Dare to change (original)

[MsIceblonde]

Your version makes me wanna bead my hair and get myself tambourine

[SojaRenate]

@MsIceblonde

haha

ha that's hilarious. I almost never look at this channel anymore. I got myself a new one a while ago: renatebresser, there's a little bit more news there. i'm looking forward to the beads and tambourine!

[Ruben555ful]

Hoi Renate,

mooi lied en goed gezongen.

Groetjes Ruan

[libraryquiet]

There's definitely some originality in this song. COOL! I like your change just before you go into the chorus.  You got it. HI Soja!

[biesbol23]

I love it! Great lyrics. I just finished writing my second song and it just happens that I called it Dare to change also so your's popped up when I listened to mine. Anyways, I love the song.  Great job.

[prosepp]

th third of your songs i hear - and the third time that i say: beautiful !!

So i thanks again o Larry forhinting me on your music

[SojaRenate]

well the third comment of you i read and the third time i say: Thank you !!!

[prosepp]

i am quite it will not be the last one.

But this answer is the last comment for today, as i have to leave YT now.

Wish you all the best ! EDuard

[prosepp]

i just sent this one to a good friend, who is a musician himself. I am am quite sure he will like your songs, too

[sarfrazahmedmoon]

loved it nicely done

[SojaRenate]

hahahah.. well yes, he did the halleluja cover with me. 'the one who sang with kris shred'.. lol.. let me tell you a secret.. there are more than one of those girls :-p

thanks for your comment and the stars bruno!

[desirousofinspiratio]

@SojaRenate

oh yeah, that is very true

He is very easy to get, esp when you do not want him for more than an occasional fling to cheer you up when your beloved boyfriend is being a d...

He then falls head over hills in love with you

When he finds a girl that offers sex and has no expectations of him to be responsible or trustworthy he believes feels he's found "The One"

;)

[pegenon]

This song is really good:) You've got awesome voice:)

[SojaRenate]

Thank you very much pegenon!

[SojaRenate]

it even turns you upside down i see :-p

Thankyou :)

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred you will always be lonely because you cannot be a friend to anyone because nobody can truely trust you and because they can't they turn away from you "just like no human, just like some trash" just like you treat them and i've been lonely because i've been to naive to see i was surrounded with too many ppl like you at least for me there is hope as i must get myself away from negative people like you who only use friendship to be violent to others and take their problems

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred

on others

you may say you wish someone will succeed but inside you are eating yourself alive if you see another person blooming

and only blind ppl like renate do not feel it

which leaves you in "real good company"

with cold and ignorant ppl such as yourself

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred because inside you are unworthy you try to make others feel the same but i'm not buying it! and i'm not going to let your attempts to cause me pain get in my way to live and find people who are dying to show me they do care and love me all i have to do is open my eyes and see that they are not you

[desirousofinspiratio]

@KrisShred

Say it isn't soohowooo"

;op

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred

btw - if you think that was said to make you feel small that only shows how ignorant you are in understanding other people

Disclaimer: NO is a word that expresses a will different than yours.

For example: if you tell a woman "i want to have sex with you"

and she (for whichever her reasons) says "no"

this means she does not want to have sex with you

if you ignore that - it means you are assulting or harassing her

if it happens on the physical realm: it is rape

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred

if you attempt to "convince her" to have sex with you are alter her will to fit to yours

this is already begining to become abuse, psychological violence and so on and so forth

but there is good news to this horrible sextion:

There might be women in this world you find attractive and also want to have sex with you

They may not be as many as you'd wish them to be - but it is possible that they exist

And when you will respect the women who say no and move on

You will meet more

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@KrisShred

and MORE of them

then you may meet women you also want more with and want more with you

but you are right now closing yourself to all of this

because you prefer to impose yourself over women who don't really want you

so they don't want you!

so fucking what?!

any normal guy would say 'well, fuck her, I'll go fucking someone who wanna fuck with me'

but you - no - you are ATTRACTED to assulting a girl you DON'T WANT ??????????????????????!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sunjong1984]

@KrisShred as long as i could believe in your purity my psyche was intact and i could forgive all of your wrongdoings but the fixation on trying to explain away your actions with understanding has a clinical name and if it has it means i shouldn't even try to understand you stop assulting women if you can't - find a treatment that enables you the alternative will not be in your favor

[mcob1]

lyrics: "what we had together" what did you hve together? kinda vague--is there a specific example. kind of platitudinous, if you know what I mean. "you said we would always be together." were those the exact words? be specific. I know I'm a pain:)

[SojaRenate]

its a good thing you know you're a pain

i didnt mean to write about someone too specific, use your own imagination :-), think about what the song means to you

maybe the writer didnt want everyone to know exactly what and who she meant

[SojaRenate]

oh and well.. if it doesnt mean anything to you.. too bad, there will be another chance next song :-)

[mcob1]

you can be fictitious, but in this song I'm relying on your imagination to supply--guess what?--images. for instance "he stood waist deep in the muddy water, said we'll always be together." now you have an image that would facilitate my imagination.

[SojaRenate]

i'm sorry i didnt supply you with enough images but the general message of the song is more important to me in this case.

[mcob1]

I have to sleep now--nyc at 3am. the twin towers are gone now they used to hover over me in Jersey City where I pick up my truck. The george washington bridge is still lit up and when I cross it, the city lights show the complexity of nyc, even though the empire state building is usually dark, the chrysler building, the masterpiece of art deco, glows cooly. images

[SojaRenate]

so you like images.

I like messages.

i dont see the problem

[SojaRenate]

I always look forward to your comments! And this is another one that makes me smile. Thank you!

[MagicalSunrise1984]

@SojaRenate

Haha, but you won't be looking for my comments no more...

that i guarantee ;) 

[Johnfern99]

Great song and awesome lyrics! Great writing and performing! Five stars!

[SojaRenate]

Thanks for you comment and stars

i'm glad you like it :-D

[Fusselkopf]

just a big thank you

[SojaRenate]

No need for thanking me but i'm glad it brings some good to you :-)

[aleishar]

This is really great...for some reason I get the idea of early Beatles here...or at least that time period...really lovely dear. Excellent lyrics and lovely melody. Very well done!

[SojaRenate]

Well i'm very honored you keep compairing me with the beatles ^^

Thank you for your comment!

[XyberBorg]

Mooi nummer! Vind het echt knap dat je op zo'n manier je gevoelens kunt uiten! Knuffel, Xan

[SojaRenate]

dankje! en dikke knuffel terug :-)