nicely done guys, needs more passion. your technique is all there, but you need to get past the whole 'here is the choreography that was given to me i will do as im told to do' phase. make it your own and reach throughout your fingers and toes, just make your movement bigger, because honestly, this choreography isnt all thar exciting.
Just because its lyrical does not mean it has to be completely flowy and slow and boring. The moves were executed nicely. But the energy was not there. This song is about self harm. It's so emotional and has such a powerful message and I did not see that. So while it was pretty clean and the moves were accurate, your hearts were not in it.
um the choreography is kind of boring, slow and awkward. definitely take out the rolly thing at 1:43 thats awkward. i liked the end a little bit better because yall picked up the pace. but its still very repetitive, too many jete attitudes and a lot of running in circles. my suggestion is to add some actual choreography to it to make it more interesting. if your having trouble try you tubing some other videos for inspiration. what i did like was the thing where you pulled back the girls at 2:46.
It's a very slow song, I don't think one TO ideal for dancing to. The beginning is slow, and boring,made me want to, I like the relapse of your movements, one girl, then another, then another. But some parts are awkward, and you need to work together. Also, you don't seem very INTO the music, like you're just going through motions. I know you are, but try harder to really put yourself in and feel the music.
Good job you guys!
632justinbieberlover 6 months ago
nicely done guys, needs more passion. your technique is all there, but you need to get past the whole 'here is the choreography that was given to me i will do as im told to do' phase. make it your own and reach throughout your fingers and toes, just make your movement bigger, because honestly, this choreography isnt all thar exciting.
CorieAnne118 10 months ago
SOME REALLY NICE MOMENTS HERE. KUDOS XXXXXXX
roboshea 11 months ago
no passion
deeblabla1 1 year ago
great moves but lacking engery and
megarooish 1 year ago
Just because its lyrical does not mean it has to be completely flowy and slow and boring. The moves were executed nicely. But the energy was not there. This song is about self harm. It's so emotional and has such a powerful message and I did not see that. So while it was pretty clean and the moves were accurate, your hearts were not in it.
Edwardsblndegrly 1 year ago
Great job... loved the girl in green. She made it seem more real, more than just steps memorized
bubblesxoxo1234 1 year ago
LoooL
Elisabethhhhhh 1 year ago
the girl in the green has the most emotion!
Candy1192 1 year ago
wow i love this 1:56 was sooo awesome i love this song too its sooo deep
YurrahAlHadi 2 years ago
That was the best choreography i've ever seen! x)
Amazing, 5 stars ;)
deepblackniran 2 years ago
sia..ah i love this songg
alyssabell100 2 years ago 4
um the choreography is kind of boring, slow and awkward. definitely take out the rolly thing at 1:43 thats awkward. i liked the end a little bit better because yall picked up the pace. but its still very repetitive, too many jete attitudes and a lot of running in circles. my suggestion is to add some actual choreography to it to make it more interesting. if your having trouble try you tubing some other videos for inspiration. what i did like was the thing where you pulled back the girls at 2:46.
sarahmarie7474 2 years ago
wheres the dance???
aaronfuegopop 2 years ago
It's a very slow song, I don't think one TO ideal for dancing to. The beginning is slow, and boring,made me want to, I like the relapse of your movements, one girl, then another, then another. But some parts are awkward, and you need to work together. Also, you don't seem very INTO the music, like you're just going through motions. I know you are, but try harder to really put yourself in and feel the music.
ElElefanteyBuho 2 years ago
i agree with myworldis Dance. so boring and lacking so much energy. this could be beautiful and it would NOT do good at competiton
bugdancer1614 2 years ago 4
my world is dance doesn't know what they're talking about.
This dance is amazing an the song was beautiful.
well done!
xoxo
laurenjemma92 2 years ago
ohk,whoever "myworldisDance" is is not a very good dancer then.if they took this to a competition it would do well there. O_0
XxSceneMuchxX 2 years ago
slow, boring and totally lacking energy
myworldisDance 2 years ago 2
well i thought it was good, expecially cuz the song was slow, so it went well, i love the song too :)
karatekiwiz 2 years ago