Added: 2 years ago
From: fireblas8888
Views: 604
Sort by time | Sort by thread (beta)

Link to this comment:

Share to:

All Comments (3)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • very rough around the edges you need deeper metaphors just because it rhymes doesn't means its a slam poem!!!!!!

  • Hey Daniel,

    Great poem. Keep writing them!!! You have alot of talent for it!! Wonderful job. ;D

  • Thanks! : ) i will, i just sometimes need a little inspiration.

    i have a small collection of poems on my computer, but this one was my best.

  • awesome poem Daniel! you are great :)

  • thanks i appreciate it : )

Loading...
Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more