LG15: The Rising Pilot Presentation - The Call of the Phoenix

[Cod4Paradox]

Fuck man, brutal. I don't even know what the FUCK is going on! lol. Oh, bye the

way. Gyro beach is not paradise.

[PeterWDawson]

@Cod4Paradox It's MY paradise. Paradise itself is an illusion.

[KindredPhantom]

The sound is so scratchy and the acting seems a bit wooden. I did enjoy the knife and sword bit.

[ForumSnoBorderRK]

oh my.

nice effort.

but wow this had to have been one of the most terrible pilot submissions ever.

horrible acting, horrible audio quality, and video quality. horrible screen play :\

good luck but I know this wont win.

[PeterWDawson]

I recommend reserving certainty about judgment until the submission deadline. And trust me, its no where near the worst. Definitely agree on the audio and video bits though, I've covered that extensively. I was supposed to get a nice camera but I got screwed and would of had to wait 2 weeks for it. I figured crappy chance is better than no chance.

[RenegadeProjects]

Awesome! Very funny, but not taking itself too seriously.

Also, with enough potential that the $5000 won't be wasted on it.

[SonofaStitch]

Good Luck!!

[anthrocrane]

Appluase all around! That was great!

[jazmyngrey]

Loved this pilot. Total breath of fresh air to the franchise!

[KKDwebshowz]

lol i sounded really weirddd lmaoo awesome job!

[Kitttens89]

Some pretty terrible acting & writing right there. Sorry, but this isn't going to win.

[milowent]

interesting concept!

that order dude though -- please let him go overboard on the sean connery accent - that's awesome comic relief!!!

[anthrocrane]

Thanks.

[modelmotion]

:):):)

[PeterWDawson]

Just to clarify who the cast is:

Ben McCallum - Peter Dawson

Joshua Reinhart - Nick Heuser

Melanie Byrne - Marissa Holmberg

Jenn McCallum - Kristin Marie

David O'Brien - Michael Swaim

The series lacks a core member of the group being trait positive, instead focusing on ordinary people getting involved in something sinister. The series will include live chats, facebook pages for the cast that can be interacted with and a 12-in-12 finale.