The way you edited it so it overlaps makes it difficult to understand anything you say in the chorus. The auto tune just makes it unnatural. Just let the music flow from you with know editing and you'll be golden <3
@skateboardjumps There isn't a lot of auto tune, but I appreciate your criticism, ill take it into consideration. If you'd like I could send you one of my acoustic songs, you'd probably like them better, no auto tune or overlapping words =)
@ilovecookie908 nah, i have a group tho, just with my friends so i can send them my songs =) 'if u want liels songs' not very creative, but if u add your name ull get my songs as soon as i send them to everyone else =)
@ShealinMichelle don't matter, like it all =) I want to do more songs I have a lot of originals but those are harder to get people to listen to on Youtube =/
gorgeous voice :) if you had like a professionally made beat it would be awesome! and if the voice parts were brought out a bit more and the "da-da"ing on the trumpet part lined up better :) other than that its awesome :)
heyy if u ppl want more of my songs or to have this song sent to you, join my facebook group 'If u want liels songs' (not too creative, i know...) i haev a few more songs and u can tell me what i gta fix wit every song so umm thanksss!~
So ducking awesome lolz -3 it
MrTommypotts611 3 days ago
I'm obsessed with this song lol :p
Ezriafan1 1 month ago
@Ezriafan1 thankk you =)
7317LJ 3 weeks ago
The way you edited it so it overlaps makes it difficult to understand anything you say in the chorus. The auto tune just makes it unnatural. Just let the music flow from you with know editing and you'll be golden <3
IrieMir 1 month ago
This is awesome!!! =)
MsFaithAmber 1 month ago
This is amazing, you're a wonderful singer!
Ezriafan1 2 months ago
personally i don't like it cuz of the autotune .-.and the fact some of the words overlap and make it hard to hear it
skateboardjumps 2 months ago
@skateboardjumps There isn't a lot of auto tune, but I appreciate your criticism, ill take it into consideration. If you'd like I could send you one of my acoustic songs, you'd probably like them better, no auto tune or overlapping words =)
7317LJ 2 months ago
@7317LJ sure :) that'd be nice your voice sounds very nice after all ^-^
skateboardjumps 2 months ago
@skateboardjumps Thank you =) can you send me your email address please?
7317LJ 1 month ago
This is really good. I like it.
PitifulChance 2 months ago
this is how i feel all the time thank you so much for making this i love it :)
taylorswaggful 3 months ago
@taylorswaggful happy you like it, i was hoping ppl would connect to it =)
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@7317LJ did you sing this casue it's amazing :)
taylorswaggful 3 months ago
@taylorswaggful yes thank you im glad you like it =)
7317LJ 2 months ago
Dis Is awesome!!!:D
Starshinebright11 3 months ago
Wow. I love the spin you've put on this. And your voice is totally captivating!!!! I would LOVE to hear some of your originals!!!!!
amiraye 3 months ago
@amiraye thank you! =) i have many, i always plan on uploading them but forget =P
7317LJ 3 months ago
It sounds amazing!!!!! Im your new #1 fan :) <3 good job
xxAnimeFreak666xx 3 months ago
@xxAnimeFreak666xx thank you so much =)
7317LJ 3 months ago
you are AMAZING if you have a consert i would love to come!!! let me know
miriharow 4 months ago
thats really good :D
pargraph 4 months ago
@7317LJ ... True so you have to give them what they wanna hear ... Whatevers out right now ... (:
ShealinMichelle 5 months ago
Do you have facebook fan page? xD
ilovecookie908 5 months ago
@ilovecookie908 nah, i have a group tho, just with my friends so i can send them my songs =) 'if u want liels songs' not very creative, but if u add your name ull get my songs as soon as i send them to everyone else =)
7317LJ 3 months ago
@la3lata I wrote them in the information area under the song =) enjoy~!
7317LJ 5 months ago
I looooooov it xD
ilovecookie908 5 months ago
@ilovecookie908 Thanks!! =D show your friends!
7317LJ 5 months ago
@7317LJ Maybe .. What kinda music do you prefer? (:
ShealinMichelle 5 months ago
@ShealinMichelle don't matter, like it all =) I want to do more songs I have a lot of originals but those are harder to get people to listen to on Youtube =/
7317LJ 5 months ago
@ShealinMichelle All kinds! =) i have a lot of originals but those are harder to get people to listen to on Youtube =/
7317LJ 5 months ago
I like her voice.
xOTSSxBioHazard 6 months ago
Nice song :3
ninjagunner23 7 months ago
@ninjagunner23 thank yoooou =D
7317LJ 5 months ago
THIS IS FUCKING DOPE !!!!
you should do a lot of other remake/ remixes. :D
ShealinMichelle 7 months ago
@ShealinMichelle thank you! =) do you have any ideas maybe?
7317LJ 5 months ago
Send me please?! It's AWESOME!! my email is ktmc.beta@ymail.com if ya need it. xDD
CallMeKatieMac 9 months ago
i changed it to i wish i wouldn't grow taller cause i am 6 foot haha
SmileForApicture 1 year ago
@SmileForApicture Haha Im also tall but most girls are short so.... u know =)
7317LJ 1 year ago
@7317LJ OKAY :D
it's haleylittle94@yahoo.com
haebabe94 1 year ago
Can you send me this song, PPLLLEEAAASSEEE??? :D
haebabe94 1 year ago
@haebabe94 sure just give me your email address? or join the group on facebook 'If you want liels songs' to get the rest of my songs =)
Although this is the only actually good one =P
7317LJ 1 year ago
@7317LJ OKAY :D
it's haleylittle94@yahoo.com
haebabe94 1 year ago
@7317LJ @7317LJ OKAY :D
it's haleylittle94@yahoo.com
haebabe94 1 year ago
@7317LJ @7317LJ OKAY :D
it's haleylittle94@yahoo.com
haebabe94 1 year ago
Can you send me this song PLEEEEAAAASSEEEE? :)
haebabe94 1 year ago
This is like the stry of my life. Im never special always average :P
Kahlibabylovesyohh 1 year ago
gorgeous voice :) if you had like a professionally made beat it would be awesome! and if the voice parts were brought out a bit more and the "da-da"ing on the trumpet part lined up better :) other than that its awesome :)
comander101 1 year ago
This song is sooo GOOD! :D You're a really good singer.
EveTheGleek 1 year ago
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Hey please put on itunes!!!!!!!!!
javalava312 1 year ago
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javalava312 1 year ago
Please put on itunes!!!!!!
javalava312 1 year ago
@javalava312 ill send it to u if u want its no biggie =)
7317LJ 1 year ago
@7317LJ Can you that would be awesome!
javalava312 1 year ago
@7317LJ Can you that would be awesome!
javalava312 1 year ago
heyy if u ppl want more of my songs or to have this song sent to you, join my facebook group 'If u want liels songs' (not too creative, i know...) i haev a few more songs and u can tell me what i gta fix wit every song so umm thanksss!~
7317LJ 1 year ago
Hey, would you matter if i sing this on an album im working on???(:
please, i'll give you credit ;3 please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(:
lyricsRmee 1 year ago
@lyricsRmee i gta finish the whole copyright process thing after that i dont think it shoujld be a prob =)
7317LJ 1 year ago
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@7317LJ haha, thanks! ;D
check out my other channel where i sing and tell me if you like it(:
lyricsRmee 1 year ago
@7317LJ haha, thanks! ;D
check out my other channel where i sing and tell me if you like it(: xSofiaCookieMonsterx
lyricsRmee 1 year ago
hey u could sing it no prob =)
7317LJ 1 year ago
@7317LJ thanks ;D!
lyricsRmee 1 year ago
This Is Really Really Good! You Need To Put It On iTunes!!!
FBfan001 1 year ago
LOVE the chorus. Absolutely love it. The rest is kinda not related to the chorus or relevant to the guy version of "I Wish". But I like it. Good job.
HassamuWindie 1 year ago
@HassamuWindie thank u so much =)
7317LJ 1 year ago
@7317LJ No problem. Are you gonna do more songs? Or were just inspired for this one?
HassamuWindie 1 year ago
working on another as we speak ^-^
7317LJ 1 year ago