Nice job! The song is both pretty and calming to listen to, but also compelling. I have a feeling you're not using the best mic--it'd be cool to hear what this would sound like with better production quality. :)
Thankyou very much for the comment. Yes you are correct, the mic itself is probably not the best for recording. Anyway...I really appreciate you listening!!! Take Care
Hey!!! I'm so sorry to hear that you went through a similar siuation as a child. It saddens me that children should grow up in this sort of environment. The song you mentioned My name is Luca, I do know it.....It's a great song!! Thankyou very much for listening and both comment...I really appreciate them. Take Care and have a very Merry Christmas!!!!!!! :-)
Next to Dont take your love from me this one is my favorite..if you ever make another cd send it to me and i will try to get this song played on wxpn Mike :o)
Your welcome...and we had our first snow fall the other night in Philadelphia....only one inch..and i have not seen a icicle yet but iam looking LOL :o)
You sound like Jewel. The lyrics is very well written. Unfortunately it is a common situation in the high pressure societies we live in these days. Let there be music in every family.
Louise this song is soooooooo good ...i was reading the words as you sang it...i believe you are saying...i just want to craw into a book...but its not there in the words?
Very touching song, inspired by a sad reality. Louise, I have to believe if a song can be written from the heart, out of concern and wonder? That very same concern and wonder will watch over that little girl. One day she will have her own walls, and the sounds from the other side will probably be this very touching song. Much more soothing than yesterdays screams. Two thumbs up on your work all around.
Hey Rick!!! How are you??? Hopefully there is someone else watching over that little girl now...she needs that!! Thankyou for listening and your lovely comment too...very much appreciated!!! Take Care :-)
Hi Louise * * * * * Surely people like these your vicinisonos a bad example of parents! I send an I embrace to the baby * * * * * in any angle she is found!! Compliment Louise to tell in yours very beautiful but sad song this history! 5555555 * hi Louise.
Ciao Louise***** Sicuramente persone come questi tuoi vicinisono un cattivo esempio di genitori! Mando un'abbraccio alla bimba***** in qualsiasi angolo ella si trovi!! Complimenti Louise per raccontare in questa tua bellissima ma triste canzone questa storia! 5555555* Ciao Louise.
well done girl,,the moment i saw the image i had that Susanne Vega moment.I feel there is more to do with this song,,,but as it is now,,,it works,,,cooooowell
Very good song and lyrics. I've got neighbours like these as well. Think it goes straigh to the point. Same aproach Suzanne Vega took to write Luca, eh. Parents can be very nasty sometimes so we have to say it over and over again. Also, it's very interesting the point of view you take to tell the story and I love the title. Well, you did it again. Congratulations!
I'm sorry to hear you have the same thing going on next door. It's never a nice thing to hear and come home to every night. I remember the song from suzzanne Vega - Luca...actually I think I covered it...it's under my videos somewhere. Thanks you so much for always listening!!!!! :-)
It would be good but it seemed the only way they knew how to communicate was with screaming....I'm sure it would have been a pattern that the parents learnt when they were young also. :-( Thanks for listening!!! :-)
I just listened to this for the fifth time today...i can't get it out of my head.. now...that is a sign of a great song... when you hear a song for the first time and it stays in your head...and by the way your finger picking sounds really great :o)
Thanks Mike!! I appreciate it!!! Actually the ingerpicking was inspired by another song....I'll try to ind it and share it with you...I'm sure it's on youtube somewhere.
Thanks Bill!! yeah....we can hope...but often times the children pick up their parents habits and think that is the only way to behave..... its a sad cycle :-(
Some people should really think twice before having kids....it's really sad to hear a child crying there eyes out because there mum and dad wont stop fighting :-( Thanks for listening!!!.
I dont know...I wish that would be the case...but with some people it would just go over there heads. Thanks for all your support Andreas...and thanks for encouraging me to post this :-)
Thankyou very much for listening and your support. It is a sad topic I agree...I was hesitant to sing about it...but I think perhaps it is a topic that should be addressed much more then it is.
Louise,I can relate totally with you.I went through the same thing on my new song "Third World Debutante".Take a look and listen and you will understand how much on the same page we are. tom
Hey Tom!!! We are on the same page...I agree!!! :-) Gorgeous song and great video montage to go with it too...Loved it!! Thanks so much for listening to this! Very much Appreciated!! :-)
and you never know when a song may create enough attention.or stir,to help begin some change.If no one else is doing it,let the poets lead the charge!
Louise!!! I think that this is one of the best songs that you ever wrote....this could be a big hit..i just love it..the whole song just works perfect...Mike :o)
Yes it would. The parents that lived in the townhouse next to me were only young...I dont think they were ready to raise a child...and considering their behavour they shouldn't have been. Thanks for always listening Stu!! :-)
"And the LORD said unto Cain, Where is Abel thy brother? And he said, I know not: Am I my brother's keeper?" (Gen 1,4)
CyranoVIII 11 months ago
Hello Louise ***** slendida song after a year is still beautiful !***** Louise Hey I'm your neighbor ... :-)
iaco4ever 1 year ago
Just stubbled across this (I have neighbours that slam doors :) its a touching song beautifully performed weldone.
spiralisedcat 1 year ago
Great song. Keep it up
bhaku9 1 year ago
@bhaku9 Thankyou very much for listening!!! :-)
tuskaiae 1 year ago
Congratulations, music and lyrics shows all the feeling you felt in the moment.Sorry my english.
Fernando
easyblues 1 year ago
@easyblues Thankyou very much Fernando..I really appreciate you listening and the comment too!!! :-)
tuskaiae 1 year ago
@tuskaiae you're welcome, Louise.
Music is in the air.....
Fernando
easyblues 1 year ago
Brilliant...I love this song...
DEEZMAN666 1 year ago
@DEEZMAN666 Thankyou very much for listening...glad that you enjoyed it!! :-)
tuskaiae 1 year ago
Nice job! The song is both pretty and calming to listen to, but also compelling. I have a feeling you're not using the best mic--it'd be cool to hear what this would sound like with better production quality. :)
birkuscircus 1 year ago
Thankyou very much for the comment. Yes you are correct, the mic itself is probably not the best for recording. Anyway...I really appreciate you listening!!! Take Care
tuskaiae 1 year ago
Very unique sound - excellent song!
cadwalladee 1 year ago
Thanks very much for listening!!!!! :-)
tuskaiae 1 year ago
Good vid congrtas friend ..the song is beautiful!!!!
five stars!!!!
jaqaru 2 years ago
Thankyou so much for listening my friend...much appreciated!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Hey youre welcome my dear friend...kisses from Peru!!!!!!
jaqaru 1 year ago
do you know the song
" my name is luca" ?
Subjects like this one should be told and sung more times.
I have been through this when I was a child...
Brazilady 2 years ago
Hey!!! I'm so sorry to hear that you went through a similar siuation as a child. It saddens me that children should grow up in this sort of environment. The song you mentioned My name is Luca, I do know it.....It's a great song!! Thankyou very much for listening and both comment...I really appreciate them. Take Care and have a very Merry Christmas!!!!!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
I am so amazed by your talent as a singer/songwriter
Just perfect !
makes me want to make a music video for this song urgently...if I had the time...
But I will keep this in my favorites and I will be back here a lot...maybe I will camp here.
lol
Great, kid!!
Brazilady 2 years ago
Next to Dont take your love from me this one is my favorite..if you ever make another cd send it to me and i will try to get this song played on wxpn Mike :o)
pirrung123 2 years ago
Thankyou Mike!!!! :-) I'm still in gratitude to you for getting Long Road played....it was very nice o you to do that for me! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Your welcome...and we had our first snow fall the other night in Philadelphia....only one inch..and i have not seen a icicle yet but iam looking LOL :o)
pirrung123 2 years ago
Very nice tune :o)tm *****
uncledave10 2 years ago
Thanks Dave!!!! Much appreciated!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
You sound like Jewel. The lyrics is very well written. Unfortunately it is a common situation in the high pressure societies we live in these days. Let there be music in every family.
musicfamily 2 years ago
Thankyou very much for listening to my original...I appreciate it......and thanks for the comment too!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
hoo.. THIs Lyric toucH MY hearT!... by TH way.. who siNG it?..
pilisky17 2 years ago
I sing it...my names Louise :-) It's my own original song.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
REalLY!!.... Hy.. YUO hav a great voiCe!..i lIke iT!...aLso Th Lyric!...haha..
pilisky17 2 years ago
Are you signed to a label ?
rupertducker 2 years ago
No ....would be nice though! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Wow ! And this is an original ? You really seem to have high musical prospects Louise !
rupertducker 2 years ago
Thanks so much Rupert!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Louise this song is soooooooo good ...i was reading the words as you sang it...i believe you are saying...i just want to craw into a book...but its not there in the words?
pirrung123 2 years ago
Very touching song, inspired by a sad reality. Louise, I have to believe if a song can be written from the heart, out of concern and wonder? That very same concern and wonder will watch over that little girl. One day she will have her own walls, and the sounds from the other side will probably be this very touching song. Much more soothing than yesterdays screams. Two thumbs up on your work all around.
Take care
Rick
166Rick661 2 years ago
Hey Rick!!! How are you??? Hopefully there is someone else watching over that little girl now...she needs that!! Thankyou for listening and your lovely comment too...very much appreciated!!! Take Care :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
congratulations!!
is a really nice song, unfortunately as you say it is real
hey!! keep going, you are so good
roge715 2 years ago
Thankyou so much my friend!!! I appreciate you listening to this...and I am really glad you enjoyed it!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Hi Louise * * * * * Surely people like these your vicinisonos a bad example of parents! I send an I embrace to the baby * * * * * in any angle she is found!! Compliment Louise to tell in yours very beautiful but sad song this history! 5555555 * hi Louise.
iaco4ever 2 years ago
Thankyou so much Pino!!! You are truely a wonderful friend. Thanks for all your support!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Ciao Louise***** Sicuramente persone come questi tuoi vicinisono un cattivo esempio di genitori! Mando un'abbraccio alla bimba***** in qualsiasi angolo ella si trovi!! Complimenti Louise per raccontare in questa tua bellissima ma triste canzone questa storia! 5555555* Ciao Louise.
iaco4ever 2 years ago
well done girl,,the moment i saw the image i had that Susanne Vega moment.I feel there is more to do with this song,,,but as it is now,,,it works,,,cooooowell
deeryker 2 years ago
Thanks Brian!!! :-) Yeah..the song definitely needs tweaking...but I'm glad you like it as it stands now....thanks again!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Great song Louise! Very pertinant, I hope some one sees this that is in a bad relationship and thinks once of the children.
jayrbee60 2 years ago
Thanks for always listening John!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Thanks for always making something worth listening to! :-)
jayrbee60 2 years ago
Hi Louisie,
Very good song and lyrics. I've got neighbours like these as well. Think it goes straigh to the point. Same aproach Suzanne Vega took to write Luca, eh. Parents can be very nasty sometimes so we have to say it over and over again. Also, it's very interesting the point of view you take to tell the story and I love the title. Well, you did it again. Congratulations!
Cheers,
Gil
GilSon1k 2 years ago
Hey Gil!!!!
I'm sorry to hear you have the same thing going on next door. It's never a nice thing to hear and come home to every night. I remember the song from suzzanne Vega - Luca...actually I think I covered it...it's under my videos somewhere. Thanks you so much for always listening!!!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
A beautiful and heartbreaking song!
IngerAnna 2 years ago
Thanks so much IngerAnna!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
realy nice song.
make me feel sad...
a song that give me feelings is a realy good song
louise, like it.
love
Oli
ShaiHulud666 2 years ago
Thanks very much Oli!!!! I'm really glad you liked it...thankyou so much for listening!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
wow, hauntingly beautiful
wolfpacker61 2 years ago
Thankyou very much!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Very powerful and disturbing lyrics.
Would hope this family could hear this song and that it makes them "wake up" and think things over.
Altinget 2 years ago
It would be good but it seemed the only way they knew how to communicate was with screaming....I'm sure it would have been a pattern that the parents learnt when they were young also. :-( Thanks for listening!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Super song with great emotion as ever
garyvella1 2 years ago
Thanks Gary!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Wonderfully empathetic...a lot of people can relate to this.
Well done.
amputeesmile 2 years ago
Thankyou so much!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
a very beautiful and moving song.
you're really really talented louise !
thanks.nathalie
gaya33bdx 2 years ago
Thankyou very much my friend!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
as always your originals are beautiful! You're a very sensitive person to dedicate this song remembering that little girl.
We hope she's ok now.
Bravissima Louise!
playasong1947 2 years ago
Thankyou very, very much Gianni for all your support my friend!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Beautiful as always. Keep writing and playing and singing. I'll be praying for that little girl.
funkymonkey1930 2 years ago
Thankyou so much!!!! :-) Yeah i think we all need to pray for her and children just like her who are subjected to this form of abuse.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Hey Louise!!!
I just listened to this for the fifth time today...i can't get it out of my head.. now...that is a sign of a great song... when you hear a song for the first time and it stays in your head...and by the way your finger picking sounds really great :o)
pirrung123 2 years ago
Thanks Mike!! I appreciate it!!! Actually the ingerpicking was inspired by another song....I'll try to ind it and share it with you...I'm sure it's on youtube somewhere.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Thanks Bill!! yeah....we can hope...but often times the children pick up their parents habits and think that is the only way to behave..... its a sad cycle :-(
tuskaiae 2 years ago
very good
patty1free 2 years ago
Thankyou!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Great original!! (I think they moved next door to me.)
Johnfern99 2 years ago
Some people should really think twice before having kids....it's really sad to hear a child crying there eyes out because there mum and dad wont stop fighting :-( Thanks for listening!!!.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
if every couple in that situation would listen to that song, they might know a lot more about what they're doing...
frozenwhitebear 2 years ago
I dont know...I wish that would be the case...but with some people it would just go over there heads. Thanks for all your support Andreas...and thanks for encouraging me to post this :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
great song!!! best wishes D
gypsy42279 2 years ago
Thanks Derrick!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
A perfect song but so sad in conception.Your lyrics paint a perfect picture and your vocal brings it to life! *****
tps607 2 years ago
Thankyou very much for listening and your support. It is a sad topic I agree...I was hesitant to sing about it...but I think perhaps it is a topic that should be addressed much more then it is.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Louise,I can relate totally with you.I went through the same thing on my new song "Third World Debutante".Take a look and listen and you will understand how much on the same page we are. tom
tps607 2 years ago
Hey Tom!!! We are on the same page...I agree!!! :-) Gorgeous song and great video montage to go with it too...Loved it!! Thanks so much for listening to this! Very much Appreciated!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
and you never know when a song may create enough attention.or stir,to help begin some change.If no one else is doing it,let the poets lead the charge!
tps607 2 years ago
Oh I like that!! Nicely Stated!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Charge!
tps607 2 years ago
Louise, the lyrics paint such a picture. Incredibly powerful images and feelings.
And your higher register is perfect for capturing the intense anguish. So deeply touching. This song is more than artistry.
DoRayMeFa 2 years ago
Ray...thankyou so much!!!!! I just wish that I didn't witness or hear what I did though....I hope that little girl is ok wherever she is now.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
A very sad song beautifully sung.
kel2corkey 2 years ago
Thanks very much!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Louise!!! I think that this is one of the best songs that you ever wrote....this could be a big hit..i just love it..the whole song just works perfect...Mike :o)
pirrung123 2 years ago
Thankyou Mike!!! I'm not sure if this is hit material.....maybe if people were passionate about the topic they would listen..I'm just not sure.
tuskaiae 2 years ago
What a powerful song! ouch!
UncleVRoy 2 years ago
Thankyou!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Oh Louise - you're voice has never sounded better! Brilliant song; chilling and lovely at the same time. You my friend are a peach!
cheers
julie
buniluvr 2 years ago
Thankyou Julie!!!! I appreciate all your comments and support!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Fantastic song, Louise !
The parents should divorce.
It would be better for the child.
Stu
guitar62751 2 years ago
Yes it would. The parents that lived in the townhouse next to me were only young...I dont think they were ready to raise a child...and considering their behavour they shouldn't have been. Thanks for always listening Stu!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Excellent song, Louise. 5*
raymondcrooke 2 years ago
Thanks so much Raymond!!!! :-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Oh my! that was excellent Louise, your sweet gentle voice is such a good fit for this song.. very very good!
jugnutgut 2 years ago
Thankyou so much Rob!!! Very much appreciated my friend! ::-)
tuskaiae 2 years ago
Superb work Louise.. Glad I signed in today - beautiful! Hope all is good with you - have a great weekend.
PaulW2007 2 years ago
Thanks Paul!! Yeah I'm good....how about you???
tuskaiae 2 years ago
superb work Louise.top drawer,5 stars. i'll just send you a box of stars and you can help yourself,cus everything you upload is quality.x
wonderstufffan 2 years ago
what for awonderfull song dear..this is so touching...so good!faved!!
greets
ender
sevenender 2 years ago
Thankyou so much Ender...for listening and also for the fav...very much appreciate that!! :-) Take Care
tuskaiae 2 years ago