New Breed Code

[naserq]

sure i think you are,

[ziggymermaid]

Is this the improved one? I guess it's better than the first one I saw. It's still the audio, something is off. Can you improve in the enunciation and diction? I'm sorry, but I was just thinking, it sounds too filipino, maybe you can put a little tone at the end of the words, it will sound more of the english language. Overall, I liked it. The colors and the flashing lights were good and the music fits the presentation.

[ziggymermaid]

sorry, i didn't really know how to put my comments into words awhile ago but i was thinking. If I'm right, what you're trying to project/present is like a futuristic way of narrating. Am I right? If it is, I suggest that the narration won't be as choppy as it sounds. The narrator could somehow read it as natural as possible with the digital support of making it futuristic. Maybe like a little echo or something.

[greenarmor]

Thank you sir :)

[naserq]

nice work ,glad to see you in proggree

[greenarmor]

Thank you Again...recently I'm working with another video and I try to improve the voice over

I expected more critics from all of you guys..huwag magsawa mag comments... it help me a lot..

[komikero]

I thought it was very nice overall. I agree with the audio, or specifically the voice. Her voice isn't bad naman, maybe just needs a little modulation to add some timbre to it, a little more weight.

[greenarmor]

Thanks!

[ziggymermaid]

Hi, just saw the video. I think it's good. Digital wise. Looks and the general theme is consistent. I have a little comment on the audio though. The narration is not really catchy too me. I think it needs a little more life and maybe the way it was read wasn't really impressive. Please take it as a constructive criiticism but overall, it's really good.