Bittersweet Symphony Rap Remix (Freeverse)

[sqadron2386]

eh

[dinkylicous1234]

i reckon u should be hired as a profesh lyric writer, no disrespect im just sayin u got talent with the pen :)

[springbokk4life]

Needs some work but respect i liked it. It's not the easiest song to write to.

[88psych]

hey man, i like your flow, it could use some work but what the hell do you mean by "free verse"

[XxKIDtemperxX]

what is wrong with all of you cant you say anything positive about him that was amazing

[iToySoldierx]

Nice :D 

[jrbaba101]

you fuckin suck 

[feel194]

your wall's green.

[volunteernation16]

no

[Amber1025Nicole]

those are REALLY green walls......

[Kryptsanies]

Work on your cadence, its off beat at times

[Rawrrith]

Pretty good =] I approve haha

[heldenhose]

I like it. :)

[111TheTHING]

dude you are awesome. dont listen to them troll haters who are dissin u. im pretty sure your better than alot of proffesional rappers out there. infact, you should make your own songs man.

[ziigzag260]

thaz good man..

[jjjjjohnnyboy]

hey forget the haters u did awesome

[Tonglee12]

pretty long :P pretty good :)

[The254drew]

started off to strong but its good

[OriginalKanyeTPain]

yeah i liked the white dude better

[GHEM900]

NICE!!!!!

[TeeFlick]

lmfao hilarious dude

[Hardstones42]

You blew my mind!! Any tips on how to become a better rapper??

[TheSynthesisProject]

dope free man, feeling the flows but man the color of your room hurts my eyes lol

[DeLaCasaStudios]

Nice dude keep it up...

[EyNGe1]

I like the lyrics bro, keepin it real...check out my stuff, keep it up

[summerpl0x]

i acctually listen to this as a proper song is there any download?

[juncle12]

how shit lol ... what a fool

[locksk813]

Skillz

[ronok33]

sick flow :D

[thizzlers123]

starts at 0:38

[DJCokeTV]

Nice, man.

[abc123mell]

i like your walls :)

[SamuraiFoochs]

I do have to say though, you and 6stringedcanon sniping at each other over this is kinda weak, man. It's not about arguing, arrogance, and bickering, it should be about artistry, appreciation, and collaboration. It's music. We all love music, whether it's rap, rock, techno, classical, whatever.

Music should bring people together, not create rivalries, at least not unfriendly ones.

[SamuraiFoochs]

This fucking owns. God damn man, this is wicked.

Keep it up.

[KingLouis51]

this is awesome mate, sick lyrics and sick flow

brilliant

<thumbs up>

[Cocoo73]

yeah boiiii! Siiiiick!

[htownryguy]

pretty solid, ill be watching for this guy

[jelsmusic]

nice man

[EternalSurvivor]

im white.

[miller15us]

that was sweet dude if this was on the radio i be downloading it now lol

[summerpl0x]

i fucking lve this man where can i download?

[golondrinasul]

Chinata te cres que cantas mu biien y eres maas tonto pa que subes esto

gilipolllas

Si estas en españa vete a tu puto pais fatal mal y no te arrasques el pelo es que tienes piojos

ni tampoko la nariz

[golondrinasul]

Chinata te cres que cantas mu biien y eres maas tonto pa que subes esto

gilipolllas

Si estas en españa vete a tu puto pais fatal mal y no te arrasques el pelo es que tienes piojos

ni tampoko la nariz

[golondrinasul]

Tu quue te cres si cantaas fatal chaval

vwete ala miirda flipao si estas en españa vete a tu outa paaiss maricon

[golondrinasul]

No te arrasques el pelo es que tienes caspa??

Tú que te crees chinata de mierda

Cantaaaaas fataaaal!

[golondrinasul]

No te arrasques el pelo es que tienes caspa??

Tú que te crees chinata de mierda

Cantaaaaas fataaaal!

[mitsubishi12391]

this good man no hate keep doin it homie

[kadukie111]

you two should have a rap battle (Y) have one week to write a rap trashing the other guy and post it, i'd like to see that. message me if you do.

also if you want to see a crazy rap check out bo burnham's "i'm bo yo"

you could both learn from him

[6stringedcanon]

calm yourself, you fool no one.

[Yell0wFace]

reply back with something better or dont reply back at all. you got shitted on.

[6stringedcanon]

this dispute woulda subsided had you stopped replying or replied saying things to the tune of "you're right". but you embarrassed yourself giving those examples of multis, haha i wont blame you if you take that comment down.

[Yell0wFace]

oh God, from what you just replied with, i now know that you obviously don't know anything. i also just checked out one of your songs and i thought you had crazy multis, but you don't! lmao, you have like 2 multis at most, and some parts have none. you also flow off beat at some points, but you keep doing what you like. im just telling you right now, go learn about what multis are, then come back to me kid. also, learn about how rhyme schemes in rap work.

[Yell0wFace]

its the VOWEL in the words that make them rhymable. learn about it. tell me how some professionals can rhyme "style" with "down". there ARE exceptions to the rule, dumbass. honestly, you piss me off coz youre an ignorant punk who doesnt know ANYTHING, and comes here and tries to talk to me like he does. just stop embarassing YOURSELF, for the love of God. oh and its the WHOLE multi that makes it rhyme, dumbass. "THEORY of the MAN/ HEARING gets enHANCED"

[Yell0wFace]

and "LIGHT SHIT/ MIC STILL" are the words that are rhymable in their VOWELS. it takes time to learn about these things so i dont blame you. i see you as a dumbfuck, not becoz youre new and know nothing, but becoz youre ignorant and know NOTHING about how to rhyme, but come here busting out shit like you do.

take a fucken seat and listen to how GOOD artists rhyme, flow, deliver, and rap in general, then come back to me.

[Yell0wFace]

listen to dumbfoundead, waxandherbalt, d-pryde, traphik, prince ea. theyre ALL from youtube and they ALL rhyme multisyllabic just as well as i do, and they ALL rhyme through the VOWELS, not the word itself, at times.

my multis are WAYYYYYYYYYY more complex than your nursery ones, so PLEASE GET YOUR FACTS STRAIGHT BEFORE YOU COME BACK WITH SOME MORE BULLSHIT. PEACE

[unholyfarter]

@Yell0wFace yeah. word son :D

[6stringedcanon]

yo multi means multisyllabic RHYMES, those dont rhyme lol. theory of the man/hearing gets enhanced, horrible multi let alone rhyme, 3rd grade teacher taught me that was a close-rhyme (hence half assed rhyme). clearly have no chance.. that rhymes with advance, well done? too long for ya/two fonts taller, that doesnt rhyme does it? too and two does thats for sure. LIGHT SHIT/MIC STILL.. no comment. pads advancing/have no chance kid.. not grade but that was one of the best. still go/intro. AMAZING!

[6stringedcanon]

never compare yourself to eminem. never said shit about my superior vocab, you don't use multis, if you do they arent noticeable or wont pass as multisyllabic to the average rap listener. im harmlessly starting shit, i havent with anyone else, only you because you're an easy target, high traffic on views, so i picked on the little guy. sorry dont take it personal. people on here like you, props, but they dont listen to big L, easy e, pun, so dont let it swell your head.

[Yell0wFace]

LOL! my multis arent noticeable?! theory of the man/ hearing get enhanced/ ears havent advanced/ clearly have no chance/ too long for ya/ 2 fonts taller/ light shit/ mic still/ pads advancing/ have no chance kid/ still flow, still go/ been your intro

and my multis are HUGE, a lot are 4 syllables. i dont know what youre on, or if you even KNOW what multis are. judging by what you just posted there, you OBVIOUSLY dont know what youre talking about, kid. get your facts straight, punkass kid! LMAO!

[6stringedcanon]

dude some people are actually preferring your lyrics to mine. they likely prefer rick ross to canibus too.

[Yell0wFace]

you take this thing too seriously. i wrote this for the fun of it, and since then ive grown so much more. youre basically comparing jay-z in his prime to eminem, when he first began, which isn't fair coz eminem got so much better since then, obviously.i never heard your version, but youre a pretty cocky dude, so im assuming its gotta be decent. i read some comments on your video, and you may think you know bigger words, but i could whip out big words anytime, too. i just choose multis over vocab

[Yell0wFace]

oh, and regarding to that comment on your video stating that i got "punch". you saying that punch is nothing or minimal in rap is ignorant. there's a lot that goes into the art form of rap, such as your lyrics, how you flow, and how you present them. im assuming youre missing quite a few of these elements. and stop comparing yourself to how i was back in september. compare yourself to how i am now. i gaurantee that you'll get crushed.

[syntak1]

cute pictures

are you in a street bike gang?

[blazerluver]

Longest rap I've heard. Hah. Ma friends n i rap. But we usually go on for about 20 to 30 seconds. Damn ur pretty good especially rapping for 3 mins. 5 star. U got my respect. Keep it up.

[6stringedcanon]

in the first ten lines of my first verse i've got 22 solid rhyming words. you've got almost 30 in ALL of your verses. we can both admit that writing rhymes is easy. but like, bro, come on.

[ninjahelmets]

lmfaooo last comment made me laugh xD

epic win yell0wface ♥ you rockkkkk

[6stringedcanon]

ah you coward

[Yell0wFace]

@6stringedcanon next time, you'll get a better response from a person if you dont say shit like "ive got you by the balls" when you clearly dont.

[6stringedcanon]

yesss, nah i wanted to be rude enough so that you'd say something along the lines of "im better", see now we've got a healthy rivalry, and of course im gonna say my lines are better, but the point is to get other people making that call. it's humbling as fuck to see that yours as 2,100 and mine only like 50. accept that video response b and let others decide. even if people think you suck, negative exposure is exposure nonetheless, right?

[Yell0wFace]

@6stringedcanon ur a funny guy. chill on that. i made this song a long time ago. i gaurantee my current writing skills will wipe you, esp if these are old and you cant match them.

ppl will prob check you out if they read the comments anyways. if u want exposure, then make some diss tracks to dpryde or traphik. even if they hate you, negative exposure is exposure, nonetheless, right? i do music for other reasons, so peace whiteboy.

[6stringedcanon]

i think i spoke a bit too soon, i checked some of your other videos like drop the world, and you dropped that track on its fuckin head, you're a talented lyricist man.

[6stringedcanon]

yo you definitely have a dozen or so good lines, but i'll ask you to peep mine and hear the competition, cuz i think i've got you by the balls with my verses. i made a video response, if you decline i'll equate that to fear, if you accept, dope.

[deejayhariii]

damn bro this is pretty sick! eyy where did you get the song without the lyrics?

[Yell0wFace]

@deejayhariii

i looped the part of the song that didn't have The Verve singing over it

[mattl103]

nice LOL!

[city0fj]

word man keep it up, its funny i was in the whip and took a video of me spitting to this beat. It's really dope to spit to actually haha 5*

[Slapppppp]

haha that was sick man

[ricxtereh]

Fair play mate, that was good (Y) 5 Star =)

[Toberoon]

jeah really good ;)

[tennisbru1]

pretty sick

[TheYungsantana]

word, that was nice

[puturwalkon]

sick song broo, umm u should make a vid for hyperaptive 20 bar competition check it out!

[Yell0wFace]

good looks. definitely gonna enter

[koolistpersonever]

i think your shit is hot make another video nigga i like it

[WeedSmokaz1]

nice chino

[BOBSTER00001]

NIGGGA SWEEEET!!!!!!!!

[hadeerxo]

that was really goooddd. amazing lyrics! i love this :)

[TechnoM1x]

MEH

[OlandBeatz]

sick. great lyrics

[HDrodz]

AMAZING JOB MAN! keep it up!

-Danny

[Switch613]

get ready..

[garrettnb]

this is fantastic man, good job

[Certifyde444]

The instrumental is mellow as hell, dope verse too. keep it up fam.

[33Blitz33]

if you wanna check out original song for the instrumental, its Bitter Sweet Symphony by The Verve. (a classic)