very rough around the edges you need deeper metaphors just because it rhymes doesn't means its a slam poem!!!!!!
bubomb1 1 year ago
Hey Daniel,
Great poem. Keep writing them!!! You have alot of talent for it!! Wonderful job. ;D
rowsofbows 2 years ago
Thanks! : ) i will, i just sometimes need a little inspiration.
i have a small collection of poems on my computer, but this one was my best.
fireblas8888 2 years ago
awesome poem Daniel! you are great :)
Live2ridetolive 2 years ago
thanks i appreciate it : )
very rough around the edges you need deeper metaphors just because it rhymes doesn't means its a slam poem!!!!!!
bubomb1 1 year ago
Hey Daniel,
Great poem. Keep writing them!!! You have alot of talent for it!! Wonderful job. ;D
rowsofbows 2 years ago
Thanks! : ) i will, i just sometimes need a little inspiration.
i have a small collection of poems on my computer, but this one was my best.
fireblas8888 2 years ago
awesome poem Daniel! you are great :)
Live2ridetolive 2 years ago
thanks i appreciate it : )
fireblas8888 2 years ago