Darkspy72: Thanks for the nice remark... that was written of course by Tammera
(1Aware1) who is really starting to get on my nerves because she is only 19 and she can write circles around me :P - seriously, she is worth a sub and like I say in the video - she is very under-rated... she prints all her words in the side bar and is just... amazing... her and MsWriteNow are two people really worth checking out if you are looking for poetry with real content...
I am so glad I waited to see this when work week was over and able to enjoy it! (Brat)David is the best interpreter of others writings for sure! mahalo both of you.
I think the fact that someone that clearly loves it, but has none of the insecurity attached to having written it, reads it really brings out the esquite beauty of it.
Thanks for reading this; I can appreciate why you like it. "to eyes which pan a quiet ceiling to catch shadows
dancing in the corners of a moonlit hotel room"
I read this poem again, and again, and again and wondered at the beauty of language to convey such thoughts and the splendid mind that captured them in words.
Perhaps I should feel envious of her writing ability but I don't... I just feel joy.
Peter, yea, the mark of something great it it stands up to repeated listenings... It took me longer to memorize this than most other things I've done.... and I never got tired of Tammera's words... she's kinda a brat though :p - oooh I hope she's reading!
TRUTH is the most hurting thing sometimes it leeds to selfdestruction BUT to live for thruth is the only thing to live on no matter what happends.thank you brother for posting this.
oh yeah and FAITH but thats sometimes another story we have to carry.
totally love her writing style. she is my new favorite. after you of course. ;)
healthyaddixion 2 years ago
Thank you for showing me this! :)
leftgreenthumb 2 years ago
I like this piece. she is a really good poet.
Midknyghtchild 3 years ago
Now that is poetry. Your voice lends itself well to reading poetry.
Darkspy72 3 years ago
Darkspy72: Thanks for the nice remark... that was written of course by Tammera
(1Aware1) who is really starting to get on my nerves because she is only 19 and she can write circles around me :P - seriously, she is worth a sub and like I say in the video - she is very under-rated... she prints all her words in the side bar and is just... amazing... her and MsWriteNow are two people really worth checking out if you are looking for poetry with real content...
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Just did and have to say your a good man David!
visionghost 3 years ago
see? this is what happens when i get bombed with shares and i miss the important ones!! ^_^ excellente!!...
elviradark6 3 years ago
I am so glad I waited to see this when work week was over and able to enjoy it! (Brat)David is the best interpreter of others writings for sure! mahalo both of you.
merickinhawaii 3 years ago
david, you have taken a beautiful poem and have given a great rendition of it.
*****
Easy PS I'm on my way to her channel.
ezseeker 3 years ago
I just LOVE the way you read this poetry! I don't know who, but you remind me of somebody~ hmmmm........???
Anyway, terrific job on a beautiful poem! I will definitely check her out~
(don't wanna get bitten by Mone O.O yikes! :)
sweetqueento3 3 years ago
SweetQueen: Mone knows a rabbit lover when she sees one... she won't bite you... unless you cut off the carrots and caviar! :p
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Your reading of this poem really adds to it.
I think the fact that someone that clearly loves it, but has none of the insecurity attached to having written it, reads it really brings out the esquite beauty of it.
Good work.
poesho 3 years ago
Gd work family! Keep em coming!
JusSample 3 years ago
its fantastic!
EtaForsaken 3 years ago
Eta: Thanks... I had good material to work with... :)
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Excellent reading, David, and of course I always enjoy 1Aware1's poetry.
Tom
tjkoz22 3 years ago
Nice poem thanks for sharing
tristatecredit 3 years ago
tristatecredit: Thank 1Aware1 for the lovely poem... I am just the dork reading it :P
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Beautiful poem!
LaReinaMargay 3 years ago
LeReina: There is something about these words that get under your skin... I'm glad Tammera let me do her poem...
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Cheers! You are too funny. Always make me smile. I love poetry so your channel is great.
AcidEntertainment 3 years ago
Thanks right back to you. I like Acid. I mean, Entertainment... I like AcidEntertainment is what I meant to say... Peace
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
You like the fun stuff, huh? Too funny. You are very unique!
AcidEntertainment 3 years ago
A very nice poem, nice reading too *****stars;)
Kabuki0009 3 years ago
Fine rendering of a fine work, Mr. Curtis. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
great imagery, great reading as usual.
AntaresInScorpius 3 years ago
Interesting poem. And well read as always.
happy2oblige 3 years ago
Thanks for reading this; I can appreciate why you like it. "to eyes which pan a quiet ceiling to catch shadows
dancing in the corners of a moonlit hotel room"
I read this poem again, and again, and again and wondered at the beauty of language to convey such thoughts and the splendid mind that captured them in words.
Perhaps I should feel envious of her writing ability but I don't... I just feel joy.
Regards, Peter
nordicsky 3 years ago
Peter, yea, the mark of something great it it stands up to repeated listenings... It took me longer to memorize this than most other things I've done.... and I never got tired of Tammera's words... she's kinda a brat though :p - oooh I hope she's reading!
I am pure evil :P
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
filled with evil, lol, your a brat, okay no you arent, you did a reading of my poem, and you never got tired of it, so i guess you are not. damn. lol
1Aware1 3 years ago
Well read. Awesome poem.
flameoflifebookhouse 3 years ago
Love her stuff. This is a great reading of this poem
InmediasMe 3 years ago
InmediasMe: Thanks... I've read yer stuff and think you are a somewhat interesting writer.... for a brat...
Actually, I think if you increased your video output to one a century - there is no question you would be the best poet on YouTube :P
I am getting desperate now... I figure if maybe I get you mad enough - then maybe you will grace us with more of your masterful work....
ps: I meant "brat" in a good way. :p :p :p
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
wow, awesome!!!
cabbitness1983 3 years ago
Very nice! And very well read!
christopherinsc1981 3 years ago
that is vivid- am hanging on every sylabel-quirky how you draw one in- you would make one hell of a hypnotist- stunning-I'm speachless...thanks
flatted5th 3 years ago
You read this so well...such a well written poem too...you grabbed my attention with the first few words
Robby
robby63 3 years ago
Robby63: Thank you... this is a very well written poem... I did so many takes of this because I did not feel like I could do it justice...
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
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Jumpsoundmusic 3 years ago
neato burrito.
elena95 3 years ago
Wonderful Video
Feelings64 3 years ago
Very good poem!
Djunisijevic 3 years ago
whenever i hear you read a poem i think of bukowski's "bluebird".
smoking by an open window
beside a metal typewriter
offering him a beer
and asking it to come out
Barklord 3 years ago
I'll check out her stuff!
Barklord 3 years ago
Very good. It's your presentation that kept me watching. Nice job.
Speaking of job...
And that had better be Chivas, not some sort of flavored diet cola that you exist upon.
PlayboyHerbie 3 years ago
just a super poem
xxxxx CDmagz
CDmagz 3 years ago
Well done!! soft reading. It brings to the poem.
janeczka 3 years ago
Very well read David ( as usual)!
I'm checking her channel right now !
5 Stars *****
Hans :o)
colamoonpig 3 years ago
Very nice poem, and very nice delivery.
Hugz
Zel
PoeticLioness 3 years ago
A nice poem and very nice delivery.
Zel
PoeticLioness 3 years ago
Very very good poem.
I'll check her out and subscribe.
kel2corkey 3 years ago
TRUTH is the most hurting thing sometimes it leeds to selfdestruction BUT to live for thruth is the only thing to live on no matter what happends.thank you brother for posting this.
oh yeah and FAITH but thats sometimes another story we have to carry.
krtek13 3 years ago