Pretty music and nice voice. I was pleasantly surprised. I bet the girl you wrote it for loves it. Check out my new vid if you feel like it. Am putting an original on today called Will you grow Tired of Me.
ha yes I believe she loves it too. well, it did take almost 4 years before I made good on a promise. but hey, I finally got around to it!!! thanks for the great feedback Rachel! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Wow, I just listened to the last verse, and it kicked! That's definitely the best part of the song. I loved it. "IT has BEEN three YEARS six MONTHS and - 21 days" great rhythm on the lyrics. "before the song I promised you. I'm so sorry that it's late / PRO cras TI na TION is SOME thing -" seriously. That bit's golden.
Songs about hoagies and grinders? Adam Sandler? I really like your sound on this one, too. I am envious that you can get it together to write these songs. Not that I should expect you wouldn't, I just know that I can't really. So keep it up!
haha..... I am SO amped that you caught that hoagies and grinders line! I hope most people understand it's from good ol' Mr Sandler! And bro you can totally write. you just have to start doing it! 20 minutes write a song no matter how it turns out just get lyrics down. then go back and work on it. practice makes perfect!! be encouraged Matt.
haha.... thank you SOOO much Becca! I am so very very glad you ejoyed this. and you are so enthusiastic too. yea, i meant i told her I was going to write her a song. then I never got around to writing unitl four years later. ha.
OOOOOoooooOOOOO I really like this one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing. What do you mean that it took four years???? did you forget to finish writing it or something??? well anyway, I REALLY adore this song!!! keep writing! :D - Becca
Well it is never too late for anything. Great song, I hope the person you appeal to enjoyed it too. Well done. Lots of emotional input and unique singing. Cheers. André :-)
i thot i was the only person who took like YEARS and YEARS to make songs. lol. congrats finishing! i like the opening guitar riff. :)
amyvanvechten 2 years ago
amazing!! nice job!! =]
unknownsinger42 2 years ago
5 star
wesley00008 2 years ago
Awesome song dude!!! You can play the guitar really well. You can sing really well to.
keep writing and playing. Well done! 5 stars.
Greg.
Gregmovolt1 2 years ago
Kwa-la-tee - in a Glasgow style :o)
LilywhiteMcLenin 2 years ago
Perfectly beautiful. -Ron
rhopen 2 years ago
beutiful voice...i must tell to my friend Silver mountain girl, she's crazy for guitar and country music
Rutarca 2 years ago
I thought the song was very interesting because it seemed to be from personal experience.
WatercolorJournal 2 years ago
Thanks man. Yea, it was certainly a song from personal experience. Glad you enjoyed.
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
very nice job
sweet melody and soft voice
easy listening
rock on
PrincessArianaa__♥
princessarianaa 2 years ago
Somebody has talent. :)
RENOvationeNVy775 2 years ago
Great job! This song is so beautiful, and so is your voice. :)
~Alyssa(Singer/Songwriter)
alyssataubin 2 years ago
beautiful, like your soft voice
maurah16 2 years ago
thanks maurah! I appreciate the comment!
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
Pretty music and nice voice. I was pleasantly surprised. I bet the girl you wrote it for loves it. Check out my new vid if you feel like it. Am putting an original on today called Will you grow Tired of Me.
guitarladyem 2 years ago
i bet shawna loves this song
and i think your very creative
really lovely writing
good guitar
good voice
great communication of the song
you beleived every word you said, and we came along and beleived you too
xx
RachelAlexLaing 2 years ago
ha yes I believe she loves it too. well, it did take almost 4 years before I made good on a promise. but hey, I finally got around to it!!! thanks for the great feedback Rachel! I'm glad you enjoyed!
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
Wow, I just listened to the last verse, and it kicked! That's definitely the best part of the song. I loved it. "IT has BEEN three YEARS six MONTHS and - 21 days" great rhythm on the lyrics. "before the song I promised you. I'm so sorry that it's late / PRO cras TI na TION is SOME thing -" seriously. That bit's golden.
matthewvaughan 2 years ago
Songs about hoagies and grinders? Adam Sandler? I really like your sound on this one, too. I am envious that you can get it together to write these songs. Not that I should expect you wouldn't, I just know that I can't really. So keep it up!
Take care,
Matthew
matthewvaughan 2 years ago
haha..... I am SO amped that you caught that hoagies and grinders line! I hope most people understand it's from good ol' Mr Sandler! And bro you can totally write. you just have to start doing it! 20 minutes write a song no matter how it turns out just get lyrics down. then go back and work on it. practice makes perfect!! be encouraged Matt.
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
cool man ! you are a good singer !
rodrigomarietto2 2 years ago
haha.... thank you SOOO much Becca! I am so very very glad you ejoyed this. and you are so enthusiastic too. yea, i meant i told her I was going to write her a song. then I never got around to writing unitl four years later. ha.
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
OOOOOoooooOOOOO I really like this one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing. What do you mean that it took four years???? did you forget to finish writing it or something??? well anyway, I REALLY adore this song!!! keep writing! :D - Becca
TheBeccaBugg 2 years ago
I love the guitar and you have a great voice too...very soothing. I really enjoyed this.
coolstormyknight 2 years ago
Brilliant work, 5/5
Pete
PMiddy001 2 years ago
thanks again for rating Pete!
danclintongarnett 2 years ago
Well it is never too late for anything. Great song, I hope the person you appeal to enjoyed it too. Well done. Lots of emotional input and unique singing. Cheers. André :-)
BaerchenprinzBln 2 years ago