I like the beat and general feel of it, but the bubbling sound sucks a giant deer vagaina. It doesn't compliment the general soft tone. Add something different to replace it. Also, get rid of the damn guitar solo sound! It completely ruined the beat. You need something different. I can't put my finger on it without experimenting with it myself. Without the bubbles and the guitar it sounds beautiful, but if you want to add more you'll need more experimentation.
Idk, Davion and me lieks the guitar. I guess that is a very subjective part.
Bubbling-Had there been a better sound, I would have used it, I have a limited catalog that could have replaced it, so I was stuck with empty space of that sound. It had an ambient feel.
I don't think it will be worth the effort to make a second version of the same song, or take this one down and have to do the whole machine transfer BS to redo an upload.
I like this one, for some reason I can see it being an ambient sound in some video game. Such as a factory area or industrial zone. Idk that is just what came to mind.
I can't see it in a game. Maybe, a hugantic boss coming out of the ground, playing the synth parts, but thats about it.
Quite frankly, this thing is weird by my standard, and I listen to Dr Octagon (rapper, who has the persona of a time traveling gynecologist from jupiter)
War + Natual Desasters + Giving Tax Dollars to other countries + Paying Banks that do nothing for you + it goes on and on = its all going to be gone soon if it isnt already + what happend to all the missing trillions of tax dollars + Where is all the missing Gold at Ft. Knox + Removing Crosses from churches and wiping out God from our country Many othe things. + Dont Give Up People !
I believe we should have a war tax for the rich man. This tax would only be charged when American Soldiers are being killed overseas. Everything a millionaire owned would be totaled and he would be taxed 1% on all his property's value over 100 million. If 1% isn't enough to stop the wars we can make it 2 %. Now I wouldn't want to tax someone with less net worth then 100 Million as, that is who you and I work for and he simply pays us less to pay his taxes.
I like the beat and general feel of it, but the bubbling sound sucks a giant deer vagaina. It doesn't compliment the general soft tone. Add something different to replace it. Also, get rid of the damn guitar solo sound! It completely ruined the beat. You need something different. I can't put my finger on it without experimenting with it myself. Without the bubbles and the guitar it sounds beautiful, but if you want to add more you'll need more experimentation.
NexusNocturnal75 4 months ago
@NexusNocturnal75
Idk, Davion and me lieks the guitar. I guess that is a very subjective part.
Bubbling-Had there been a better sound, I would have used it, I have a limited catalog that could have replaced it, so I was stuck with empty space of that sound. It had an ambient feel.
I don't think it will be worth the effort to make a second version of the same song, or take this one down and have to do the whole machine transfer BS to redo an upload.
Deer vagina? Why those in specific?
fonkymaster 4 months ago
@fonkymaster The bubbling sound makes me think of bongs, not relaxing. Perhaps you could try the sound of rain instead.
Because.
NexusNocturnal75 4 months ago
@NexusNocturnal75
Bongs=High=Relaxing though.
Unless you are on LSD. Then ur ass won't be sitting down because of purple unicorns.
fonkymaster 4 months ago
I like this one, for some reason I can see it being an ambient sound in some video game. Such as a factory area or industrial zone. Idk that is just what came to mind.
Eragon185 4 months ago
@Eragon185
I can't see it in a game. Maybe, a hugantic boss coming out of the ground, playing the synth parts, but thats about it.
Quite frankly, this thing is weird by my standard, and I listen to Dr Octagon (rapper, who has the persona of a time traveling gynecologist from jupiter)
fonkymaster 4 months ago
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War + Natual Desasters + Giving Tax Dollars to other countries + Paying Banks that do nothing for you + it goes on and on = its all going to be gone soon if it isnt already + what happend to all the missing trillions of tax dollars + Where is all the missing Gold at Ft. Knox + Removing Crosses from churches and wiping out God from our country Many othe things. + Dont Give Up People !
aux1z11 4 months ago
I believe we should have a war tax for the rich man. This tax would only be charged when American Soldiers are being killed overseas. Everything a millionaire owned would be totaled and he would be taxed 1% on all his property's value over 100 million. If 1% isn't enough to stop the wars we can make it 2 %. Now I wouldn't want to tax someone with less net worth then 100 Million as, that is who you and I work for and he simply pays us less to pay his taxes.
SidneyBou 4 months ago
@SidneyBou
Interesting idea.
Wait, how did you find this video? It is....oh, my tags *facepalm*
fonkymaster 4 months ago