Great cinematography work, really impressed. But I'm afraid halfway through this part I stopped watching ...
As a piece of drama, it's just too slow, sorry. 15 minutes in and I know nothing of significance about any of the characters, and there's no real mystery yet to wonder about. Pacing problems.
seems pretty good, far better portrayal of a new Doctor than most fan films, however calling Alice's friend Young Lady jarred a bit. Plus the dialogue was hard to hear after Alice got attacked by the dinosaur.
(Please Don't Comment On The Capital Letter Thing,It's An Annoying Habit) Liking It,Though It Lacks Realism. What's The Point Of So Much Grading? Doctor Who Is About Taking An Ordinary Person From Earth On The Trip Of Their Lifetime. The Whole Idea Is Too Relate To That Person,And You Can't Really Relate To Alice If Everything Around Her Is Graded,Looking Surreal. Also I Think The Script Made Things Over Dramatic At Times. Maybe You Should Tone Down All This,Making It All More Realistic.
Not nitpicking. Think it's great, but if you use all your own stuff, use your own music too. I think it's a chance to get an up and coming musician/composer some recognition. I just don't want the BBC to go all crazy and demand they remove it, being copyrighted and all.
Spot on mate...a little lacking in confidence, and it also aped some of RTD's stuff like a lot of fanfilms do, rather than do something a little original.
No worse than "real" Doctor Who, but then that's crap to.
1917redstar 8 months ago
@1917redstar If you don't like Doctor Who, may I ask why you're watching a Doctor Who fan film? Seems a bit illogical.
jedr1989 3 weeks ago
its great but the only thing that bugs me is the audio levels
boybob2 9 months ago
I think that was one of the best "Doctor Meets Companion" scenes in a while.
Alice kind of loosely reminds me of Sarah in the beginning of Labyrinth.
NateSean 9 months ago
Nothing can go wrong when you go wandering through the woods of Maryland. Right Blair Witch Project?
NateSean 9 months ago
wouldn't you be screaming if you were attacked by a veloceraptor?
Vestamusic 1 year ago
"You're trespassing"
"Why, do you live here?"
"No"
"Then you're trespassing"
So something Tom Baker would say. Brilliant!
auro1001 1 year ago
"You're trespassing"
"Why, do you live here?"
"Then, you're trespassing"
So Tom Baker!
auro1001 1 year ago
Great cinematography work, really impressed. But I'm afraid halfway through this part I stopped watching ...
As a piece of drama, it's just too slow, sorry. 15 minutes in and I know nothing of significance about any of the characters, and there's no real mystery yet to wonder about. Pacing problems.
MurrayTheMac 1 year ago 2
@MurrayTheMac Like, 3 minutes further in there's a dinosaur
PapercutTwilight 1 year ago
Enjoying it,my only criticism and I do mean, my only criticism, the Doctor's English accent is a bit dodgy, but so was David Tennant's lol.
Keep at it guy's, I'd love to see more
marthavell 1 year ago
any know when next 1 comeing out
djfreebey 1 year ago
I love how he totally read what she was thinking, from, like, a grunt
LaraDarkwood 1 year ago
seems pretty good, far better portrayal of a new Doctor than most fan films, however calling Alice's friend Young Lady jarred a bit. Plus the dialogue was hard to hear after Alice got attacked by the dinosaur.
Jez32uk 1 year ago
So much grading! Other than that it was rather good, actually.
TurtleIndustries 1 year ago
love it love it love it
CampRockfan40 1 year ago
the doctor looks like my pe teacher, lol
kylephantom4 1 year ago
(Please Don't Comment On The Capital Letter Thing,It's An Annoying Habit) Liking It,Though It Lacks Realism. What's The Point Of So Much Grading? Doctor Who Is About Taking An Ordinary Person From Earth On The Trip Of Their Lifetime. The Whole Idea Is Too Relate To That Person,And You Can't Really Relate To Alice If Everything Around Her Is Graded,Looking Surreal. Also I Think The Script Made Things Over Dramatic At Times. Maybe You Should Tone Down All This,Making It All More Realistic.
HTprods 2 years ago
I hope Alice steps up the acting!
snapecharmer 2 years ago 2
@snapecharmer the dr needs 2 step us the acting
SPASMSthePENGUIN 2 years ago
Love it so far, but cribbing the music from the show is kind of a cop out! Not that it doesn't fit perfectly..... I'm conflicted!
snapecharmer 2 years ago
It's DW, so it uses DW music, I don't see the problem
This si the best fan episode you could get, don't nitpick it too badly
Murdock129 2 years ago 2
Not nitpicking. Think it's great, but if you use all your own stuff, use your own music too. I think it's a chance to get an up and coming musician/composer some recognition. I just don't want the BBC to go all crazy and demand they remove it, being copyrighted and all.
snapecharmer 2 years ago 3
lol not bad at all!
Nice to see they're taking to DW over the pond ;)
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GeordieDan89 2 years ago
I'm liking this fan film. it's really cool!
dancergirl 2 years ago 3
I <3 Alice <3 <3
Sanchara 2 years ago
AWESOMENESS
crdbrdconstructor 2 years ago
Everybody's a critic lol. Well done.
crmfghtr 2 years ago
I like how you still use the series music.
weemcghee100 2 years ago
Definitely one of the better fan films I've seen. Writing and acting are a little dodgy, but even RTD gets there sometimes...
dragounsleer 2 years ago
Hello Russell T Davis screws up in nearly every script he writes
The only one of his episodes I really think is good and can remember as his is Utopia
And even then he made Martha and Jack spend a scene bitching about Rose
Murdock129 2 years ago
We wouldn't be talking about Who now if it weren't for him.
WorldVideophone 2 years ago
@WorldVideophone It doesn't mean we can't criticise.
akiugn 1 year ago
@akiugn As far as I'm aware I made no attempt to deter you fom criticism.
WorldVideophone 1 year ago
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The Doctor sounds like he's got a cold. Honestly America, you can't do good brit impressions!!! LOL.
TheKingofthemods1995 2 years ago
"Must you do that - make that annoying sound with that hole in your face?"
That's typical Doctor - and I love the fact that the Doctor with a sentence can make Alice's best friend speechless
For a fan made film - very good (so far) LOL
Disneyewok 2 years ago 14
Hmmm, WOW! ABSOLUTLY FANTASTIC! :O:O:O:O
JakeCanner 2 years ago 2
slightly dodgy writing and acting, but very impressive for a fan film!
PrincessOfAvalon 2 years ago 2
Spot on mate...a little lacking in confidence, and it also aped some of RTD's stuff like a lot of fanfilms do, rather than do something a little original.
heyarnoldsknee 2 years ago 2
"I'm listening to the ground"
Brilliant!
Grantwebb13 2 years ago 9
Wow, cheesy smile, but i'm very impressed :)
drwhoinsidethebox 2 years ago