only five years.....?????? I've bee playing for eight and I'm only learning this now! I think everyone else;s suggestions are correct, but you're clearly very talented! Keeo oit up :)
Only two suggestions: just a little bit more rubato (suspense!) and make the last chord a little longer, so the sound would last. But overall, it's pretty darn good. I'm thinking about studying this (yes, I just gave you suggestions in a piece I never studied lol).
u r rele good! i've played a little less than u (i'm 12) and i'm playing this 2 and i am not halfway there yet... btw, try 2 keep ur jaw on the chinrest not ur chin (i kno, ironic) cuz it looks rele uncomfortable. (p.s. look at the lady in the red on the back rite...)
very good! just a few suggestions: on some of your down bows you come down with a crunch sound, try to make contact before you move the bow. Also in the high parts of the waltz and the string crossings there were a few intonation problems. Also your second finger E's in third tend to be a tad flat. Use more wrist pressure to create power and sound when you play above 6th and 7th position. You are using too much arm pressure and it's creating a crunchy sound. Very good job!
Great job for only 5 years of study! Comments--you need to use more of your right wrist in string crossings. You are using too much upper arm and keeping your wrist stiff, that's why the string changes are a little scratchy. Measure 62--that area, more wrist flexibility. Same thing on 3rd page, the the string changes in the middle of the page, and the slurres triplet 16ths at the end of the song. Just work on string changing etudes and that will help a great deal. Good luck with future songs!
only five years.....?????? I've bee playing for eight and I'm only learning this now! I think everyone else;s suggestions are correct, but you're clearly very talented! Keeo oit up :)
JinxxCyanide 1 month ago
terrible skids.
MarrianneTaylor 5 months ago
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nastra221 8 months ago
horrible extremely false note 100%amateur
1417dante 8 months ago
5 years and already this piece?! seriously?!
jacquibeanstalk 10 months ago
WOW.... i'm playing the violin for 3 and a half year now, and i couldnt EVER do such a hard piece... damn...
TheToastyyyy 10 months ago
Only two suggestions: just a little bit more rubato (suspense!) and make the last chord a little longer, so the sound would last. But overall, it's pretty darn good. I'm thinking about studying this (yes, I just gave you suggestions in a piece I never studied lol).
Wiizard22 1 year ago
Bravo!!!!!!!!!
robviolin1 1 year ago
GREAT PLAY.
MAYBE YOU CAN CHANGE YOUR VIOLIN INTO A BETTER ONE
tangkaijie 1 year ago
good job ! You're Wonderful ! Cngratulations :) :*
SralimuchaXD 1 year ago
this is a cool piece. brava :)
meaga393 1 year ago
@meaga393 Grazie, Meagan!! :)
Stradfan 1 year ago
Perfect thank you!!!
I love the double stops, I never played so in tune like you!!!!
alan850627 2 years ago
too much slow
MiLLYandMuSiK 2 years ago
sentiamo la tua versione!
Stradfan 2 years ago
Suonero' questo brano al mio saggio di Marzo.
Sei competitiva eh?
Comunque ho votato 4 stelle
MiLLYandMuSiK 2 years ago
great job!
emilywilliams420 2 years ago
superb
thejoshuashieh 2 years ago
very good sound!
Therese51794 2 years ago
who else thinks her bow looks super long?
sijas 2 years ago
You need to keep your bow straighter. Other than that BRAVO!!!
ironclownfish 2 years ago 2
Emotional and well played.
You just should try not to make these scrapping sounds.
All the rest is free interpretation like playing the walz and the douple parts a quite slow.
KonnytheViolin 2 years ago
WOW
wtimber 2 years ago
u r rele good! i've played a little less than u (i'm 12) and i'm playing this 2 and i am not halfway there yet... btw, try 2 keep ur jaw on the chinrest not ur chin (i kno, ironic) cuz it looks rele uncomfortable. (p.s. look at the lady in the red on the back rite...)
playmymusic90 2 years ago
best first thing you should do, is changing the violin. :] since you play great the violin should be great also.
lovelessgray 3 years ago
its taking me forever! to get those double stops down. great job from my side of view. :)
DoGz1121 3 years ago
im playing this piece right now, and i cant play it half as well as u did. good job!!
TheNextAirJordan23 3 years ago
nice job! (: just try to keep your elbow down, it gets pretty high.
amanjahaha 3 years ago
very good! just a few suggestions: on some of your down bows you come down with a crunch sound, try to make contact before you move the bow. Also in the high parts of the waltz and the string crossings there were a few intonation problems. Also your second finger E's in third tend to be a tad flat. Use more wrist pressure to create power and sound when you play above 6th and 7th position. You are using too much arm pressure and it's creating a crunchy sound. Very good job!
mystyksylence 3 years ago 9
Great job for only 5 years of study! Comments--you need to use more of your right wrist in string crossings. You are using too much upper arm and keeping your wrist stiff, that's why the string changes are a little scratchy. Measure 62--that area, more wrist flexibility. Same thing on 3rd page, the the string changes in the middle of the page, and the slurres triplet 16ths at the end of the song. Just work on string changing etudes and that will help a great deal. Good luck with future songs!
stringsalot 3 years ago 6
that is what i needed in this piece! thanks
MrFirehawk007 2 years ago
Not many people can play this. Very nice!
Randomness65535 3 years ago 2