A non basic land that draws you a card! and it dosent even come into play tapped, do you know anything about magic at all?! i thought your blue dark ritual was bad but thats just stupid. news flash, you dont EVER get cards for free,
iv not looked too much just wanted to see your blue cards and i have to say dark ritual is broken in black, makeing it blue is stupid! blue is the strongest colour in magic, have you not seen high tide it was broken enought! take it out, come up with your own ideas and flavour for them.
4 paneswalkers traveled between the multiverse long ago and combined their power to create a place of their own a world to their liking they had no reguard for the laws of nature and they combind the past with the future. It was a Paradise Until a large black portal opened and began to devour their world.
An army unlike any seen before came out of the portal and began destroying this world so the 4 planeswalkers called on Urza and others to help save this place
No, I didn't even mention any individual cards. Maybe you're thinking of some other comment you deleted as well? Actually, you insulted me by telling me to "learn then basics", which is pretty ironic.
Removing the color pie removes color definition, makes the game muddled, and destroys one of the core principles of the game thematically and mechanically for no benefit. It's just a broken concept.
Just read some of MaRo's "Making Magic" columns if you need to understand why.
its not like i am saying that all sets should break the color pie just this one give monodecks a better shot of working
planeswalkers are creatures that became like god and have great power and in a world of their own design i see it being a place were there is no limitations at all
the stroy plays like this one planeswalker doesnt have enough power to create a world but four do and four did however their mistake in breaking natures law created the void
By breaking the color pie, completely I might add, you make the whole idea of colors pointless. You might as well just make all of the cards white, or blue, it just doesn't matter anymore. It does not make Mono decks more viable,because there aren't really any colors. There's no restriction in your set, restriction breeds good design (once again, read MaRo's articles).
You're focusing on a novel idea to the point of ignoring balance, format, flavor and cohesion.
no i did not completely break the color pie the base is still there i did make a few cards here or there that have different colors then what they might be and i think wizards bases a set off a novel at least when they were in fat packs im sure they did it would be alittle hard to do it in reverse.
Here's some advice on a card with regard to balance. Church of Valla: Six mana is going to get you 5 life, every 5-10 turns. That's just worthless man. You might get 1-2 pops off it per game, maybe. Why would you ever run this over other, simpler, quicker more reliable life gain?
Try this:
Church of Valla. 2W
Enchantment. Uncommon.
Landfall - Put an Age counter on ~
During your upkeep, gain 1 life for each Age counter on ~
Almost every other card has out of color abilities, creature types, etc. . if not more. I'm ignoring French Vanilla like Origg Knight, because they should just be limited filler.
Timespiral already revived a bunch of old mechanics. If you want to make a set, make new mechanics, be creative. The whole colorless "void" thing is kind of jumping the shark.
Novels are based off sets. The ideas are generated in creative, and the novels are written during and after development.
Colorless creatures and other spells is a creative move it opens many new doors and what is your beef with origg knight in fact why you so focused on white anyhow as i understand it white has not been doing so well from what other people say
to powerful and besides this set is mostly designed to increase any type of counters most the planeswalkers even your way sometimes by turn 3 your dead anyhow not saying all the cards are good but you could pick at every set out an find cards like that and what does church have to do with age at least a follower counter makes sense.
If you're fishing for compliments, that's fine, just say that. I gave you an honest critique, and I haven't made a video because I just don't want to. I'll post my set on the boards when I finish it, if I ever do.
no you insulted a card yes on that card i admit i did make a small mistake but that does not make it retarded i made the faerie cards for my wife she loves that race
A lot of your cards are worded very poorly. Some don't work the way you want them to. Some don't work at all (like the Church). Also, the Werewolf's creature type should be "Human Wolf". Basic Lands do NOT have colors, and the textless versions should still have land type lines. The Unicorn should be a Unicorn. "Untap all tap"? Your Landfall is an improperly formated bastardization of Landfall and Quests. Blood Moon is a card. Too many keywords. Chaos.
sorry my mistake yes there is a blood moon but its not like the card is coming out they could alter the name to Full Blood Moon also i am wondering why you say the church doesnt work
The Church doesn't work because you play lands and very rarely put them on the battlefield. It needs to be reworded to function the way I think you want it to.
the words may not be just right but as long as you get the idea The church cards are not quest cards but the act like a quest card and as long as you get the idea of what they do thats all i wanted im sure if wizards were to make this a real set it would be corrected before release.
A non basic land that draws you a card! and it dosent even come into play tapped, do you know anything about magic at all?! i thought your blue dark ritual was bad but thats just stupid. news flash, you dont EVER get cards for free,
NivMizzetFiremind 2 years ago
iv not looked too much just wanted to see your blue cards and i have to say dark ritual is broken in black, makeing it blue is stupid! blue is the strongest colour in magic, have you not seen high tide it was broken enought! take it out, come up with your own ideas and flavour for them.
NivMizzetFiremind 2 years ago
Not a bad set. Good job. Ignore the ymtc enthusiasts. If you aren't part of their clique you won't ever be able to design cards to their liking.
Pokemon4WoT 2 years ago
The story part 1
4 paneswalkers traveled between the multiverse long ago and combined their power to create a place of their own a world to their liking they had no reguard for the laws of nature and they combind the past with the future. It was a Paradise Until a large black portal opened and began to devour their world.
An army unlike any seen before came out of the portal and began destroying this world so the 4 planeswalkers called on Urza and others to help save this place
bakura2382 2 years ago
No, I didn't even mention any individual cards. Maybe you're thinking of some other comment you deleted as well? Actually, you insulted me by telling me to "learn then basics", which is pretty ironic.
Removing the color pie removes color definition, makes the game muddled, and destroys one of the core principles of the game thematically and mechanically for no benefit. It's just a broken concept.
Just read some of MaRo's "Making Magic" columns if you need to understand why.
DetroitDregs 2 years ago
its not like i am saying that all sets should break the color pie just this one give monodecks a better shot of working
planeswalkers are creatures that became like god and have great power and in a world of their own design i see it being a place were there is no limitations at all
the stroy plays like this one planeswalker doesnt have enough power to create a world but four do and four did however their mistake in breaking natures law created the void
which you find out in the third set
bakura2382 2 years ago
By breaking the color pie, completely I might add, you make the whole idea of colors pointless. You might as well just make all of the cards white, or blue, it just doesn't matter anymore. It does not make Mono decks more viable,because there aren't really any colors. There's no restriction in your set, restriction breeds good design (once again, read MaRo's articles).
You're focusing on a novel idea to the point of ignoring balance, format, flavor and cohesion.
Keep the color pie.
DetroitDregs 2 years ago
no i did not completely break the color pie the base is still there i did make a few cards here or there that have different colors then what they might be and i think wizards bases a set off a novel at least when they were in fat packs im sure they did it would be alittle hard to do it in reverse.
bakura2382 2 years ago
Here's some advice on a card with regard to balance. Church of Valla: Six mana is going to get you 5 life, every 5-10 turns. That's just worthless man. You might get 1-2 pops off it per game, maybe. Why would you ever run this over other, simpler, quicker more reliable life gain?
Try this:
Church of Valla. 2W
Enchantment. Uncommon.
Landfall - Put an Age counter on ~
During your upkeep, gain 1 life for each Age counter on ~
DetroitDregs 2 years ago
Almost every other card has out of color abilities, creature types, etc. . if not more. I'm ignoring French Vanilla like Origg Knight, because they should just be limited filler.
Timespiral already revived a bunch of old mechanics. If you want to make a set, make new mechanics, be creative. The whole colorless "void" thing is kind of jumping the shark.
Novels are based off sets. The ideas are generated in creative, and the novels are written during and after development.
DetroitDregs 2 years ago
huh jumping the shark explain please
Colorless creatures and other spells is a creative move it opens many new doors and what is your beef with origg knight in fact why you so focused on white anyhow as i understand it white has not been doing so well from what other people say
bakura2382 2 years ago
to powerful and besides this set is mostly designed to increase any type of counters most the planeswalkers even your way sometimes by turn 3 your dead anyhow not saying all the cards are good but you could pick at every set out an find cards like that and what does church have to do with age at least a follower counter makes sense.
bakura2382 2 years ago
If you're fishing for compliments, that's fine, just say that. I gave you an honest critique, and I haven't made a video because I just don't want to. I'll post my set on the boards when I finish it, if I ever do.
DetroitDregs 2 years ago
no you insulted a card yes on that card i admit i did make a small mistake but that does not make it retarded i made the faerie cards for my wife she loves that race
bakura2382 2 years ago
Awesome cards i love the idea bring all the mechanics into one set
i love fairies
Shaunsmuse 2 years ago
sorry werewolf Shaman is a 1/2 creature
bakura2382 2 years ago
A lot of your cards are worded very poorly. Some don't work the way you want them to. Some don't work at all (like the Church). Also, the Werewolf's creature type should be "Human Wolf". Basic Lands do NOT have colors, and the textless versions should still have land type lines. The Unicorn should be a Unicorn. "Untap all tap"? Your Landfall is an improperly formated bastardization of Landfall and Quests. Blood Moon is a card. Too many keywords. Chaos.
Metallix87 2 years ago
sorry my mistake yes there is a blood moon but its not like the card is coming out they could alter the name to Full Blood Moon also i am wondering why you say the church doesnt work
bakura2382 2 years ago
The Church doesn't work because you play lands and very rarely put them on the battlefield. It needs to be reworded to function the way I think you want it to.
Metallix87 2 years ago
the words may not be just right but as long as you get the idea The church cards are not quest cards but the act like a quest card and as long as you get the idea of what they do thats all i wanted im sure if wizards were to make this a real set it would be corrected before release.
bakura2382 2 years ago
They act like bad quest cards. Compare the Church to Sunspring Expedition.
Metallix87 2 years ago
which one you talking about dude this guy has some nice ideas my favorite is his church of the beast
Shaunsmuse 2 years ago
I'm referring to the white Church.
Metallix87 2 years ago
sorry you did not like them but why are you so stuck on that set of cards as long as you get the point
bakura2382 2 years ago