(cont.) The person being hit sells the hits pretty darn well, I gotta say, but the biggest thing is that the aggressor here looks too casual to make it look at all believable. I'm just speaking as someone who's been performing stage combat in front of live audiences for several years, and has had to learn this stuff the hard way. Live audiences can be brutal.
It's kinda funny, which is what I assume you were going for, but if I could offer some constructive criticism. It lacks some intensity on the part of the person doing the hitting. When you're really pissed and fighting someone, there's more intensity there. Would just make it more believable. Also, the sound effects are so loud and obvious, they're intrusive.
thank you so much for your feedback..it was meant to be a lighter, humorous version. thanks for your comments, very appreciated.
JonathanG07 4 years ago
(cont.) The person being hit sells the hits pretty darn well, I gotta say, but the biggest thing is that the aggressor here looks too casual to make it look at all believable. I'm just speaking as someone who's been performing stage combat in front of live audiences for several years, and has had to learn this stuff the hard way. Live audiences can be brutal.
ScarletMinx 4 years ago
It's kinda funny, which is what I assume you were going for, but if I could offer some constructive criticism. It lacks some intensity on the part of the person doing the hitting. When you're really pissed and fighting someone, there's more intensity there. Would just make it more believable. Also, the sound effects are so loud and obvious, they're intrusive.
ScarletMinx 4 years ago
wow
Poptards 4 years ago