How about feral cats? I like the fact that the 'animal' could represent many things in this poem, possibly a life/person that wants or needs to change? But then again, maybe I read between the lines too much. Always great lines and a great delivery too, Aaron. :) Janet
How about feral cats? I like the fact that the 'animal' could represent many things in this poem, possibly a life/person that wants or needs to change? But then again, maybe I read between the lines too much. Always great lines and a great delivery too, Aaron. :) Janet
onewomanandsomesongs 2 months ago
heh interesting nice touch with that flush noise.. Great poem and message man.
JumokeTV 2 months ago
lol Great and humorous poetry, and perfect punctuation at the end!
theloathlydaddy 2 months ago
hahahahaha - I wish it were that easy to flush all the crap down the toilet.
Good job.
- Reid
ReidBaerPoetry 2 months ago