good but u have to be sure to keep your pops fast when returning to your narrator and if your narrator has dialogue then his character should have the same personality and voice as his character so he needs to be more nasaly also i would have liked some more facial expressions to make everything pop and lastly the ending was to drawn back it should have ended in a bigger way and then you need to pause in your last pose before walking off to really seal the deal. great voices though keep it up
Are you allowed to take that step foreward for the intro? nice voices.
DanielMaurerer 6 months ago
good but u have to be sure to keep your pops fast when returning to your narrator and if your narrator has dialogue then his character should have the same personality and voice as his character so he needs to be more nasaly also i would have liked some more facial expressions to make everything pop and lastly the ending was to drawn back it should have ended in a bigger way and then you need to pause in your last pose before walking off to really seal the deal. great voices though keep it up
GamerX1210 8 months ago
Spectacular job!
shyguytony 1 year ago