PerfumeAd "Hypnôse by Lancôme" Media work purposes

[mollyandlaurenshow]

i love it!! so goooood :) x

[scspurs1992]

omg man this is soo good

im really impressed

i love how even tigger looks as she walked by :P

only thing id say is i agree with the other guys comments he said almost everything i wanted to say

only that she shouldnt be smiling the whole way like she is

also when omer comes over at the end

it could be cool if she winked at the camera or something right at the end of the shot

but that could end up looking silly too so depends on the actress :)

really impressed man

[absolutenocomment]

@scspurs1992 thanks man =D

[TheDJHardTek]

Some small things u need to work on

1)How the actres walks

2)The actors need to get the act perfectly coordinated, one error is fatal

3)Make the Ad a bit more sensual, give a feeling of elegance, make the viewers think they are there, make them think it will happen

4)The audio is also a very important part of the ad, dont stop the audio/music at any part (like u did at the end)

5)The clothing needs to be elegant, not modern

6)The atmosphere needs to elegant

I still think it was a good ad.

:D

[absolutenocomment]

@TheDJHardTek thanks for the points, definatly take into consideration ;]