Puttin' Down Pins

[cmulvanyvideo]

Viewers will forgive you for bad video, but not for bad audio. Bad audio hurts the ears. When doing an interview without a wireless mic, get the camera fairly close to the subject--less than two feet. Do the interview in a quiet spot. You have lots of good bowling shots, but it gets a little redundant. One shot missing is a wide establishing shot of all the lanes. It not a sexy picture, but it give the viewer a sense of place.

[macloo]

Pacing and shot variety are nice. You have a lot of good shots that change it up well, like the close shots of the ball. You also have some nice cuts that match the action. The audio quality on the interview could be better.