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  • I really liked this poem and related to it..questioning whether or not i actually missed her? and your hair is beautiful

  • I CAN RELATE.

  • all I can say is WOW I felt that

  • your hair looks amazing

  • ran across you video they are amazing

    no matter how you look we hear you. Pretty Girl

  • let us know

  • Is this girl related to Marlyn Monroe?She was nuts too.

  • Theres Nothing like a woman Scorned.

  • PRICELESS... U GOT IT PERIOD

    

  • Man like realest thing i have heard in like forever!! thanks :)

  • This was right on time. Thanks! I DO just miss the love feeling, but NOT him...NOT the insanity...NOT the frustration. JUST the love. Cool.

  • i've these words before. yes i like the poem but what makes you different is the way you read it.

    the passion behind it makes even more wonderful

  • I miss her, because she made me feel loved and cared for.Played me for a few months, started seeing another girl and dropped me. Here I am, left to cry while she moves on feeling whole. It's never fair, someone always ends up hurt when it's all said and done.

  • I don't miss him, just the feeling

  • Your poetry is amazing!

  • Forreall Put on a rap!!!

  • your poems are amazing, mabe you should try rapping, you could probably be the next nikki minaj, your also a very beautiful girl, sweetie

  • make more video pls

  • im speechless. i love it.

  • Omg!!! I love this!!! You are soooo on the money girl!

  • Wow this is exactly how i'm feeling at the moment about a certain someone. Every word spoke to me. Thanks for the reassurance that i don't need that confusion in my life anyway.

  • Your poems are amazing. And your delivery, even better. You look like Aaliyah, not sure if you've heard that. But shes my idol, and you remind me of her. Your poems  speak for the many women that can't verbalize or speak from the heart as they please. Continue shining and making your mark! Its being noticed! -Lanique <3

  • i recently started writing spoken word poems. u might wanna check it out. :) youtube.com/watch?v=_LpmObTtKU­8

  • Beautiful.

  • this is amazing, semhar

    what origin is your name btw? its beautiful!

  • Where yo' curls girl?

  • Love it & so true for me now.

  • The way you express yourself when reciting these poems is amazing, and your hair is fabulous.....

  • Glad this one wasn't about me...

  • not to mention you have amazing hair

  • wish someone would write poems like that about me

  • kkkk... girl you are talented and lovely..but where did you learn to kiss like that (2:53) really hilarious..hope it's not from a Dog. lolol..

  • i needed to listen to this poem. and im glad i did. this poem is exacally what i am going through. your words are inspiring. great piece. keep writing.

  • wow...I really love your poetry and they way you recite it. thanks you just made my day

  • wow your hair is gorgeous! Damn, and this poem.. goodness. There really are smart and down to earth people left on this planet :)

  • This is a very nice piece: I think this one will be my next poetry music project. You're heart is beautiful Semhar. Keep Flowing.

  • i love this and people may say its worse to be ugly but its just the same ., because they both go through shit that can give them suicidal thoughts . but i write to & perform every last sunday in harlem you should check it out

  • Gosh, I love your facial expressions. Either you really get into the recitation of your poems or you know how to use that face to show those emotions. Either way, it works. And your hair looks good straight, too. :]

  • Wooooooow I love this one... And I can totally relate

  • Wooow so real!

  • your beautiful ! Beautiful as in your soul and how you put all your feeling into your poetry! Its amazing <3

  • You have the prettiest hair. smile. face. and voice. Omg , I fell in love.

  • so true! love it. keep it up girl! :)

  • so much emotion.. I love this..

  • Ugh. This brought back memories. Wonderful poetry. You're amazing.

  • man i like your voice, 

  • omd, I so understand what you talking about, It so describes how I feel right now... <3

  • i so agree every second of it is it u or ur love and u taught me that it isnt always then but it could the love the they gave u so i took that heartfelt

  • i so agree every second of it is it u or ur love and u taught me that it isnt always then but it could the love the they gave u so i took that heartfelt

  • I'm COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH U, YOUR WORDS ARE TRUTH.

  • u r so beautiful! natural and inspired! like ur carisma!

  • i love your soul

  • Wowwww I luv it

  • so true and very relatable

  • I love this poem. So true,,, we often think we miss someone when its really the way we felt being with them that we miss.

  • your name is Semhar hahh yes know i know you from Eritrea

  • ok Are you from Eritrea?

  • Please come back and share with us your poems. I truly admire your work! n_n

  • Your poem was TRUTH!!! Great job. I definately have a new perspective on my current situation!

  • 4 butt ugly bald headed bamma broads hatin 

  • 4 bald bammas hatin

  • Awesome...girl may god bless your talent!

  • Wow you just described my ex lmao you are gifted

  • omg sumone posted u on facebook and i just had to see more. u are sooo talented. wow. just wow

  • Girl, you are truly gifted. I can't decide which one is my favorit. Keep doing your thang!

  • wooww, now i know why i miss sum of my ex.s

    Gee this opened my eyes!

  • love it

  • the last couple seconds meant the most...how u said sometimes we Think we miss someone when actually we miss a feeling"..deep..thnx for explaining my feelings to myself lol

    Be Blessed

  • I seriously come back to this poem you wrote every time I think about "if I really miss" that certain someone who broke my heart. It just reminds me that emotions are strong & I need to realize what's real & what's fake.

  • woooowww epiphany

  • this is amazing!

  • i love this ! it makes me wonder do i rele miss him?

  • ok i had 2 subscribe u seriously!!!...ur poetry runs deep!!...we as people got our inner voice (our truest thoughts) and outer voice (the words/thoughts everyone hears when we speak).....ur poems speak with that inner voice....alot of ppl can relate!!!

  • now that was good im feelin that

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  • Alot of women who look at this probably had a light bulb come on in their head after listening to this. It's very true.

  • the last comment u made...thats true about emotions,,,so true...

  • good shit !

  • Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Sexy as hell!

  • Your hair and makeup is absolutley gorgeous...your soo pretty!! xx

  • Please ladies, give us normal guys a chance. We can give you real love and commitment. In my country, to many women go for the men who have money, fancy clothes, and fancy cars! Those are the REAL playas. Shoot, why do you think they call them playas? A lot of times they get that shit from other women!

  • The fucked up part is that this shit goes both ways. I thought my wife loved me too, but she only married my ass for a visa out of her country! Damn!

  • This poem spoke perfectly to me! You are so amazing. I just subscribed, you have real talent!!

  • are u like....ahhhh ...sining ?

  • ur hair is soo amazingly georgous and ur not too bad urself lol....get it girl! ;) lol

  • this is my favorite one,

  • the thing about getting hurt by someone is when it happens to much and ur scared to find another person who might hurt u or they could be the one.

  • UR SO FN PRETTY

  • Semhar, I really am adicted to you. I feel like you wrote this one specially with I in mind ...... I just need to change the gender. You are just beautiful inside out..

    Dawit.

  • True & Real ....Nice Job.

  • Uh, sounds like somebody needs to get a life

  • you Eritrean ?

  • absolutely great i love it. your so talented

  • great poem, maks a lot of sense. i'm now a fan (:

  • I like your poetry. I write, too and I am trying get myself to do spoken word or say them

  • un, un, un...

    I wanted to write a piece similar... but could not find the words...or, when I found the words... I failed to put them in the right order...

    thank-you, poet. you've so done it FOR me.

    I dug the FUCK outta this piece.

    and my god, you're fucking beautiful.

    peace!

  • U GO GURL!

  • Girl, yes!! I swear our minds are like twins!

  • I love your poem and you hair...did you straighten it your self and if so...would you mine doing a video showing how you did so...thanks

  • SO TRUE!

  • 1:36 to the end is 5/5

  • ur awesome!!!!!!!!

    when r u gonna post more videos?

  • I love the flow and wording of your poem! You have touched me emotionally and spiritually. Keep up the work, now you have inspired me to write poems!

  • This is how I feel right now about my ex. I feel exhaled...sighs...great poem!!

  • i love 2:56

  • HOTEP sista!

    your poem is beautiful!

    take care

  • OMG.. jus had a "light bulb" moment! All this time I thought I missed him! Thanxs 4 posting this...much luv and new subbie!

  • that was so deep but simple great job wit that one

  • For some reason your poems always seem to be simple yet so deep. Honestly you inspire me to wanna put my pieces up but im still not gonna do it lol. But love the piece

  • .. I think I'm gonne subscribe

    oh I just did ;)

    the poem you said made me think ... I thought that was smart and useful!

    thanks for the vid ;*

  • said it before, say it again...inspirational.

  • What you said in this poem reminds me, you can't tell a woman NOTHING! LOL!

    Even if she knows where the situation's going to lead. It just refreshed my memory of learning that.

  • I have to dedicate this to all my ex-boyfriends

  • Beautiful .

    This poem explains it all. . .

    Im going thru that feeling right now too . . .

    Its like you were reading my mind wen yu wrote this , this poem touched my soul .

    This shii gets deeep .

    -Thnks for sharing wit us gurl !

  • nice poem. love the way you tell your poems

  • ur poems are amazing! keep in up!

  • nice (=

  • i love all of your poems

    i was wondering if you have one you could put up about being biracial

    thanx

  • She is not biracial, she is ertierian.

  • ignorant.

  • the way you speak/write reminds me of Left Eye..

    not how she rapped, but when she'd speak poetically..

    keep doin what u do and build a name for yourself

  • Thanks, That means a lot to me. I really dig her spirit

  • Your smile looks like Janet Jackson.

  • OMG I looovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeddd that poem! You go girl!!!!!!

  • Amazing!!! Thanks for sharing!

  • This is GREAT! Deals with the ROOT of emotions and WHY we feel them. GREAT PIECE SISTAR!

  • sooo pretty

    x

  • u kinda look like SADE in this vid

  • omg girl this piece made me cry...u exspressed every emotion and thought im feelin so perfectly..i love ur work..it def. touched me =)

  • Really nice poem

  • You should make more videos because your really qood at it :)

    keep it up qirl

    i give you props :)

  • My habesha sister!

    you are original, please continue!

    intelligent young blacks ..gotta love it!

    one.

  • girl you're beautiful, your poems are beautiful and I love it

  • u just gave me a new outlook of my ex love it!!!

  • WOW, your amazing. I love your style of poetry. I just found you today and glad I did. I wish I could write like that, and express my emotions that way.

  • that was Sickk sistah. Yea , I felt that not long ago and it was an epiphany! lool

    xoxo

  • That was excellent!!

  • so amazing

  • Nice words... It's a gift to know what is missing. I've thought this before... but never in poetry. Stay up.

  • perfect!

  • Girl I am feelinnnnnnnng this one! Perfect words!! Nice job!

  • This poem really touched me at this point in my life. I feel like you echoed all my thoughts. Also, thank you for inspiring to me to write again :)

  • truly beautiful... i really identify with this poem. i feel the same way : )

  • good stuff wish you the best girl!

  • " i don't miss you.. i miss feeling loved" i love that1 you spoke the truth!

  • ha lol this is so true i can trully relate

  • I felt that! & understood every word

    Soo true!

    Wow, you have a great gift!

    God Bless

  • wooooooooow i do want to say u r sooooooooooo beautiful and talented

  • Whatever, you're beautiful, straight hair curly hair, you carry both off.

    and your poetry and performance is stunning, you'd be an amazing actress

    x x x

  • i looooooooooooove ur poetry! U remind me a lot like me! stop by my channel, I promise you'll love it! Ur sooo beautiful when you deliver your soul!

  • I like the fro better.

  • meh 2

    she iz a great flowist....her poetry iz amazing

  • wow. i could watch this over and over and over.

    your voice is just...idk, lovely, for lack of a better word

    you're one of my favorite poets!

  • This is the truth!

  • love this!

  • BEAUTiiFUL!

  • this is so deep. i feel exactly like this

  • all ur stuff is so deep and I love it

  • Beautiful woman and Beautiful words!

    You are very talented!!

    <3 Brenda

  • You are great with the delivery of your poetry. At first I thought your videos was a tutorial on natural hair,(which your curls is Beautiful!) but had to take notice your talent. Do you attend poetry night on a regular basis? No matter, you're great at it.:)

  • That is REAL! A life lesson learned not long ago. I'm glad I was able to pick it up because I see a lot of men and women still high on a lie and misinterpretation on their own and others emotions. Real honest of you to write this personal piece and posting it up!

  • beautiful poem, beautiful girl! much luv to my habesha sista!

  • thats just it !

    ii been tryna

    get this pint across !

    u miss the idea of being loved you know?

  • its really easy ...

    to get it twisted...so true thanks for sharing this!

  • I just love your work so much. Keep creating. Your work's just nuthin' but good for everyone it touches.

    P.S. The straight hair rocks too.

  • I'm feeling the vide. M.O.B-Mind Over Body.

    Severe Poetry

  • LOvin ur natural n straight hair gorgeous!! but i needed that!! i can identify with that situation right now. Thanks. your a blessing!!! :)

  • Girl this was amazing for so long I wonder if I really missed him and now I understand I missed the feeling that I got with him but so him at all.....This was great you spoke what I and many others felt

  • that was a great peom!

    by the way r u ethiopian?

  • No he's saying that he's surprised that there are no girls saying that her hair it's fake. I don't know why he's sooo surprised though - she's a beautiful girl no one needs to hate on her.

    Lovely poem.

  • Great! a Limitless love is sting my favorite one!

  • Semhar I LOOOOOVE your poems,girl! This one is like a follow up to your other poem "God gave me 7 days with you". GREAT Stuff.