no he didn't write it, people on youtube wrote it as a contest, yes the lyrics are cliche, they are supposed to be, and there are actually more updated lyrics now that are much better
I sent your account a message, because I really didn't want to just post my email write where everybody could see it, but if it's necessary, I can post my email address here to get the track.
Hum. There should be a little more time between the choruses and the normal verses. It seems that the chorus just starts like right after a verse finishes. Might wanna revise that.
Sounds fantastic! How did you get the vocal on there? Please send me a track because I want to remix it add some beats and synth lines, though I won't have time to do it before the deadline as I have booked tickets to watch Indiana Jones!
Whenever I hear "take this all the way" I can't help but chuckle.
ntwiles 1 year ago
i think i still like this version better than the one that actually was finished...
Fenrir171 2 years ago
Is this the COMPLETE finished version? Like the one Rivers finished at the end of the contest? Please answer
uktah 2 years ago
nope, this is very different, it doesnt have the new chorus/breakdown
thehalo2renegade 2 years ago
WHERE DO I GET THE MP3!
MUSICfromFDALE 2 years ago
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did rivers write that?
man the guys lost it.
dupersloby 2 years ago
no he didn't write it, people on youtube wrote it as a contest, yes the lyrics are cliche, they are supposed to be, and there are actually more updated lyrics now that are much better
thehalo2renegade 2 years ago
he hasn't made anything substantial since maladriot
dupersloby 2 years ago
what about the greatest man that ever lived?
=swoop=
htdjose 2 years ago
eh, not really.
dupersloby 2 years ago
Sounds like a hit.
ngaiox 2 years ago 2
this is great man.
starsnoon 3 years ago
looove it :D
peeledxbanana 3 years ago
Did it ever get uploaded?
BluesMaddy 3 years ago
You did a great job dude!!
Sounds fab : )
natalieilleana 3 years ago
I sent your account a message, because I really didn't want to just post my email write where everybody could see it, but if it's necessary, I can post my email address here to get the track.
Matthus8888 3 years ago
What do you need from me to get the full-quality file?
mvrober2 3 years ago
Hum. There should be a little more time between the choruses and the normal verses. It seems that the chorus just starts like right after a verse finishes. Might wanna revise that.
PrFTW 3 years ago
Mini-crescendo, right?
ngaiox 2 years ago
I really like this.
kh2218 3 years ago
I'd really like to have that full quality file, this sounds great!
vorloxu 3 years ago
I too would love to hear the uncompressed file :)
dcware 3 years ago
Sounds like a potential single. Good job!
PrFTW 3 years ago
Very nice
StewMeat 3 years ago
Excellent!
Sounds fantastic! How did you get the vocal on there? Please send me a track because I want to remix it add some beats and synth lines, though I won't have time to do it before the deadline as I have booked tickets to watch Indiana Jones!
chrwil1973 3 years ago
Sounds like it belongs on Blue... amazing, I'd love to have a copy.
Keep up the awesome work!
Raikage9 3 years ago
hey, sounds good, did you do anything about the tempo fluctuations? can you send me the full quality version?
thanks!
taylor2d2 3 years ago