Cuts to the bone. The last line strikes me; "they looked like another upwardly mobile pair". There's an air of cynicism to it, as if to suggest that although they might "look" like a bright-futured couple, their gloomy fate is already sealed.
Bukowski gets to the core of things, doesn't he? I must envision this couples' lives together as having been beautiful, at least at some point, before so cruelly ended, I admire the husband's courage to chose when he believed he could no longer care for his demented wife, Either choice requires courage. Should the young couple not be upwardly mobile while fate permits them to be? The dance continues. None of us is getting out of here alive. Long may you keep dancing, Tom. Lovely reading.
I read a lot of Bukowski but have never come across this one. Made me cry. Now that he is dead they publish every scrape that Bukowsky ever wrote work . Some of it isn't very good but then you see a piece like this and say, "Man that guy knew something profound and wasn't affraid to tell you about it. Thanks for posting
I believe it was Camu that asked or stated the question all must face every day: which is to go on with the charade to get on with it knowing it is but a trifling affair, but, if we can bring a smile, alleviate some pain in another then we find a purpose other than that it is all just a comedy an ironic cruel joke to pass the time not much more than that - Thanks
Brilliant as always. I hope my kids get to study this in school when I've grown up. The edgiest we get is Boland for christ's sake. This is real poetry
GREAT POEM !!! WHAT IS THE NAME OF THE PICTURE OF THE TWO ELDERLY FOLKS AT THE BEGINNING AND THE END?
TheTissueguy 2 weeks ago
I may have to mirror this, because if this disappears from Youtube, I will be upset.
mavarek666 2 weeks ago
Beautiful reading. I didn't know the poem. Thanks.
LesterShane 1 month ago
Cuts to the bone. The last line strikes me; "they looked like another upwardly mobile pair". There's an air of cynicism to it, as if to suggest that although they might "look" like a bright-futured couple, their gloomy fate is already sealed.
Tom93M 2 months ago
Excellent reading. Gave me chills.
hkdancergl 2 months ago
this is so grim it has made me cry laughing. Time to get out of bed.
keyfeatures 2 months ago
that is POWERFUL ...
teamsleep24 3 months ago
What is the narrarators name? I love his voice especially when he speaks in the poem bluebird, and now I cannot find it.
thesuntheneonlight 3 months ago
@thesuntheneonlight Everything in this channel is read by me, Tom O'Bedlam. I hope you will listen to a few more.
SpokenVerse 2 months ago 2
absolutely beautiful. stunning. reading.
this is my husband and i. but hell is also a beautiful place.
lovepeacepoetry 3 months ago
This is the most depressing poem I've ever heard.
AtticusStount 4 months ago
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JacksInn 5 months ago
Wow.
McSoap 6 months ago
I like your pronunciation of diapers.
greyhoundfriend123 8 months ago 2
A poem that is so much more than the sum of its words.
Valicore 8 months ago
and life keeps on going and we're nothing but rubbish...
MegasAnatolikos 9 months ago
Bukowski gets to the core of things, doesn't he? I must envision this couples' lives together as having been beautiful, at least at some point, before so cruelly ended, I admire the husband's courage to chose when he believed he could no longer care for his demented wife, Either choice requires courage. Should the young couple not be upwardly mobile while fate permits them to be? The dance continues. None of us is getting out of here alive. Long may you keep dancing, Tom. Lovely reading.
thissong4you 9 months ago 2
I read a lot of Bukowski but have never come across this one. Made me cry. Now that he is dead they publish every scrape that Bukowsky ever wrote work . Some of it isn't very good but then you see a piece like this and say, "Man that guy knew something profound and wasn't affraid to tell you about it. Thanks for posting
vudu8ball 9 months ago
thank you so much for reading this. Am ecstatic that you did my request! much love tom
elstroshitnonstop 9 months ago
Beautiful reading. The reality of the poem hits hard and leaves a lasting impression. Thank You for yet another beautiful reading.
LoupGarou55 9 months ago
great selection, this one always sends me back into nostalgia, thanks kindly-cheers from san diego
jeremyshambles 9 months ago
Reality at its finest. Depressingly beautiful.
SilentGabrie 9 months ago
Please, some Cohen .....
brokenfeather1973 9 months ago
I like that you did an American accent reading an American poet. That was a nice touch! Thanks for the reading, and keep recording!
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herodotus53 9 months ago
I love Charles Bukowski's poetry.
I dont know,that first couple,that's true love to me.If one go'es they go together :)
justdi123 9 months ago
@justdi123 White Lies 'To Lose My Life'
DaithiDublin 9 months ago
@DaithiDublin
:-)
justdi123 9 months ago
@DaithiDublin
What is "White Lies 'To Lose My Life' "?
meusisto 9 months ago
I believe it was Camu that asked or stated the question all must face every day: which is to go on with the charade to get on with it knowing it is but a trifling affair, but, if we can bring a smile, alleviate some pain in another then we find a purpose other than that it is all just a comedy an ironic cruel joke to pass the time not much more than that - Thanks
persevere4 9 months ago 2
@persevere4 - Well said.
dink65 9 months ago
The poem you never truly have to explain. It's riveting on it's own. Bukowski, your one helluva guy.
Gjkl345 9 months ago
thank you, as always i enjoyed this very much
thatgirlandhim 9 months ago
So sad the human condition.
scifiwritir 9 months ago
Brilliant as always. I hope my kids get to study this in school when I've grown up. The edgiest we get is Boland for christ's sake. This is real poetry
himrawkz 9 months ago
@himrawkz Do you not study Philip Larkin?
A0Candle0In0The0Dark 9 months ago
sad and very realistic.
paulpellicci 9 months ago
I find Bukowski to be brutally honest in his writing, he certainly cuts to the core of things. It saddens me but such is life at times.
Thank you for your reading. Wonderful as always.
irreverentreverend 9 months ago