As an actor, you have acting ability but dramatic doesn't always mean you have to yell and cry. There are other emotions you can tap into to make this piece more colorful. Good job.
not the best that i have seen. there is definetly more of a dynamic that could be played here. yeah shes been hurt and betrayed but if you play the words not the emotions then you can understand it. Shes talking about someone who she literally gave her life to. She feels broken. So be broken, not so much anger.
Screaming doesn't mean its passionate and truthful. It just became a shouting match for most of it. You def. have a clear idea of what the text means and who you are talking about. But its such an obvious choice to scream and shout the words. it would be nice to see how you would do this but do it the opposite of how you did it here. Explore different sides to the character, Experiment with different levels and different aspects of her personality. Keep up the good work though! Good luck.
As an actor, you have acting ability but dramatic doesn't always mean you have to yell and cry. There are other emotions you can tap into to make this piece more colorful. Good job.
brwnsgr07 2 months ago
Does anybody have the actual text for this? I'd like this monologue to practice emotional range with. Thank you. :)
ROROkokemo 1 year ago
wow you were awesomme..you actually bought tears to my eyes job well done!!
lylywalker954 1 year ago
not the best that i have seen. there is definetly more of a dynamic that could be played here. yeah shes been hurt and betrayed but if you play the words not the emotions then you can understand it. Shes talking about someone who she literally gave her life to. She feels broken. So be broken, not so much anger.
kellymm0129 2 years ago 4
i like it
sheybaybii 2 years ago
Screaming doesn't mean its passionate and truthful. It just became a shouting match for most of it. You def. have a clear idea of what the text means and who you are talking about. But its such an obvious choice to scream and shout the words. it would be nice to see how you would do this but do it the opposite of how you did it here. Explore different sides to the character, Experiment with different levels and different aspects of her personality. Keep up the good work though! Good luck.
jocelyn0000 2 years ago 12
That was so very passionate!! I loved it!
WildhunedsS 2 years ago
Excellent!! You were the best!!
mperal23 2 years ago