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From: mejawwad
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  • Wonderful! Brother, Keep it up!

  • is this your own voice?

  • @theProudMoslim , ALHAMDULILLAH i did try to read it , I hope you liked it.

  • @mejawwad yes I liked it :)

    I did read this poem in a magazine before two years

  • can you tell in which book i can find this

  • ye kis ki takhleeq hai brother. mashallah

  • best

  • wow ur so graet dear

  • Hope the nation learn something from this. This poetry is quite moving and emotional and make ones question his/her role in our society. May God help us to overcome our selfishness and let us achieve the greater well being of our nation and indeed the whole humanity.

  • kiya baat hai yaar.tum ne to rowh ko janjohor diya hai.

    iqbal zinda bad

  • yes its a reality

    but dear you need to correct your pronunciation

    there are some mistakes

    anyway very nice effort

  • wah wah,,

    allama Iqubal ki rooh ne ise zaroor suna hoga.

    jisne likha hai-uske liye raz kiya hai,

    iqubal tere chaman aur bhi bulbulen hain jinke sino me hain naghmo ka talatum abtak.

  • JAZAKALLAH 4 ur comment...jis nay likha ha us k liye tu sher kah diya ap nay..aur jis nay parha ha..us k liye?

  • Jazakallah,

    tumhare liye mera apna sher hai...arz kiya hai,,--aankh jo dekhe hai wo dhoka hai,zehn jo sonche hai wo guma hai-Ek aks sa jhalke hai-koi pase parda hai.

  • MASHALLAH.. bohut khoob...nawazish..enayat..MALI­K khush rakhain..duaoon may yaad rakhye ga INSHALLAH

  • gr8 but do mee a favor plz get the whole of it !

  • Excellent , Fantastic, Marvelous

    Great piece of Poetry.

    Tumher-e andaz-e beyaan itna khubsorat hay k mein bata nahi sakta.

    Likhtey jaoo iss tarah ki cheezein.

    God bless u

  • beautifully done, I hope ppl listen to this and learn from it

  • Very nice...really really very good...Masha'Allah.....so true....its sad but so true...may Allah forgive our sins and move us out of this . Very nice job. May Allah increase the power of your tongue...Ameen.

  • JAZAKALLAH brother...yes...unfortunately itz all true...letz hope 4 da best..may ALLAH show us da right path to follow..AMEEN

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