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From: miketme
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  • What I love about your poems is that they're so comical, witty and deep. They're funny in that you discuss simple stuff that we all think about or deal with, but at the same time you have such a complex delivery. Keep em coming :)

  • "Upgrade your glasses to contacts" uh...some of us actually LIKE four-eyes'

  • You're almost too good haha

  • This Is REALLY GOOD !

  • wow, very deep.. I think this will help alot of peoples confidence in the future, and congrats on get the girl =')

  • Wow bro, that shit was deep. You sir, earned another sub.

  • man i have to say this is one of my favorite one.

  • this was very...verryyyy nice.

    no really.

    God bless you.

    i saw your "Thinking About You" thing...excellent work.

  • dude i love this, im trying to pick up poetry.

  • why did you tell us to wacth science fiction oh but great video

  • dude, you don't understand that black people get ashy.

  • To be honest I am somewhat of a nerd (but not even close to your long description). I didnt think something like this would come up. I was just trying to hook up with someone at school so I wanted to see what Youtube had to say about it.

  • wow this was hilarious, dude ur pretty gay

  • glad you had a laugh.

    fyi i do have a hot girlfriend now but it took being strait nerd awhile.

  • Dude, I almost cried. That was deep. Good job man.

  • you almost cried? what part?! haha, tear jerking poetry haha. i'm glad you liked it

  • I started to cry right around the middle and end of the poem.

  • your awesome

  • thanks

  • dude, that was deep

  • hah, wasn't spose to be deep. the rewrite is clearer

  • well thats not what i meant to say at the time, it just was nice and the style

    BTW awesome piano playage!

  • this seems personal , but good

  • thanks, ya it was a personal reflection. i was hoping others could relate

  • EXCELLENCE. I flashed back to fuckin middle school with this one. :D

  • I love This One!!! my Dude plz make one more about girlfriend i have a hard time with them

  • c wok.  posting in youtoob. good vid was seen passing through

  • hah, i'm glad you liked it. i have some other cool vids, i hope you check my channel

  • i'm just catching up on everything since I've been away. I love this video, its beautiful. Your vids keep getting better and better xxx

  • 146 comments? would that fulfill your purpose in life? yeah- humans thrive on attention. deodorant is the devil.

  • heck yes it would! no. i know i'm not going to get 146 comments, and it is not my purpose in life but i would very much love the attention. deoderant a devine gift

  • Very fine writing in here and your deliver makes my delivery...I don't know...look frightening. I need some of your grace. I'm watching all your videos!

    Lo

  • haha,.. all of my videos? that might take a little while, you should have seen the smile your comment gave me.

    honestly though i enjoy reading your poetry alot more than my own. i'm just a simple performer.

    find some open mic's or slams and you're delivery will improve 100%

  • that was so good...then again all your stuff is good.

  • haha, all of my stuff isn't good... just all that i'll let youtube see. you guys get my best!

  • hey I liked your video!!!

    It was really cool & so sweet~ =)

  • hah 'sweet' i'm glad you think in sweet raine

  • i was trying not to be too melancholic. glad you thought it was good

  • really good, and kind of melancholic

  • definantly the scenario man, I know exactly what you're talking about... nice work 5-stars

  • i had a feeling i wasn't alone. glad you enjoyed

  • wow, that was amazing! i've watched it like 5 times already. :) you can tell it's from the heart, and it honestly really speaks to me. i love the sticks and stones part. favorited and 5 stars *as always :P*

  • i felt so cool remembering the sticks and stones line, which really did happen. i guess i was drawn to poetry from a young age

  • love it mike!!! GREAT job!

  • thanks jane! love your new vid too

  • *****

  • thankyou

  • oo mann second time i watched it and stilllll greattt poemmm man

  • cool dude.. the more times i watch it the more i want to make corrections and additions. glad you like it

  • yeaaa

  • Oh wow. if I was a talented poet I would have been able to do the same video - exept for the name of the girl and the part with upgrading to contact lenses...

    brilliantly done, and your mad piano skills did quite well to acompany your spoken words.

    p.s.: Do you have a clue why I usualy dont like spoken poems but love yours? I haven't maybe I heard the wrong people speak wrong words to often before.

  • well i decided a few years ago that i would get good at poetry. and while most people don't like to judge poetry, i do. i probably judge myself harder than anyone else but poetry for me as about talking to people. you probably don't enjoy people talking at you (as most spoken word is) but the people that talk to you it seems are the most enjoyable to watch.

    thanks for your kind comment. it's not talent.. i practiced alot and studied and okay a little bit of talent

  • thanks liz, sory i have not been able to catch you live. wernt you planning a collab vid?

  • haha, as more and more time passed i wanted to make a better vid. i feel like i could have done better still.

  • nice!

  • You are very talented Mike, can't say it enough.

    The bad thing about getting featured, is the exposure to jerks LOL so I guess I wouldn't wanna be featured.

    But you are awesome. Keep it up.

  • that would be so awesome to get featured! how does one get featured do you know?

  • words hurt more than sticks and stones ever will.

    this video is so good mike, i can't even say. wish i could give it a 100 stars.

    also, i agree with pirateporty... youtube needs to feature you.

  • i think there is some truth in the sticks and stones line... as a victim of a verbal assault you have to give less credit to people.. at the same time remember your words may hurt people

  • Hey Mike,

    Thank you for sharing.

    Awesome, beautiful, fantastic!

    Great video, great poem, great story!

  • hah, glad you thought it was great, i don't usually share stuff directly from my life

  • great vid dude keep it upp

  • glad you enjoyed it!

  • Hey...I love the Transformers! LOL. I can't dance but still got lucky! But the advice of no deordant (spelling?) & confidence sure go a long way! LOL

  • hah, yes i had to learn the deoderant thing. and priya still calls me on it every now and then

  • Oh, Mike, this was so great, and so true to life!

  • really it is, thanks for stopping by

  • This video was so awesome!! the poem was really amazingly written! good job!

    and you play on the piano!! ;-)

    This is the kind of things that should be on the front page! =D

    10* for you! lol

  • haha, no i don't play the piano... i play with the piano. it's all fun. but i swear i did it just for youtube

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