Hey guys, yes it's another one of thoese comments lol
I'm an artist from Toronto trying to get some feedback for my music. I've been rapping for almost a year so I'm curious to see how well I'm doing it. I just uploaded of my first video. It's a freeverse to Common's track Sweet. It would mean a lot if even one person came to my channel and told me what they thought.
These sweet jelly niggas aint got shit/ fronting on they line/ they cant afford a dime/ unless they droppin 1/ cowards hide as soon as the choppers come/ I bust 1st so I aint duckin none/ long clip in my handheld so im droppin some/ u watch then tuck and run/ But im on that ass like boxer tags/ if u fags rep flags this mag will change ur mind like obi-won
if you like raw real music like this go check out my video. type in clos91585 go to the channel and its called train to go by CALI . please subcribe and comment , you wont be sorry
you know my words is big, bold you know my flows are sick, gotta cold you know i came to beast, mode i aint gotta say nothing, they should know i came for the adrenaline the sound and the melody music is the remedy "sucks" is the only felony bro, you came for the learning i give to much, maybe thats why im earning forreal yous corny you straight of the cob eatin yall up like a slob pull my gun in the lot only thing you sayin next is ......................dot -AngelN
Thomas and subliminal both need to stfu and go ham on a hobos cock fucking YouTube Bitches no rhymes no skill prolly got a rhyme dictionary. Silly Fucks
I step in and they candy crackin/ soft tissue type niggas/ break em im the 1 to make it happen/ pringle money i get it stackin/ tuck they chain in cuz they know what can happen/ talk tuff but they know u sweeter then watermelon/ they mean mug till sugar leaks out they melon/ misdemeanor rappers im the felon/ sick as hell yeah im in my element/ raise hell to the heaven sent/ send shots at ya like 50 cent/ but if u recover in the ER/ ill show up with the shotty like this is what was really meant
yung muthafuka spittin on a patriot's beat/ dey wanna c me explode lik an atom under radiant heat..
capable of turning a holy nun in2 da devil & make a muthafuken atheist sweet..
bioengineered specimen w/out dna in da bones of his skeleton/ i let dis bitch ass world fuck w/ me cuz i was raised 2 b a fucken gentleman..
developin adrenaline dat'll make u wanna jump over dis wall i built in front of u like a fucken mexican/ now u noe not to fuk w/ sum1 who's able 2 give life & flesh 2 a mannequin
These new rap niggas so Ssweeeeet Thats not a compliment my nigga you too weak I can beat ya punk ass fo about two weeks In a rap battle or in da Sstreeeeets Im RAW hard to the core like concrete YOU sweet str8 Sugar Honey Ice Tea Bees get diabetes trying to pluck nectar from you sweety call the arm guard we need a peace treaty Thats what they be saying after pissed in they wheaties My style is sweet without the sugar gutter wit da mask on Bitches be like dat nigga is sour sackron
These new rap niggas so Ssweeeeet Thats not a compliment my nigga you too weak I can beat ya punk ass fo about two weeks In a rap battle or in da Sstreeeeets Im RAW hard to the core like concrete YOU sweet str8 Sugar Honey Ice Tea Bees get diabetes trying to pluck nectar from you sweety call the arm guard we need a peace treaty Thats what they be saying after pissed in they wheaties My style is sweet without the sugar gutter wit da mask on Bitches be like dat nigga is sour sackron
HEY GUYS I REALLY WANT YOU TO GIVE ME YOUR OPINION ON THE DRAKE AND COMMON RAP BEEF. (IF U LISTEN TO RAP) SO WATCH MY NEW VIDEO AND TELL ME HOW YOU GUYS FEEL ABOUT THE WHOLE SITUATION. SUM OF U (FANS) MITE BE MAD AT WAT I SAY BUT I DONT GIVE A FUCK CHECK ME OUT!!
and these others niggas bitter/ cause im better/ and way nicer/ this christmas but no Mekhi Phifer/ and this free ass the B,E.T cypher/ see ...how ...i... stand and deliver/ shots fired going ham on your liver/ long shot fold ya hands at the river
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Hey guys, yes it's another one of thoese comments lol
I'm an artist from Toronto trying to get some feedback for my music. I've been rapping for almost a year so I'm curious to see how well I'm doing it. I just uploaded of my first video. It's a freeverse to Common's track Sweet. It would mean a lot if even one person came to my channel and told me what they thought.
Thank you.
XhibitionMusic 2 days ago
Hook me up with the link.....Your the man!
KCBoneyard 1 week ago
Awesome instrumental! Big fan of common. So I had to do my own verse to it check it out. :D Love-RO
ThatonekidRO 1 week ago
These sweet jelly niggas aint got shit/ fronting on they line/ they cant afford a dime/ unless they droppin 1/ cowards hide as soon as the choppers come/ I bust 1st so I aint duckin none/ long clip in my handheld so im droppin some/ u watch then tuck and run/ But im on that ass like boxer tags/ if u fags rep flags this mag will change ur mind like obi-won
LatinPlayerCUBA 1 week ago in playlist Instrumentals
Love this beat check out my version of it on my channel ;D
Scratchwitdaclaws 2 weeks ago
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if you're tired of typed lyrics, then come to my page and listen to my remix of this straight out of my dorm room
ShyMnh 2 weeks ago
if you like raw real music like this go check out my video. type in clos91585 go to the channel and its called train to go by CALI . please subcribe and comment , you wont be sorry
crusherkids 3 weeks ago
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Check out these kids from Indiana. Look up Freaks and Geeks Naptown Remix. For a first single it's pretty hot.
ZG2014 3 weeks ago
AngelNVEVO 3 weeks ago
common > lil B
Ninjaz1100 3 weeks ago
Would be dope if you could accept my video response i think i did the track justice
MilitiaMillz 1 month ago
No one will EVER kill this as good as common did. BUT I'm going to try my best ;)
RyanOfficialMusik 1 month ago
listen 2 my version /watch?v=vD5yr-i4YEw
MicrophoneFiend93 1 month ago
Listen to my wack rappers freestyle ;)
toniannyo 1 month ago
Want This Instr ....Please hook a MF up
MrJoeyTap 1 month ago
Thomas and subliminal both need to stfu and go ham on a hobos cock fucking YouTube Bitches no rhymes no skill prolly got a rhyme dictionary. Silly Fucks
blazedfordayz1 1 month ago
Check out MY remix to this track. BARS
ShyMnh 1 month ago
Need this link b... FIRE
RiverSideJettz88 1 month ago
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@subliminal68 Well played my gregarious rap friend
but sadly I am playing my trump card to your end
from AK47s to big boy guns like a M9 Beretta
mad cuz below my belt will make your girl wetta
you have just entered into a brand new production this next verse it will give ya a bleddin concussion
tearin up bitches like you is heavy on the soul
beatin you so bad you notice it takin a toll
picking a fight with me just wasnt the smartest
so sit and take notes from a true rap artist
Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago
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Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago
I step in and they candy crackin/ soft tissue type niggas/ break em im the 1 to make it happen/ pringle money i get it stackin/ tuck they chain in cuz they know what can happen/ talk tuff but they know u sweeter then watermelon/ they mean mug till sugar leaks out they melon/ misdemeanor rappers im the felon/ sick as hell yeah im in my element/ raise hell to the heaven sent/ send shots at ya like 50 cent/ but if u recover in the ER/ ill show up with the shotty like this is what was really meant
LatinPlayerCUBA 1 month ago in playlist Instrumentals
Here goes some real shit it comes to me quick
Tell me I’m in my zone so I can get a lick
The intellects crazy get it broadened like the greats
People think I’m symposium when I’m the mandrake
subliminal68 1 month ago
yung muthafuka spittin on a patriot's beat/ dey wanna c me explode lik an atom under radiant heat..
capable of turning a holy nun in2 da devil & make a muthafuken atheist sweet..
bioengineered specimen w/out dna in da bones of his skeleton/ i let dis bitch ass world fuck w/ me cuz i was raised 2 b a fucken gentleman..
developin adrenaline dat'll make u wanna jump over dis wall i built in front of u like a fucken mexican/ now u noe not to fuk w/ sum1 who's able 2 give life & flesh 2 a mannequin
1i1b4113r 1 month ago
PUSHA T FOR PRESIDENT!
JodieJoe26 1 month ago
I'm too cold like two hoes with four colds and no clothes,
FantomHitz 1 month ago
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marrmarr18 1 month ago
marrmarr18 1 month ago
Appreciate the let go of this beat. This is perfect for a diss, tell that bitch that he's sweet!
-lovin' it man.
MindOfBenzWorld 1 month ago
Dick Riding Ass Kissing Everyone
lilmobster87 1 month ago
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supersamhain 1 month ago
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HEY GUYS I REALLY WANT YOU TO GIVE ME YOUR OPINION ON THE DRAKE AND COMMON RAP BEEF. (IF U LISTEN TO RAP) SO WATCH MY NEW VIDEO AND TELL ME HOW YOU GUYS FEEL ABOUT THE WHOLE SITUATION. SUM OF U (FANS) MITE BE MAD AT WAT I SAY BUT I DONT GIVE A FUCK CHECK ME OUT!!
TrendnTopiczVlog 1 month ago
Feeling heavy handy while I'm bashing fools plenty
the bitch drake say he clean but he fake
not hard to tell this nigga sing while he masterbate
a deadly combination like no water and the sun
killing all these niggas that are on one
fake gimmicky ass flows that burn the ears and nose
i will do battle with any those cash money hoes
since this is limited by simple characterization
drake realize this song is the beginning of your extermination
Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago 2
@Thomas2222Mitchell You don’t know the half of it just like me
They deceive the best of us vibing on the same team
You starring through the scope of a fucking late teen
Respond you lose that’s something I guarantee
Now you right about the underdog beating drake
A couple featured songs then common done and took cake
One can only speculate on running mates
If you ask it starts with nelly and ends with rosay
Until track seven that’ll be the judgment day
subliminal68 1 month ago
@subliminal68 If you are throwing a diss or are just agreeing
its cool both ways cuz I dont care about pleasing Being of a Carzin mind, killing MCs to past the time
I don't care if you take your name from sublime
all in good favor, I will take to the center and swoosh like the lakers
Hate when being deceived by posers and in the ass takers
Now that you have enjoyed schooling from the best start watching out and wearin your thickest vest
Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago
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subliminal68 1 month ago
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@Thomas2222Mitchell I ain’t gregarious; they’ve been peers for a couple years
Tell me nice rhyme then I will bring the beers
Take a look at crazy eye’s and where he went with his career
Took a good look in the mirror then I step in my veneer
Got a nine millimeter in my two seater near
The destination Im finna leaver at the meeter
Im just the franchise boy bc I get it the day I meet her
Call me Brian Griffin you can be cousin skeeter
Shout out to Winson you my man homie cheers
subliminal68 1 month ago
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Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago
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@subliminal68 I bet you think you're tough cuz you can name drop
I am about to light up your ass and drop you like Biggy did Pac
Need no weapons to kill a man of your size and stature
I'll take your damn body and bury it in a no name pasture
fuck the spitting this is an all out fucking war
I will chew and spit you out faster than a carnivore
little boy i dont like my bitches to think they can share
remember I am the king you are simply my heir
Thomas2222Mitchell 1 month ago
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subliminal68 1 month ago
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@Thomas2222Mitchell Bust in your face that first base in my book
You can’t hang homie suicide invinsible
Fuck your raps and your life in the interval
Your centerfold between me and a vegetable
If I spat on a track it be wack when you run it back
All you would hear was the squirm of a heart attack
And the persona of a bitch Mr. Warren Sapp
God damn homie eat a dick
After the first one you of learned when to quit
subliminal68 1 month ago
1 DISLIKE!! Obviously some person has no taste in hip-hop.
joeykajunga 1 month ago
could you imagine wayne on this............ toe taggin niggas
Aphasia17 1 month ago
sound the alarm
buck shots rang out loud, cloud senses
centless liter dirty streets, newspaper sheets
sheltered by damp cardboard walls, alcohol blanket
thank it, concrete beneath barefeet, but only when they awake, kid
separate from realitys the only escape
battered and worn
moral, merit got more holes in it than an addicts arm
never glad its dawn, sun reminding of all the problems Im drowning from
CGAlfonso4 2 months ago
NO I.D.
gio1764 2 months ago
Who the fuck disliked this?
JuggernautTheory 2 months ago 5
@JuggernautTheory a fuckin bum
RajaBoiJenkins 2 months ago
@JuggernautTheory That fag called Drake hahahahahahaahaha a big fuck to the motherfocker drake from Brazil , fuck YM too
HipHopRemix7 2 months ago
Jus heard this song on Sucker Free, had to hear the instrumental.
000eMan000 2 months ago
and these others niggas bitter/ cause im better/ and way nicer/ this christmas but no Mekhi Phifer/ and this free ass the B,E.T cypher/ see ...how ...i... stand and deliver/ shots fired going ham on your liver/ long shot fold ya hands at the river
markco282 2 months ago
im gonna eat dis muthafuckin beat
ThaFaks 2 months ago
its my ringtone
lirbaaa1 2 months ago
I'm going to demolish this....it's overdue.
BaseS1X 3 months ago
fucking thank you for putting this up
ampark09 3 months ago 13
Thanks for the instrumental. Check out our remix to this track. It's FIRE!!!
PrototypeMusic002 3 months ago 16
@PrototypeMusic002 that shit sucked
jmj540 2 months ago
Fu**in tough...
siggiddy 3 months ago
i subbed link plzz... :)
MrIneedasponsor 3 months ago
Prodigy playa...mobb deep
LEGALHUSTLAH 3 months ago
I'm trying to find "field marshal p" instrumental for a school project...where j finding ur beats my dude?
LEGALHUSTLAH 3 months ago
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PrototypeMusic002 3 months ago
Nice.
PrototypeMusic002 3 months ago
epic
DeadReaper567 3 months ago
your tha best!
iceman3847 3 months ago in playlist More videos from mrinstrumental3000