ago
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bookrazy 3 years ago
Thanks for the constructive criticism. However I don't care if you read the rest. You are right about one thing though, you should have read the rest of the it before commenting on the whole story idea. Btw if your gonna say " just work on it a little" you should probably explain what you think I should work on in the story, you know be specific.
wwe21luver 3 years ago
OH MY JONAS WHAT IS IT!!!
I woudl SOOO be freaking out if the other chps werent up..pfft im freakin out anyways! ghaha xD
LOVE IT! :D
JonasFanFic16 3 years ago 2
I love your story!!!! keep writing
almostgothicblonde 3 years ago 2
Aww Thank you! I actually am gonna post one tomorrow, I have been alittle busy with exams lately. Thanks for reading =D
wwe21luver 3 years ago