@phunkphresh209 Thanks for the feedback man, but could you be a bit more specific. What exactly didn't you like? the lyrics, the content, we're you able to follow what they we're about? and if so is that what you didn't like about it? i guess what i'm trying to say is be a bit more constructive, it would help me out allot. thanks, have a nice day.
for real bro dats some fuckin talent u got...i like to come up w/flows myself but none of em compare to yours..i aint bad n ive had people compliment me on my flows b4 but i could never imagine being able to spit like u do..its seriously amazing to hear the words u use n how quickly your able to make em flow together n make since all at the same time n i fuckin envy u bro..u seriously need to get up w/someone whos got a studio n can throw down some sick ass original beats for ya n make some cd's
Some of your bars seemed like there were too many syllables in them or the beat was too fast. Nonetheless, you had a good flow, but your lyrics blew my mind. You're crazy rhyme schemes and repetition of vowel sounds were used effectively, as opposed to a lot of people that just throw around rhyming words but make no sense. Keep it up dude, you got serious skills
dude this is sick!! I am a new 14 year old rapper, watch listen to my raps, rate them, comment them with advice, and SUBSCRIBE to me please! I need the support, THANK YOU!!
Jesus christ.. this one's mind blowing. I love the "Just do it" and 2:57..I think you should make a proper surreal music video for this rap. Best lines: "Theres nothing left for her to see thats taken from her secret land" and "To ask what was his only regret the moon cries and dark grey clods fill the night sky "
Terrible
LaMotteSwag 4 months ago
Good lyrics ... That's all ...
ezseedy 5 months ago
BRITISH GUYS CANT RAP!!!!!!
Unicorn22324 7 months ago
You are the worst rapper ever. Do me a favor and stop fucking up good beats
Mx5322 7 months ago
Once again you manage to fuck a perfectly good beat up jeezuz christo do ur self a favor guy n quit this shit already...real talk tho
phunkphresh209 10 months ago
@phunkphresh209 Thanks for the feedback man, but could you be a bit more specific. What exactly didn't you like? the lyrics, the content, we're you able to follow what they we're about? and if so is that what you didn't like about it? i guess what i'm trying to say is be a bit more constructive, it would help me out allot. thanks, have a nice day.
JackMoranRain 10 months ago 6
immortal technique meets white boy!!
chazzywatto 11 months ago
Cool, Check my channel for crazy remixes and Hot beats
iAmTwistedd 1 year ago
Yo he iz black mon!
jacksite2007 1 year ago
for real bro dats some fuckin talent u got...i like to come up w/flows myself but none of em compare to yours..i aint bad n ive had people compliment me on my flows b4 but i could never imagine being able to spit like u do..its seriously amazing to hear the words u use n how quickly your able to make em flow together n make since all at the same time n i fuckin envy u bro..u seriously need to get up w/someone whos got a studio n can throw down some sick ass original beats for ya n make some cd's
nickatnight287 1 year ago 8
and yet breathe in :D hu! hoh!
TheChangenick 1 year ago
reminds me of immortal technique, were do you live bro? i know some people that know some people..
kyletheweedman 1 year ago
this isnt a freestyle, its more like a poem sped up haha.
xTaKeNoTeS 1 year ago
Some of your bars seemed like there were too many syllables in them or the beat was too fast. Nonetheless, you had a good flow, but your lyrics blew my mind. You're crazy rhyme schemes and repetition of vowel sounds were used effectively, as opposed to a lot of people that just throw around rhyming words but make no sense. Keep it up dude, you got serious skills
MoomooT3hCow 1 year ago
your good you need sum real recording software
lookman373 1 year ago
very good, the lyrics were well thought out and the flow wasn't too bad at all, props.
rememberthisoneyo 1 year ago
Wriggggerrrrrrr! :^)
RyderFromGwinnett 1 year ago
nutty guy!!
88thetruth88 1 year ago
Fuck, dude, wow. Nice
cameronHIM 1 year ago
average delivery
fattymallen 1 year ago
Thanks for the great video.....
Excellent ! : )
IamHelenKeller 1 year ago
It seems to me that the big artists don't say everything, but your skill shows.
Mrseanbeebe 1 year ago
you are very good,man!!!;)
Espeedy7 1 year ago
That was just mind blowing.
hitmanboss23 1 year ago 4
good job bro u killed it make more
yunipo12 1 year ago 4
Lol this is sweet :) Whenever i try to rap i chew off my tongue D:
TheVanishingCheese 1 year ago
u look like adam sandler xD
XiannyBoy 1 year ago
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what's the name of that beat?
cartoonblock 1 year ago
cool rhymes. reminds me of the Dublin hip hop group "Messiah J & The Expert"
cartoonblock 1 year ago
Damn man hell yeah do ur thing fo real!!
outsider628 1 year ago 2
classic dre instrumental
its'all aboot the chronic
legalizethegreen 1 year ago
very impressive how you did this live, and the whole story made sense.
good shit man subd homie
city0fj 1 year ago 3
yo man, great job!
Prodybeat 1 year ago
You seem to really enjoy what you are doing, keep it up. Your music was enjoyable, thanks for the request.
xWookiee 1 year ago
this fool hella sucks rapping isnt for you. you look hella funny the way you rap to ha ha im high but some of these youtube rappers are funny.
KASPERLOCC 1 year ago
dude this is sick!! I am a new 14 year old rapper, watch listen to my raps, rate them, comment them with advice, and SUBSCRIBE to me please! I need the support, THANK YOU!!
YoundWones 1 year ago
Ay thats a crazy flow u got goin in there bro. Real chasey. Keep that shit up man. Lemme know if u wanna collab sum time
TeamBring1t 1 year ago 3
dope.
Crisleyva1 2 years ago
good work bro. 5 stars
crazyvideo206 2 years ago
Jesus christ.. this one's mind blowing. I love the "Just do it" and 2:57..I think you should make a proper surreal music video for this rap. Best lines: "Theres nothing left for her to see thats taken from her secret land" and "To ask what was his only regret the moon cries and dark grey clods fill the night sky "
I like when music tells a story.
JamesDeansGirl1 2 years ago 8
@JamesDeansGirl1 what are u black
HARLEYPARMENTIER 1 year ago
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this is actually horrible
uksoccer77 2 years ago
kl vid
cheeseychips33 2 years ago 2