My Last Tears-Dear Darling (original song)

[MsCutiepie14]

Its REALLY good but is there anyway you could add lyrics to the side? Thanks if you can and if you cant its all good

[yannickesti]

i put the lycris in the description .....

[NYC330]

My favorite part was the lyrics "A girl with glow eyes, by a beautiful brown hair."

I like that. (:

[yannickesti]

haha thank^^

[vikirose95]

thats really good!

[LovelyJess23]

I love it!! [: Keep writing and singing. [:

[albino1blacksheep]

You got five stars annd a favorite from me. I love this song! Great job!

[WesleyMcroberts]

good voice! keep writing music buddy,

[justjessica95]

did you write this song hun?. even if you didnt.your voice is quite lovely a bit of lessons you will need .but other than your tiny mess ups your quite good .(:

[Mylastears]

yes i write it. ty for this comment^^

[amutantturtle]

Nice job :D

[thedarksoulyo1]

its cool :)

[Sushi4junno]

It would be really cool to hear it in French as well, although your English is pretty good too. Keep writing!

[KayBedaC]

The song is quite okay, and your voice is nice, but I would recommend some singing lessons to get some more control. Also try to soften your " p ", " b " and " th ". Maybe it's an idea to do a strum in the last measure, then the change to chorus gets less sudden. I'm not meaning to be rude, I'm just trying to give you a useful comment. To end with, I like your choice in chords and melody.

Greetings from the Netherlands.

[Mylastears]

thank for the comment i will try it.

[chokohearts]

beautiful(:

[kimdaninja]

really beautiful! i love the lyrics and the guitar. i write music too, but none of them have been successful. i was wondering, what is the language that you speak? cuz it sounds like english isn't ur first language. :)

[Mylastears]

thank:) i speak french(quebec) :P so i try to do my best with my english:S^^

[Mylastears]

thanks:) i speak french:P

[kimdaninja]

how long have you been playing guitar?

[Mylastears]

4years

[kimdaninja]

wow, no wonder u were able to play it very well. i've only jus started last year so i'm not very good

[glitterN0VELLA]

Woah! I saw your comment on Perfect Measure's Take My Hand and I really like this song.

You're so adorable.. will you marry me? :P

[Mylastears]

XD sure:P

[AndyAngelZ]

how is this 5/5? his voice is kind of off tune...

[AnnaExclamationPoint]

Awh, you sound adorable<3

good lyrics(:

keep up the good work and you'll make it big kid (:

[MrLaureye]

your good

[KanaYume13]

Wow you're SO good =O :D

[xheartbreaker987x]

you sound so awsome i love this song

[EsmeIsHiding]

You definantly have talent ^^ If you keep going at it, get some great people behind you, some voice tweeks, you could be seriously make it. :)

Just keep at it.

[timerssarah]

good job

[fallenKnight098]

great job! i like it and ur voice we just need a little singing lesson but overall its cool! who know because of this you might get famous!

^_^

[Mylastears]

hehe thank you^^

[Caitieskye]

You're absolutely adorable

I subbed :] and favorited

[guitarocker100]

i like it, but ur voice is a lil off with ur whole talky singy thing. but i like it. reminds me of nevershoutnever. lil more practice and u could be as good. Awesomely written song

~cara

[worldserieschamp19]

this song pwns

[skaterluke0224]

sry but i have to be simon on this one, its was well written, maybe a little better chord transition would be nice, and im not sayign youre a bad singer, but talkign singing lessons could greatly increase your pitch range and just your overall performance;)

[somethingspecialish]

dear darling..(:

[banRJana]

That's pretty good!=p

[skylynnmack]

thats a good song your voice reminds me of nevershoutnever

[cholebear1994]

nice voice love the little accent a little more work and you could be the next chase coy

[Mylastears]

thank you:)

[HeartsBurstIntoFire4]

i've watched all you're videos and well in all they're actually really quite good,

you have a good voice and you play guitar well, the lyrics are also well written,

the only thing i would suggest is better quality recording but in all honesty its not terrible so its up to you

anyway keep up the good work and write a couple more songs, i'd like to see what else you can come up with

good job

[Mylastears]

thank you^^ i know the recording suck because i record it on a web cam:S but....thank you for the comment:D

[TheFadingHeartbeat]

You have a couple words to work on pronouncing, but I love your voice and this song. It's very pretty. :] Great job and keep up the great work! 4 stars!

[Mylastears]

thank ^^

[SushiTabbyCat]

do you speak french?

[Mylastears]

yes.

[thromnombular33]

pretty cool, dude.

[opikokew09]

Wow this was really good. I thought it was just gonna be those kind of videos where they suck but it wasn't 5/5 x]. And plus i really like the lyrics.. I'll check out your other videos.

[PratNikk]

Nice song!:D

[Mylastears]

ty = )

[lahalie7777]

this is nice. Agiain the lyrics r good. but they also dont makes sence ike the part 'thats what i see here' u sang as that what i see here. Pronouncing is crutule. You have such a nice voice. and your good but just take my advice ^.^

[Mylastears]

thank^^ but I try to pronouncing but im canada french so its hard to me to speak english :P i will more practice my english.

[lahalie7777]

lol well then ur doing great!!!!!!! it must be hard lol