Dude, these lyrics are off the cliff, but too fast to this. Slow this joint or your flow. But lyrically, yeah, you in son!! Constructive, not personal. Peace!!!
It's seems like you got somethin goin but you gotta be more animated with the flow, can't just spit out line after line, You gotta have some flava, think of Common soul by the pound
no bruv lol i am from d uk nd u have got some good ones but sometimes ur off key but freestyle seem to do that , when i get a mic i may do some to the same instrumentals c what u think 4 a brit .. peece n keep it up mate
it's decent, but you need a better mic and work on your flow. other than that it's nice. try shortening your lines and moving your rhymes around and such.
You suck
yukuli234 6 months ago
I guess he's off beat. But keep it going man, you'll perform better then !
Deezasterful 1 year ago
Good lyrics...juss a lil fast on the flo. Dope song overall.
GlassJawk 1 year ago
My cousin Corey made the original song and I'm pretty sure u ruined it u suck
william13c 1 year ago
that was hot homie, much love ^_^
JRC3034 1 year ago
GREAT!! keep workin
Obamadose 1 year ago
Dude, these lyrics are off the cliff, but too fast to this. Slow this joint or your flow. But lyrically, yeah, you in son!! Constructive, not personal. Peace!!!
acdegrees421 1 year ago
Thanks a lot man I appreciate it! Check out my other songs like "Return of The Raw"
Hope to see you comment on more of my videos!
RiGolettoMicFiend 1 year ago
Keep doing your thing dude
snipersLock 1 year ago
yo, lost boyz did this remix, what's the name and where me can find it?
Jahcure420 2 years ago
not bad buddy slow it down keep on trying
spudmambo 2 years ago
It's seems like you got somethin goin but you gotta be more animated with the flow, can't just spit out line after line, You gotta have some flava, think of Common soul by the pound
Alphabethoven 2 years ago
u rapping too fast for the beat dawg but nice song just slow down like 1sec early and u be on point with the beat but
u got my props
KINGofALLkings910 2 years ago
Its real good you just gotta refine your tempo a little. You seem a little to fast sometimes. I give you mad props for the original lyrics
usucmehardutube 2 years ago 8
my nigga u killt it
balldogchips 2 years ago
not bad =]
TheComplementor 2 years ago
Dope
DiSaSTa81 2 years ago
freal huh percee p flow somewhat haha
dope lyrics tho
KAMAALsix9 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment man. Check out my other music and if you haven't please subscribe!
RiGolettoMicFiend 2 years ago
thats a raw beat aint it? like the video but u gotta get more flava but good u juss gotta go with the flow of the song nd u'll b fine
isaiahjamaltables 1 year ago
no bruv lol i am from d uk nd u have got some good ones but sometimes ur off key but freestyle seem to do that , when i get a mic i may do some to the same instrumentals c what u think 4 a brit .. peece n keep it up mate
miraiz123 2 years ago
kinda sound like Percee P'z flow
jlow142795 2 years ago 2
good flow but...
urphilip 2 years ago
DOPE
noir325 2 years ago
wat u talkin? i think its dope... ay good job, flows r where its at
beanershot2007 2 years ago
nice steal.
ablackman3 3 years ago
it's decent, but you need a better mic and work on your flow. other than that it's nice. try shortening your lines and moving your rhymes around and such.
eboyd32 3 years ago
and he needs 2 slow his flow a lil and put
some sense in it !
Teknique51 3 years ago
one of my fav songs
i was planning to do this track
DTMusicTheOfficial 3 years ago