the loud part was reaalllyyy good.:) i think mike and soph should work on the ending cause when he dusts her off it's kind of awkward...erhhh. and the dip. hahahaha mike
ok my transition in was really crappy haha. i need to work on walking while looking drunk but not crazy -.-. i think george left too early too? ideno.
kathy needs to work on her catwalk haha. and when she snatches the mirror out of sophia's hand it needs to be more forceful. i guess sophia just has to hold onto it tighter?
HAHA oh gosh vicky was good...i think she needs to be creepier and eviler and weirder..i can teach her that ;).lol jk. i think we all need to work on our transitions..
i thinnkk sam needs to be more aggressive. especially when he's pulling her in. and the last thing of his part..he kind of has to be more intimate. (awwkwarrddd..but true -.- lol) cause it has to seem like he means a lot to her...and then he just ditches her. if it looks like he doesn't care then it doesn't matter as much si?
when george is grabbing the money out of her hand, he needs to be more forceful.andd he needs a bigger stack of money cuz it's sorta hard to see what it is haha
since this is about my 50th time watching the video...i picked up some stuff we need to work on so we don't have to waste time picking it out at church :D. ideno i guess this is opinionated stuff so you can always be like NOOO but yeah. ok.
i think the transitions are kind of..blah. like sophia's waiting too long between people and seh doesn't have anything to do except...walk around. i think vicky's was the best transition so yay vicky!
i'm running out of space so i'm making anoter comment haha
very nice changdl7
FryingPan96 2 years ago
This was pretty good always gives me chills!
I have never seen it done with a mirror like that. A very nice touch...did you think that up?
ASealUponThineHeart 3 years ago
good points, jenny! we gotta work on this soon. heh heh heh
changdl7 3 years ago
the loud part was reaalllyyy good.:) i think mike and soph should work on the ending cause when he dusts her off it's kind of awkward...erhhh. and the dip. hahahaha mike
sorry for spamming this video dan. .__.
xasianfire 3 years ago
ok my transition in was really crappy haha. i need to work on walking while looking drunk but not crazy -.-. i think george left too early too? ideno.
kathy needs to work on her catwalk haha. and when she snatches the mirror out of sophia's hand it needs to be more forceful. i guess sophia just has to hold onto it tighter?
HAHA oh gosh vicky was good...i think she needs to be creepier and eviler and weirder..i can teach her that ;).lol jk. i think we all need to work on our transitions..
xasianfire 3 years ago
i thinnkk sam needs to be more aggressive. especially when he's pulling her in. and the last thing of his part..he kind of has to be more intimate. (awwkwarrddd..but true -.- lol) cause it has to seem like he means a lot to her...and then he just ditches her. if it looks like he doesn't care then it doesn't matter as much si?
when george is grabbing the money out of her hand, he needs to be more forceful.andd he needs a bigger stack of money cuz it's sorta hard to see what it is haha
xasianfire 3 years ago
since this is about my 50th time watching the video...i picked up some stuff we need to work on so we don't have to waste time picking it out at church :D. ideno i guess this is opinionated stuff so you can always be like NOOO but yeah. ok.
i think the transitions are kind of..blah. like sophia's waiting too long between people and seh doesn't have anything to do except...walk around. i think vicky's was the best transition so yay vicky!
i'm running out of space so i'm making anoter comment haha
xasianfire 3 years ago
omg! i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv this video! no matter how many times i watch it, i always cry!
swang622 3 years ago