the story is fabulous as well as the way as it was presented to the audience. Camera's work pretty good for me. The biggest objection is the animation itself, it is really bad, there are not actions or movements to transfer feelings to your audience. I would love to remake this short story, I definitely like it.... what do you think?
jethro check my vid - ur phone isn't working so thought u might get this....
heavyheavyheavy2009 2 years ago
the story is fabulous as well as the way as it was presented to the audience. Camera's work pretty good for me. The biggest objection is the animation itself, it is really bad, there are not actions or movements to transfer feelings to your audience. I would love to remake this short story, I definitely like it.... what do you think?
blenderguy2008 2 years ago
Go ahead! the story concept is an adaptation of a Gary Larson Comic, but reference me if you use the same story line sequence or similar characters.
IllEagle2007 2 years ago
Hey Jethro, definately one of the best animations I've seen and I went to around 90% of the presentations, great job!
Goldiebear 2 years ago
Really nice one! Looking forward to see your presentation, dude!
Thumbs up!
SoundsLikeDust 2 years ago
Cheers man! hope you enjoyed the presentation! sorry cant figure out who you are from your profile or videos...
See you for round two monday and tuesday!
IllEagle2007 2 years ago
hi Jethro
nice work... l really like the sunrise... keep it up dude........
ollybb 3 years ago
Congrats!
I like the story, the choice of shots, camera work. the characters, colours., wallpaper, and so on.
(just the moon looks a bit like a egg stuck into the mountain.)
Can't wait to see your next animation!!!
take care
paulo x
1970mateus 3 years ago