nice work there buddy. What you need to do is listen to some other pieces, and look at how the melodies are presented. You will notice that there are melodies and counter melodies (basically more than one melody playing at the same time) and you need to take notice as to how they balance those melodies. A very basic and widely used method of helping the listener distinguish the primary melody from a background one will be volume.
@godlordy Also, you could allow the volume of a background/counter melody to raise in volume at certain points to show emphasis on the point of a melody that you want to be more present at certain points in the composition.
Well to my untrained ear this sounds fantastic! I've been writing music for almost 20 years but am only just branching out into the realms of orchestral composition so I can't really offer any comments other than just how it sounds to me. There are some great chord progressions in there which invoke the atmosphere very well. I especially like the change of direction at 1:13, very clever
I could give you this piece of advice:
Custom Dystopia (Symphobia Strings) [search this in youtube, best tutorial evaah for symphobia + kontakt]
CedricKristian 10 months ago
nice work there buddy. What you need to do is listen to some other pieces, and look at how the melodies are presented. You will notice that there are melodies and counter melodies (basically more than one melody playing at the same time) and you need to take notice as to how they balance those melodies. A very basic and widely used method of helping the listener distinguish the primary melody from a background one will be volume.
godlordy 1 year ago
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godlordy 1 year ago
@godlordy Also, you could allow the volume of a background/counter melody to raise in volume at certain points to show emphasis on the point of a melody that you want to be more present at certain points in the composition.
godlordy 1 year ago
It sounds great! Really like it!
TriJourneyStudios 1 year ago
Well to my untrained ear this sounds fantastic! I've been writing music for almost 20 years but am only just branching out into the realms of orchestral composition so I can't really offer any comments other than just how it sounds to me. There are some great chord progressions in there which invoke the atmosphere very well. I especially like the change of direction at 1:13, very clever
phoobingcamel 1 year ago