Well put together. My suggestions would be the camera angles are too high for you. The camera should be brought down closer to your height. Maybe from the waste up, and more straight on. Perhaps mention the cleanliness of the rooms, service and atmosphere a little more. The intro was good with the exception of the camera angles.
Well put together. My suggestions would be the camera angles are too high for you. The camera should be brought down closer to your height. Maybe from the waste up, and more straight on. Perhaps mention the cleanliness of the rooms, service and atmosphere a little more. The intro was good with the exception of the camera angles.
themarkfellows2 1 year ago