What I love about your poems is that they're so comical, witty and deep. They're funny in that you discuss simple stuff that we all think about or deal with, but at the same time you have such a complex delivery. Keep em coming :)
To be honest I am somewhat of a nerd (but not even close to your long description). I didnt think something like this would come up. I was just trying to hook up with someone at school so I wanted to see what Youtube had to say about it.
heck yes it would! no. i know i'm not going to get 146 comments, and it is not my purpose in life but i would very much love the attention. deoderant a devine gift
Very fine writing in here and your deliver makes my delivery...I don't know...look frightening. I need some of your grace. I'm watching all your videos!
wow, that was amazing! i've watched it like 5 times already. :) you can tell it's from the heart, and it honestly really speaks to me. i love the sticks and stones part. favorited and 5 stars *as always :P*
Oh wow. if I was a talented poet I would have been able to do the same video - exept for the name of the girl and the part with upgrading to contact lenses...
brilliantly done, and your mad piano skills did quite well to acompany your spoken words.
p.s.: Do you have a clue why I usualy dont like spoken poems but love yours? I haven't maybe I heard the wrong people speak wrong words to often before.
well i decided a few years ago that i would get good at poetry. and while most people don't like to judge poetry, i do. i probably judge myself harder than anyone else but poetry for me as about talking to people. you probably don't enjoy people talking at you (as most spoken word is) but the people that talk to you it seems are the most enjoyable to watch.
thanks for your kind comment. it's not talent.. i practiced alot and studied and okay a little bit of talent
i think there is some truth in the sticks and stones line... as a victim of a verbal assault you have to give less credit to people.. at the same time remember your words may hurt people
What I love about your poems is that they're so comical, witty and deep. They're funny in that you discuss simple stuff that we all think about or deal with, but at the same time you have such a complex delivery. Keep em coming :)
TheBambieyes 2 weeks ago
"Upgrade your glasses to contacts" uh...some of us actually LIKE four-eyes'
TheBambieyes 2 weeks ago
You're almost too good haha
pajamadude15 1 year ago
This Is REALLY GOOD !
xLaniiFreshhx 1 year ago
wow, very deep.. I think this will help alot of peoples confidence in the future, and congrats on get the girl =')
mrOLaDIesMaN 1 year ago
Wow bro, that shit was deep. You sir, earned another sub.
wiseguy581 1 year ago
man i have to say this is one of my favorite one.
grixin 1 year ago
this was very...verryyyy nice.
no really.
God bless you.
i saw your "Thinking About You" thing...excellent work.
sportzdr5 2 years ago
dude i love this, im trying to pick up poetry.
McCLAX13 2 years ago
why did you tell us to wacth science fiction oh but great video
joshzilla1995 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
whats with all the talk about lotion...i stopped masterbating
shawnbeemer 3 years ago
dude, you don't understand that black people get ashy.
miketme 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
you are gay
mojsije1234 3 years ago
To be honest I am somewhat of a nerd (but not even close to your long description). I didnt think something like this would come up. I was just trying to hook up with someone at school so I wanted to see what Youtube had to say about it.
masturfun123 3 years ago
wow this was hilarious, dude ur pretty gay
doomroot13 3 years ago
glad you had a laugh.
fyi i do have a hot girlfriend now but it took being strait nerd awhile.
miketme 3 years ago
Dude, I almost cried. That was deep. Good job man.
OmegaJuicebox 3 years ago
you almost cried? what part?! haha, tear jerking poetry haha. i'm glad you liked it
miketme 3 years ago
I started to cry right around the middle and end of the poem.
OmegaJuicebox 3 years ago
your awesome
joshzilla1995 3 years ago
thanks
miketme 3 years ago
dude, that was deep
mathewwins 3 years ago
hah, wasn't spose to be deep. the rewrite is clearer
miketme 3 years ago
well thats not what i meant to say at the time, it just was nice and the style
BTW awesome piano playage!
mathewwins 3 years ago
this seems personal , but good
McCLAX13 3 years ago
thanks, ya it was a personal reflection. i was hoping others could relate
miketme 3 years ago
EXCELLENCE. I flashed back to fuckin middle school with this one. :D
Chihuahuii 3 years ago
I love This One!!! my Dude plz make one more about girlfriend i have a hard time with them
DarrellPilson 3 years ago
c wok. posting in youtoob. good vid was seen passing through
okeeffdp 3 years ago
hah, i'm glad you liked it. i have some other cool vids, i hope you check my channel
miketme 3 years ago
i'm just catching up on everything since I've been away. I love this video, its beautiful. Your vids keep getting better and better xxx
Maddoxhardcore 3 years ago
146 comments? would that fulfill your purpose in life? yeah- humans thrive on attention. deodorant is the devil.
waazchalker 3 years ago
heck yes it would! no. i know i'm not going to get 146 comments, and it is not my purpose in life but i would very much love the attention. deoderant a devine gift
miketme 3 years ago
Very fine writing in here and your deliver makes my delivery...I don't know...look frightening. I need some of your grace. I'm watching all your videos!
Lo
lobstfeld 3 years ago
haha,.. all of my videos? that might take a little while, you should have seen the smile your comment gave me.
honestly though i enjoy reading your poetry alot more than my own. i'm just a simple performer.
find some open mic's or slams and you're delivery will improve 100%
miketme 3 years ago
that was so good...then again all your stuff is good.
dmi32 3 years ago
haha, all of my stuff isn't good... just all that i'll let youtube see. you guys get my best!
miketme 3 years ago
hey I liked your video!!!
It was really cool & so sweet~ =)
desiree8602 3 years ago
hah 'sweet' i'm glad you think in sweet raine
miketme 3 years ago
i was trying not to be too melancholic. glad you thought it was good
miketme 3 years ago
really good, and kind of melancholic
helledusseda 3 years ago
definantly the scenario man, I know exactly what you're talking about... nice work 5-stars
8skyscraper8 3 years ago
i had a feeling i wasn't alone. glad you enjoyed
miketme 3 years ago
wow, that was amazing! i've watched it like 5 times already. :) you can tell it's from the heart, and it honestly really speaks to me. i love the sticks and stones part. favorited and 5 stars *as always :P*
oreosandcoffee 3 years ago
i felt so cool remembering the sticks and stones line, which really did happen. i guess i was drawn to poetry from a young age
miketme 3 years ago
love it mike!!! GREAT job!
janeinlights 3 years ago
thanks jane! love your new vid too
miketme 3 years ago
*****
nitehawk57 3 years ago
thankyou
miketme 3 years ago
oo mann second time i watched it and stilllll greattt poemmm man
realitybender2121 3 years ago
cool dude.. the more times i watch it the more i want to make corrections and additions. glad you like it
miketme 3 years ago
yeaaa
realitybender2121 3 years ago
Oh wow. if I was a talented poet I would have been able to do the same video - exept for the name of the girl and the part with upgrading to contact lenses...
brilliantly done, and your mad piano skills did quite well to acompany your spoken words.
p.s.: Do you have a clue why I usualy dont like spoken poems but love yours? I haven't maybe I heard the wrong people speak wrong words to often before.
bwhahrhr 3 years ago
well i decided a few years ago that i would get good at poetry. and while most people don't like to judge poetry, i do. i probably judge myself harder than anyone else but poetry for me as about talking to people. you probably don't enjoy people talking at you (as most spoken word is) but the people that talk to you it seems are the most enjoyable to watch.
thanks for your kind comment. it's not talent.. i practiced alot and studied and okay a little bit of talent
miketme 3 years ago
thanks liz, sory i have not been able to catch you live. wernt you planning a collab vid?
miketme 3 years ago
haha, as more and more time passed i wanted to make a better vid. i feel like i could have done better still.
miketme 3 years ago
nice!
SupaDupaFlyGirl 3 years ago
You are very talented Mike, can't say it enough.
The bad thing about getting featured, is the exposure to jerks LOL so I guess I wouldn't wanna be featured.
But you are awesome. Keep it up.
porolita22 3 years ago
that would be so awesome to get featured! how does one get featured do you know?
miketme 3 years ago
words hurt more than sticks and stones ever will.
this video is so good mike, i can't even say. wish i could give it a 100 stars.
also, i agree with pirateporty... youtube needs to feature you.
aussielexi 3 years ago
i think there is some truth in the sticks and stones line... as a victim of a verbal assault you have to give less credit to people.. at the same time remember your words may hurt people
miketme 3 years ago
Hey Mike,
Thank you for sharing.
Awesome, beautiful, fantastic!
Great video, great poem, great story!
duanemyers 3 years ago
hah, glad you thought it was great, i don't usually share stuff directly from my life
miketme 3 years ago
great vid dude keep it upp
realitybender2121 3 years ago
glad you enjoyed it!
miketme 3 years ago
Hey...I love the Transformers! LOL. I can't dance but still got lucky! But the advice of no deordant (spelling?) & confidence sure go a long way! LOL
StopItGoAway 3 years ago
hah, yes i had to learn the deoderant thing. and priya still calls me on it every now and then
miketme 3 years ago
Oh, Mike, this was so great, and so true to life!
paisleypower30 3 years ago
really it is, thanks for stopping by
miketme 3 years ago
This video was so awesome!! the poem was really amazingly written! good job!
and you play on the piano!! ;-)
This is the kind of things that should be on the front page! =D
10* for you! lol
PiratePorty 3 years ago
haha, no i don't play the piano... i play with the piano. it's all fun. but i swear i did it just for youtube
miketme 3 years ago