"Your rudeness puts me off, but your usage of the word 'please' has me intrigued..."
God, I love this. It amazes me that it's not a show already; the voice acting's nothing if not wonderful, the drawing's impeccable, the characters are all interesting and quirky and the dialogue is incredibly well-written (especially Prettyboy's lines; I can imagine the thesaurus time you spent on that.)
Positively gorgeous and wonderfully unique, I hope to see this on TV sometime soon. Keep up the good work.
This is SO awesome!! :D Frosty beverages for EVERYONE!! This MUST be made into a show!! :D I would watch it all the time! Can't wait for the finished product! :D
Thanks! Nope, nobody's picked up the show. John and I are making this short ourselves, however, so maybe when it's done, it'll generate some noise. ^_^
I wasn't necessarily thinking of BLB specifically, but Tex Avery was the king of this type of fast-paced visual gag. His groundwork naturally helps inform almost everything I do.
"I'm rich you know. when I get out of this, I'll buy some..... hurting you!"
I'm not sure if it's the screen ratio you had to use to get this on youtube, but the framing is bad in many places; tangents, objects being cut off and so forth. Very funny!
+ All the characters talked too quickly. I didn't pick up some of the lines.
+ Each character has the same sort of "brainiac", hightened vocabulary speech. It's understandable if Eddie has it, but Pretty Boy should use a different dialect, like a prep.
+ The ghost was in almost every frame Eddie was in, yet he had so very lines in comparison. I'd like to hear more from the ghost.
Wow I'm replying to an old ass post here buuuut, I posit that while they have "heightened" and "braniac" vocabulary their word use and sentence structures are different. Despite all the fifty dollar words, Eddie and Pretty Boy's dialogue are both distinct. Plus, it makes sense that at an upper crust blueblood (especially one with an exaggerated Yale drawl) would have a good vocabulary.
OH MY GOD that face after "There are no such things as coincidences" made me laugh SO hard. I laughed all the way through this though, its AWESOME, perfect timing the whole way through, and good voice acting. Really, I'm so happy this exists.
That's so awesome that I'm going to watch it a million times over. And then I'm gonna rewind... and then I'm gonna watch it some more! And then after that, when I'm done doing all of that watching... I'LL WATCH IT SOME FLIPPIN' MORE! HECK YES!
In short, it's amazing, and I really hope this gets animated some day.
please please please make this
roxanne3344 2 months ago
"ENRIQUE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOOUUU!"
HeavenDrug 10 months ago
Oh my goodness! The writing! The expressions! The voice acting! Everything is just so fantastic!
"Only the toughest of noogies for the both of you!"
HeavenDrug 10 months ago
I simply must know when this show is going to air and on what channel.
didjargo 1 year ago
SCIENCE!!
Oh man, I so wish this was an actual show on tv.
Lorenzo2300 1 year ago 4
This is really GOOD! And fun! I think you could make a go of it on YouTube even! I love the dialog and the voices and screenplay are excellent too.
shatuga 1 year ago
Are you gonna animate this cartooon because I would so love to see this animated.^^
magipink1 1 year ago
This is funny! It should be on tv!
magipink1 1 year ago
Months later, and I *still* love and laugh at this.
DrakkenWasHere 2 years ago 5
What would a calculator have to do with bad luc-
*POW!!!!!!*
XDDDDD
guitarwizard85 2 years ago 2
lol This was so funny! I would so watch this if it was on tv! :D
Strawberries7777 2 years ago
omfg. if this doesnt become a tv show i will forever doubt the brains of cartoonist employers.
this would be the next spongebob! its so funny and random! SO much better than that chowder nonsense they play on cartoon network! WEIRD EDDIE FTW!
spidergal777 2 years ago 3
Anyone Notice that Pretty boy turn his head so that his chin touch his back?
CloneRyu 2 years ago
so it was a calculator.... ingenious!!
jonhylu 2 years ago
My grandmother requires ointment...OINTMENT!!!!!! LOLOLOLOL
guitarwizard85 2 years ago
this should be on TV
SagooBoy 2 years ago
Seriously!! this would make an awesome cartoon series!!
jonhylu 2 years ago
hahaha this is hilarious~~!! XD
I would seriously watch this on TV~
NinjaYuki 2 years ago
Awesome, make it a show.
bambadep 2 years ago
that was great good luck getting on air. =)
ArArYdden 2 years ago
that was awesome
jitterstlongpaw 2 years ago
Enrique....that is pure gold.
jasufox 2 years ago
"Your rudeness puts me off, but your usage of the word 'please' has me intrigued..."
God, I love this. It amazes me that it's not a show already; the voice acting's nothing if not wonderful, the drawing's impeccable, the characters are all interesting and quirky and the dialogue is incredibly well-written (especially Prettyboy's lines; I can imagine the thesaurus time you spent on that.)
Positively gorgeous and wonderfully unique, I hope to see this on TV sometime soon. Keep up the good work.
Notebooked 2 years ago
ENRIQUE HAS DONE NOTHING TO YOOOOOUU!!!!
lol
flashdevil13 2 years ago 3
Greatest, reaction, fucking EVER.
Otacon144 2 years ago
I cant fucking stop watching this!!
ShiraMayonaka 3 years ago
This is genius
KrazyKartoonKid 3 years ago
This is SO awesome!! :D Frosty beverages for EVERYONE!! This MUST be made into a show!! :D I would watch it all the time! Can't wait for the finished product! :D
shmutzman 3 years ago
You, sir... are a genius.
Otacon144 3 years ago
loved it! Your voice actors are great!
Chocotruper 3 years ago 2
the Enrique Iglesias part was just... lol!
I love ittt
ccginc 3 years ago
zomg saw 3:08-3:27 on DeviantART and I can't believe there was more to it! Ekk! Eddie rocks my socks. xD
ChicagoGirl123 3 years ago
If only I knew how to nominate this for a front page feature... :/
takineko 3 years ago 8
Wow I didn't know you did this! EXCITMENT! Yaay I love eddie, is someone picking up your show?
takineko 3 years ago
Thanks! Nope, nobody's picked up the show. John and I are making this short ourselves, however, so maybe when it's done, it'll generate some noise. ^_^
TVsKyle 3 years ago 2
I hope so. Even if it takes a while I hope you guys don't give up on pitching it ^^
takineko 3 years ago 3
@TVsKyle Greetings from the future 2 years later-- is there no finished version of this? I'm going through Eddie withdrawl!
takineko 8 months ago
Absolutely amazing XD
Malunis7NiteBurn 3 years ago
Can you post up "Moobeard"?
Madhatter1903 3 years ago
Seconded.
takineko 3 years ago
Very nice animatic.
Are the bad luck scenes an homage to Tex Avery's "Bad Luck Blackie"?
NerdyDonaldFan 3 years ago
I wasn't necessarily thinking of BLB specifically, but Tex Avery was the king of this type of fast-paced visual gag. His groundwork naturally helps inform almost everything I do.
TVsKyle 3 years ago
I hope you'll animate this one day. The dialogue and plot are enjoyable.
dynamicsketch 3 years ago 3
Thanks! We're workin' on it. We've got lots of scenes done and others in rough form.
TVsKyle 3 years ago
That's good to hear. I can't wait.
dynamicsketch 3 years ago
God I SOOOO wanna see this in flash!
Kyle Your A Genius!
BTW...I've looked at your website and I was wondering what it's like using flash?
Anination 3 years ago
Thanks so much! We're workin' on it. Working with flash is pretty cool, especially when animating traditional-style with it.
TVsKyle 3 years ago
I enjoy some of Specky's one liners. Great use of sound effects during the animatic.
rtidb126 3 years ago
OMG this is sooo cool I love it with all my soul XD
eddie is so cool!
ccginc 3 years ago
I dig this. Strong physical humor, but a nice verbal aspect as well. Hope to see more!
DrBeard 3 years ago
I don't believe in luck. It's just something made up by the Irish to sell cereal.
CripShat27 3 years ago
I want this sooo bad. Soooooooooooo bad!
Runictheunic 3 years ago
lol omg i love this X3
TeddixBea 3 years ago
I absolutely love the voice acting and sound effects!
xHezaChanx 3 years ago
"I DON'T OWN A BOXER!" 8D
Haha! this was brillaint! <3
Ryoura 3 years ago
More cartoons need comical writing of this caliber.
Look forward to seeing this finished.
Paxtin 4 years ago
The girl's dialogue didn't feel as natural as the other characters. Absolutely love Eddie and the Ghost.
phamiru 4 years ago
"I'm rich you know. when I get out of this, I'll buy some..... hurting you!"
I'm not sure if it's the screen ratio you had to use to get this on youtube, but the framing is bad in many places; tangents, objects being cut off and so forth. Very funny!
k10sbride 4 years ago
Good, but:
+ All the characters talked too quickly. I didn't pick up some of the lines.
+ Each character has the same sort of "brainiac", hightened vocabulary speech. It's understandable if Eddie has it, but Pretty Boy should use a different dialect, like a prep.
+ The ghost was in almost every frame Eddie was in, yet he had so very lines in comparison. I'd like to hear more from the ghost.
Other than that, I liked it.
JDCAce 4 years ago 3
@JDCAce
Wow I'm replying to an old ass post here buuuut, I posit that while they have "heightened" and "braniac" vocabulary their word use and sentence structures are different. Despite all the fifty dollar words, Eddie and Pretty Boy's dialogue are both distinct. Plus, it makes sense that at an upper crust blueblood (especially one with an exaggerated Yale drawl) would have a good vocabulary.
joesomenumbers 1 year ago
"...Is that a ghost?"
"Yeah, hi."
I want to see this fully animated!
XD
sayhitoyourmom 4 years ago 2
I think I ruptured something laughing. As soon as I get back from the hospital I'll tell you how great I think this is.
12Dee3 4 years ago
This is continuously hilarious. The funny DOESN'T STOP. Hear that, Nickelodeon???
AwesomelyTheRenz 4 years ago
Ahahaa!
"WHAT HAS ENRIQUE DONE TO YOU?!!" Best part ever XD
I REALLY hope this one day becomes a show! I love it so much XD
Mokenda 4 years ago
I'd watch it. It's hilarious. "INRIQUE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU!!!!" especially. As was "[Luck]'s just something made up by the Irish to sell cereal."
HauntingYourKids 4 years ago
That was hilarious. Good luck on getting it animated.
After watching it a few times, my favorite line is still, "I'm rich, you know! When I get out of this, I'm going to buy some... hurting you.
ForAwesomeness 4 years ago
aaaahahaha! I hope this comes out soon, I absolutely loved this!
SkaLee 4 years ago
I like it! rely cool bro! lol
unkownkilla 4 years ago
nothing short of amazing! i wish more cartoons these days where like this
devilgrin555 4 years ago
I'd watch that show.
vernavulpes 4 years ago
How'd your pitch go for this?
My god! Where do you guys come up with, with the things they say!? It's so awesome. I have tears in my eyes, this made me laugh so hard.
It's offical...I'm in love with Bishworthy....LOOOOVE.
Cheesegoddess 4 years ago
OH MY GOD that face after "There are no such things as coincidences" made me laugh SO hard. I laughed all the way through this though, its AWESOME, perfect timing the whole way through, and good voice acting. Really, I'm so happy this exists.
wazaloo 4 years ago
Nice!
BlackUniGryphon 4 years ago
XD I love this! Pretty is the greatest. XD
bonedaddE 4 years ago
Yay! I'm going to spread this to EVERYONE! *does a dance*
misscritter 4 years ago
That's so awesome that I'm going to watch it a million times over. And then I'm gonna rewind... and then I'm gonna watch it some more! And then after that, when I'm done doing all of that watching... I'LL WATCH IT SOME FLIPPIN' MORE! HECK YES!
In short, it's amazing, and I really hope this gets animated some day.
Nelluzaki 4 years ago
hahaha this is hilarious! i am SO PSYCHED for when this comes out! ^^
thatjessagirl 4 years ago