There are elements of this song that work very well and i can see lots of potential in it! - Your voice is beautiful and the guitar is good. I like the lyrics but sometimes the words feel a little bit rushed to me. Did you ever try playing it a tiny bit slower? Can I suggest that you try it with just "bad self portraits" or "at all my bad self portraits" and slow that bit down a bit-
Kayenne your videos are all lovely! You're very talented. You need to get in contact with Ms. DiFranco herself and try to get on the Righteous Babe label!!!
beautiufl voicee
WesleyConquerMaster 2 years ago
There are elements of this song that work very well and i can see lots of potential in it! - Your voice is beautiful and the guitar is good. I like the lyrics but sometimes the words feel a little bit rushed to me. Did you ever try playing it a tiny bit slower? Can I suggest that you try it with just "bad self portraits" or "at all my bad self portraits" and slow that bit down a bit-
quintonquiggles 2 years ago
I didn't know ani defranco had a new song out!
bowiefan441970 2 years ago
oy vey with the ani influence
schroeder666 2 years ago
i'm speechless! truly amazing :D keep up the incredible work, i'd love to see more of your original stuff!
whitElephant238 2 years ago
Dude this a frickin' beautiful! I wish I could write like that. You totally inspire me. Keep it up! You're really talented!
songsformatthew 2 years ago 3
You choose real nice chord progressions, I dig your sound.
-Martin
MartinBMitchell 2 years ago 2
Wow, I dug the Townes Van Zandt cover but this is even better.
Noodlebass 2 years ago
You are really good and I hope you realize you have the goods to make something happen. Good luck!
leonqwik 3 years ago 3
have you had lessons or are you self-taught?
liked the way you really let your voice out in places. very good.
zachpillion 3 years ago 2
guitar chops and strong vocals.
well done
Kpzero22 3 years ago
you're really good.. nice to see some natural talent!
i was out - and i just wanted to listent to She says - and i found you doing it. very nice. :)
do you have myspace?
where are you from?
laurenlucille 3 years ago
love it
jacquesmees 3 years ago
Kayenne your videos are all lovely! You're very talented. You need to get in contact with Ms. DiFranco herself and try to get on the Righteous Babe label!!!
notasouthernbelle 3 years ago
simply beautiful...love your spirit...
poetchile 3 years ago
wow..
it rarely happens that i love a song the first time i hear it
but i do love this one
USofL 3 years ago
fantastic. make a cd and ill be the first to buy it.
jchilds05 3 years ago
seconded
totalpwnership 2 years ago
encouraging
let´s get strength
andreasgrossmann 3 years ago
Absolutely beautiful and catchy! Is there an MP3 for this song?
kitpwnz 3 years ago
Gorgeous...I love the lyrics in this one...catchy tune too.
midnightfirefly14 3 years ago
It's so hard to create something both creative and nice to listen to. FiveStars easily (love the bit about 'poems sans mots').
DashWhitaker 3 years ago
lov your creative soul
canvasofdreams75 3 years ago
Beuaitufl lyrics Kayenne. I loved the "can you walk through my my grafittied walls and look at the really bad
self-portraits?"
Nice song!
vamosbabe 3 years ago