Is this your first? It flows very well, and you seem to have an intuitive feel for the piano...I think this is very beautiful! Certainly not mediocre, and I'm not just saying that to be nice: I'm notorious for my frank opinions, when I choose to give them ^_^
I'm going to add this to my favorites :P Thanks for uploading! =)
Yeah after hearing again, it's not that bad as a piano arrangement... and an orchestration would be fitting, perhaps with some fine tuning, to make it sound even better.
Well, this is from over a half and year ago so your opinions may have changed about it but...
At least you could think of something and post it up :P I've tried to 'compose' things before, but I've only managed to come up with random fragments lol. But I dunno...seeing your video inspires me to do something ^^
Out of curiosity...have you worked on the piece since?
Hi! Yes, I matured quite then, I actually plan to convert this into a MIDI orchestra, their a lot of good parts I could use. I believe this piece could translate well into an actual score, hopefully I will have time to get around to it. Thanks again!
cheonhopark my dear friend, 1st of all congrats for getting into Brown, gotta make it to squeenix buddy! =). This is a very nice piece indeed, and for some reason when I listened to it I was kinda reminded of Tifa and Garnet lol, dunno why, I guess it's the progression of the chords. But anyways, thx for uploading this, it reminds me that I gotta touch up my composing skill again hehe, =).
I strongly encourage you sir to compose, I was wondering about your skills... because I am sure since you have a strong interest and knowledge of chords, you will probably come up with something marvelous, not noob like mine where I have to just listen to see if something sounds right... but I will get better, I think, Thanks! I appreciate comments from you =D
lol, you my friend, are quite hmm far from being a noob lol, and yes we all will get better eventually, but problem is I can't seem to find a time to just sit down and be creative lol, gotta blame this on Crisis Core haha, =p
THIS is your first composition? Man, you should be really proud. I love this song.
If you write sheet music for this, you should post it somewhere. I would love to learn how to play Reminiscent of the Aura when I get better at playing the keyboard.
Wow, that is very flattering... once I get the composition squared away... I probably could write it in a midi program once I get the time too =D thanks for comment!
Hail to your first composition! hail to CheonHoPark. majoring in Game Development! Good for you! It's amazing your first composition! Most likely it could have been better, but still it was great to witness your composition. ^^ nice.
hey kyle i know i haven't commented on any of ur vids so this probably will be the first, i really like ur composition and its very nice to hear. the bear enjoyed it too(two points!!)don't stop doing what u like to do,ok. always keep smiling
Very Nice! i love your original work. i dont knwo if htis is the right place to ask for requests but i would love to hear some Mother 1, 2, or 3 songs. or some stuff from phoenix wright
Well, soo even though your not a composer and in a way it's repetitive, it's still good, and nice to listen to, besides in games songs are usually rather repetitive except opening and ending themes and what so ever.
I didn't have a very nice ending of the day today, but you sure did help bring me back up again! This is so unique, I can feel the emotion, the feeling of it ran through my veins, my whole body. This is absolutely the best! I LOVE IT! It's pretty cool, if you fast forward you can see the candle die xD I really like the flowers too btw!! I appreciate everything you've done for me T_T
yay, the prince has finally arrived, I was waiting for your response, sir that has made my day. You are a great cheery lot, and there a lot of people who respect you. I am glad you had a great happy birthday and I am glad things made much better. I hope you feel very special because you should, you are a great guy, and best fan we ever could have had!
That was nice to listen to x)i was thinking of making charles a composition for his birthday but it was a little hard when i only had 2 days to prepare something for him lol so i used another creative side to me to come up with something, but that was a nice piece you just played x)it was nice to hear it xD composing is rather hard Oo i have enough trouble myself
haha thanks kim, yeah it's very difficult, but you have come up with many melodies which I am sure you have improved. I have a lot more respect for composers. People who compose also have increased musical memory and skill I think. So my respects go out to you too =D
The vid i made for charles has finally uploaded after many hours of trying to fix it for 2 days lol and now i can go back to my piano and record the other piece i am making xD and i'll post it so you can give me some opinions =P lol
Hooray for your first composition! That was awesome, I'm serious. Though you said the near ending was intentional, it really sounded like nasty mess ups. Were you trying to change keys? Also happy birthday to Scrappy!
Thanks! Part of it was that I wasn't too sure when I should end the piece, and now that I re listen to it... I think it ended too abruptly. Hopefully I can fix that up for my revision.
Haha that's a good idea Alex, thanks for watching! How's your spring break coming, do you have your books? We went to brown today and it seems like they were only open Tuesday, my brother and I will have to get our books on mon. morning.
Me too, I figured they were not open over the break. I hope we get 3DS Max though! My spring break is going good, I never went up north because my grandpa was coming down for a birthday party. So i have just been playing Call of Duty 4 and Skies of Arcadia haha. What about your break?
My brother and I spent spring break helping our dad build a room up in the attic. My dad's a big pack rat, so that took awhile getting all that crap out of there... aside from that we pretty much just doing some photoshop stuff, and relaxing.
Aaaand the accords are... D#, F and Gm! Really nostalgic. This sounds much like something I'd improvise ^^. You messed it up a bit at the end. But otherwise good!
wipe off that dust from the top of the piano, hahahah , good night!
iif5 4 months ago
@iif5 hehe some people have stated that before as well on my other videos. Yes, you two GOOD NIGHT, although it's afternoon here.
CheonHoPark 4 months ago
you should play through the fire and flames on the piano while its on fire! :D
pocodude1 8 months ago
@pocodude1 lol, good one!
CheonHoPark 8 months ago
At first I thought it was going to be weak but this is freaking Juice, dude! It needs some drums to go along with it.
Charlymaumushi 1 year ago
@Charlymaumushi
Um...well, nothing much, really! O)O
Yeah, an orchestra could probably flesh this out really well :)
SergeOfArniVillage 1 year ago
Is this your first? It flows very well, and you seem to have an intuitive feel for the piano...I think this is very beautiful! Certainly not mediocre, and I'm not just saying that to be nice: I'm notorious for my frank opinions, when I choose to give them ^_^
I'm going to add this to my favorites :P Thanks for uploading! =)
SergeOfArniVillage 1 year ago
@SergeOfArniVillage What up time surfer?
Charlymaumushi 1 year ago
Great job, I would definitely like to hear a midi version of this piece.
I liked your transition at 2:14.
Great job!
kuandohan 2 years ago
Hi, thanks.
Yeah after hearing again, it's not that bad as a piano arrangement... and an orchestration would be fitting, perhaps with some fine tuning, to make it sound even better.
CheonHoPark 2 years ago
Shouldn't be so hard on yourself :P
Well, this is from over a half and year ago so your opinions may have changed about it but...
At least you could think of something and post it up :P I've tried to 'compose' things before, but I've only managed to come up with random fragments lol. But I dunno...seeing your video inspires me to do something ^^
Out of curiosity...have you worked on the piece since?
Anyways...
Glad the candle didn't blow your house up lol :P
Thanks for sharing :D
keetner 2 years ago
Hi! Yes, I matured quite then, I actually plan to convert this into a MIDI orchestra, their a lot of good parts I could use. I believe this piece could translate well into an actual score, hopefully I will have time to get around to it. Thanks again!
CheonHoPark 2 years ago
The piece at 2:36 - 2:54 was pure class man
Retsam19 3 years ago
(^-^)Good work(^-^)
RinoaHikari 3 years ago
Good work! ;)
Ouro17 3 years ago
Thank you very much!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
This is beautiful, thank you.
okdawit 3 years ago
hey dude, you uploaded this song on my birthday 3rd April..
luffy3 3 years ago
wow! that was amazing! i really love it. i hope you'll make an mp3 file of this in the future xD
AruPi 3 years ago
Thanks!!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Awesome performance by candle-lit cake. This is definitely not mediocre!-especially for a first composition.
shelim23 3 years ago
Thanks Shelim!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
cheonhopark my dear friend, 1st of all congrats for getting into Brown, gotta make it to squeenix buddy! =). This is a very nice piece indeed, and for some reason when I listened to it I was kinda reminded of Tifa and Garnet lol, dunno why, I guess it's the progression of the chords. But anyways, thx for uploading this, it reminds me that I gotta touch up my composing skill again hehe, =).
monsterpanda 3 years ago
I strongly encourage you sir to compose, I was wondering about your skills... because I am sure since you have a strong interest and knowledge of chords, you will probably come up with something marvelous, not noob like mine where I have to just listen to see if something sounds right... but I will get better, I think, Thanks! I appreciate comments from you =D
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
lol, you my friend, are quite hmm far from being a noob lol, and yes we all will get better eventually, but problem is I can't seem to find a time to just sit down and be creative lol, gotta blame this on Crisis Core haha, =p
monsterpanda 3 years ago
hohoho..cool cool cool
valkx 3 years ago
thanks!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Majoring in game development, influenced by FF? =)
I think I will buy. Make sure you add some of your music into it as well =D
Duralm 3 years ago
Yes sir! Thanks, I appreciate the support!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
OMG... first composition very nice
helenxangel 3 years ago
thank you very much!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
God I love this
ScrappyCD206 3 years ago
yes sir scrups!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
THIS is your first composition? Man, you should be really proud. I love this song.
If you write sheet music for this, you should post it somewhere. I would love to learn how to play Reminiscent of the Aura when I get better at playing the keyboard.
ilikeflyingkitties 3 years ago
Wow, that is very flattering... once I get the composition squared away... I probably could write it in a midi program once I get the time too =D thanks for comment!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Hail to your first composition! hail to CheonHoPark. majoring in Game Development! Good for you! It's amazing your first composition! Most likely it could have been better, but still it was great to witness your composition. ^^ nice.
FFVV 3 years ago
Thank you very much! Yes it was and I am proud of this event =D
I appreciate your support!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Great Performance. Nice Song.
Roli79 3 years ago
Thanks bud!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Wow, it's already his Birthday? It feels just like last week when you and your brother made that other video for him! lol.
But anyways, really nice playing! I especially love 2:20~ hehe =)
keetner 3 years ago
Thank you very much! Haha, still remember that one... That was fun =P
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
hey kyle i know i haven't commented on any of ur vids so this probably will be the first, i really like ur composition and its very nice to hear. the bear enjoyed it too(two points!!)don't stop doing what u like to do,ok. always keep smiling
Alice9 3 years ago
Thank you very much Linda, and I appreciate the support and comments!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
amazing video man you really have a gift on piano, i've been watching your videos for a long time but haven't posted, loved this one! keep it up =]
Zackamabufoo 3 years ago 2
I am glad you like it Zack
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
=P The names James =]hi
Zackamabufoo 3 years ago
excuse me, James ;)
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
That was nicely expressive playing. I enjoyed it.
JenCatLady 3 years ago
thanks jen I appreciate it =)
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Very Nice! i love your original work. i dont knwo if htis is the right place to ask for requests but i would love to hear some Mother 1, 2, or 3 songs. or some stuff from phoenix wright
joltmasta 3 years ago
Thanks, I will keep that in mind.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
sexyy ;)
NoobusCrane 3 years ago
Haha, yes it is xD
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Really nice good job =D
aBubaf 3 years ago
Thanks ;)
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Close youre eyes when you lissen to this.
You feel the harmony from it.
It really calms me down.
Thank you.
Yellowcat126 3 years ago
I am glad the results of my first composition wasn't as ear bleeding as I thought it would have, thank you very much!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Thank you for sharing this with us.
your music has something special.
i have been inspired so much!
with respect
lonlonjp
lonlonjp 3 years ago
Thanks lonlon! I appreciate your views and comments.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Well, soo even though your not a composer and in a way it's repetitive, it's still good, and nice to listen to, besides in games songs are usually rather repetitive except opening and ending themes and what so ever.
DeathScourge 3 years ago
Just so you wont get the wrong idea > I really liked it lol
DeathScourge 3 years ago
No no, that is quality structural criticism and I appreciate it =D
Thank you very much sir!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
you've composed a beautiful song there! I think you should make more of these in the future! Really!
FlyingDutchman02 3 years ago
Yes and I planned to... I figured that is the best way to increase my piano skills, thank you very much!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Btw I love rice krispies! I didn't even have to say anything, and you knew!! :D
ScrappyCD206 3 years ago
haha I could have sent that to you in the mail. yum.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
I didn't have a very nice ending of the day today, but you sure did help bring me back up again! This is so unique, I can feel the emotion, the feeling of it ran through my veins, my whole body. This is absolutely the best! I LOVE IT! It's pretty cool, if you fast forward you can see the candle die xD I really like the flowers too btw!! I appreciate everything you've done for me T_T
ScrappyCD206 3 years ago
yay, the prince has finally arrived, I was waiting for your response, sir that has made my day. You are a great cheery lot, and there a lot of people who respect you. I am glad you had a great happy birthday and I am glad things made much better. I hope you feel very special because you should, you are a great guy, and best fan we ever could have had!
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
That was nice to listen to x)i was thinking of making charles a composition for his birthday but it was a little hard when i only had 2 days to prepare something for him lol so i used another creative side to me to come up with something, but that was a nice piece you just played x)it was nice to hear it xD composing is rather hard Oo i have enough trouble myself
jubjubpirate 3 years ago
haha thanks kim, yeah it's very difficult, but you have come up with many melodies which I am sure you have improved. I have a lot more respect for composers. People who compose also have increased musical memory and skill I think. So my respects go out to you too =D
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
aww thanks xD but you musnt deny that you are also a good composer because you have made something pretty and nice to listen to xD
jubjubpirate 3 years ago
The vid i made for charles has finally uploaded after many hours of trying to fix it for 2 days lol and now i can go back to my piano and record the other piece i am making xD and i'll post it so you can give me some opinions =P lol
jubjubpirate 3 years ago
haha okay kim, I'll stay tuned. I'll take a look at your new video too.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
lol its his birthday again! happy birthday scrappy, and also you cheonhopark/travis, even thought its not lol
lloydx4 3 years ago
haha
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Thanks lloydx4!!
ScrappyCD206 3 years ago
COOL
try playing some songs from Fate/Stay Night!! the anime not game O_O
XaldBalghostriped 3 years ago
I should scrounge around youtube for those pieces, I haven't heard of that anime. Thanks for the comment.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Hooray for your first composition! That was awesome, I'm serious. Though you said the near ending was intentional, it really sounded like nasty mess ups. Were you trying to change keys? Also happy birthday to Scrappy!
Phystri 3 years ago
Thanks! Part of it was that I wasn't too sure when I should end the piece, and now that I re listen to it... I think it ended too abruptly. Hopefully I can fix that up for my revision.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Thats a neat song. Your definitely gonna have to send me the design doc ;)
Or we should get together and plan for our 9th quarter stuff haha!
Osirus1156 3 years ago
Haha that's a good idea Alex, thanks for watching! How's your spring break coming, do you have your books? We went to brown today and it seems like they were only open Tuesday, my brother and I will have to get our books on mon. morning.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Me too, I figured they were not open over the break. I hope we get 3DS Max though! My spring break is going good, I never went up north because my grandpa was coming down for a birthday party. So i have just been playing Call of Duty 4 and Skies of Arcadia haha. What about your break?
Osirus1156 3 years ago
My brother and I spent spring break helping our dad build a room up in the attic. My dad's a big pack rat, so that took awhile getting all that crap out of there... aside from that we pretty much just doing some photoshop stuff, and relaxing.
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Haha my dad is too, however we don't have an attic, so I'm safe. Did you see that new photo I put up on Facebook?
Osirus1156 3 years ago
Do you mean the one with your and the sweater? Hmm I think I seen that one before...
Unless the new one didn't update yet?
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
No, it was in my photoshop album, it is an exploding planet.
Osirus1156 3 years ago
lol funnily enough it's my b-day tomorrow, i'll be 15 :) amazing playing i always love your covers, 5*'s and favourited
Roxasownsyou 3 years ago
haha thanks... happy birthday to you too =D
CheonHoPark 3 years ago
Aaaand the accords are... D#, F and Gm! Really nostalgic. This sounds much like something I'd improvise ^^. You messed it up a bit at the end. But otherwise good!
WilleH1 3 years ago
nope it was purely intentional ;)
CheonHoPark 3 years ago