Jay Wonder - Bran-New Lovesong

[ImakeItRAYALLDAY]

This is my Lovesong Bran New Lovesong

This is my Lovesong Bran New Lovesong

This is my Lovesong Bran New Lovesong

This is my Lovesong Bran New Lovesong

[kenokrend]

conversating isnt a word, conversing is

[jaywonderthefire]

@kenokrend you didn't use correct punctuation in your comment. so much for trying to be a smart ass...

[owensproductions]

still my jam

[FunkMonkey777]

It would sound much better if you would work out some kinks on

1) Fitting words to the beat

2) Better audio quality

3) The language sounds a bit "harsh" for FLCL. It doesn't fit the tone of the original song or series at all. Waaaay too many F-bombs

Otherwise, it's not bad at all :D

[jaywonderthefire]

@FunkMonkey777 lol, thanks *nods* although flcl is my favorite anime, this song wasn't for that series at all. i wanted to be connected to it in some way though and i loved the instrumental, so i used it how i felt it related to me. having a crush on a girl that didn't give a damn about me -_-

[FunkMonkey777]

@jaywonderthefire Ah, well then it all makes sense! Still, a higher quality/refined version is definitely something you should look into doing!

[jaywonderthefire]

@FunkMonkey777 no doubt man, thanks for the feedback.

[steelangelblack]

I honestly think this is horrible, the message of the song is wonderful.

[jaywonderthefire]

@steelangelblack no doubt. good looks.

[LProcka]

theres room to improve but props! i like it

[jaywonderthefire]

@LProcka thanks brother. always room for improvement!

[DJMedinaz]

That is mighty gangster, my G.

No but seriously, this is cool.

[jaywonderthefire]

@DJMedinaz lol, thanks brah.

[NeverKnowsBests]

you.. killed  it....

[jaywonderthefire]

ty<3

[Kyonekomexico]

where i can download this song is awesome bro

[jaywonderthefire]

thanks man. i just put the download link in the more info box.

[MrSirSnoozealot]

i love it! i love the style!

[jaywonderthefire]

lol, thank you.

[gueburah]

matate conchetumadre!

[iHateyousike]

aye my bad for all those who think this rap is weak

but i give credit yo,

lyrics are pretty dope, jay!

[jaywonderthefire]

thank you :]

[Vfory]

yo imhypeasshitonmylaptop get off my dick eh? your really worried about me huh?

[jaywonderthefire]

wtf are you talking about..?

[Vfory]

ya boy "ijustgotanewlaptop", he's kinda hype over there

[jaywonderthefire]

lol, he's not even talking about you.. he was talking about my homie pretty boy floyd.. and he was joking

[paperchazz]

god this sucks, kill yourself

[jaywonderthefire]

i'll pass for right now.. maybe one day though :] thanks baby ;]

[xballinlikemj23x]

Gooooooo JAYYY

[jaron21]

shit hot i got a song that im bout to drop like this just a lil more poetic and deeper but this still hot tho keep it my dude

[cafehc]

i don't mean to be rude... but here's what I think, the idea to rap to this song, WONDERFULL. Your rapping, TERRIBLE. sorry, it was a great idea, you just gotta do it better...

[nono11]

A. You're alright. And you're doing this for a girl, which is an ulterior motive besides just making music.

B. That said:

Not bad, but you need to work on what really makes a rapper a rapper, like papoose: vocabulary. The more words you can rhyme with, the better your ability to express yourself. The more you express yourself, the more a woman understands you really do care.

[ijusgotanewlaptop]

This niggas dookie i herd niggas way better!!!

Pbf way better....lmao

Guess who i am

[jaywonderthefire]

lol, albertttt.. ur so cute ;]

[Emceetem]

nice job

[crazyguy34]

damn this shit banging holy shit you did a good job=)

[jaywonderthefire]

thanks dude

[xXBloodyRoseXx]

Cool work dude :3

[jaywonderthefire]

thanks bro

[xXBloodyRoseXx]

No problem ;D

[ForgetMeNot900]

Love it!

Fav <3

[jaywonderthefire]

thank youu :]

[ellaxxamorr]

really good song<3

[jaywonderthefire]

thank you<3

[idb1990]

Everyone can find their own meaning to this song. Your meaning is a damn good one. Peace.

[jaywonderthefire]

thanks a lot bro