Otalia Part Eight

[fruprort]

Omg !! Olivia is amazing vulnerable, when she is talking about how she doesn't want Emma to be hurt like she was... when she looks to the floor...ahh it is supurb !! Then just a bad ass when she tells Nat that "she's my daughter ...you stay here " WOW !! When she says LESBIANS OHH !! God I cracked up, the expression on Nats face was priceless !!! You go LIV !!!

dylanxtra excellent work !!! I'm hook on you now too !! Ha, ha !!!

[stormyweather5]

Brilliant! Thank you.

[ookamizy]

LOVE IT! Your awesome lines are awesome! "The Gay is strong in these two" HAHAHAHA

[la1negrita]

U r a 5 star talent :))

[evanescencefan2]

LMAO XD the gay oi strong in these two haha  you come up with the best lines ever XD

[dreamerisso]

the second kiss is better so we got 2 kisses already

[549621jon]

i totally just book that totally unsatisfied look on Natalia's face after she kisses frank. almost like she's wondering why don't i feel the way i felt when Olivia kissed me.

[dylanxtra]

Ha...that could be so right :p

[549621jon]

you know if you look really close it almost looks like nat kissed her back.

[alicat07]

That was an excellent breakdown. funny but also very on point. Thanks

[dylanxtra]

Thank you, alicat :)

I tried not to put too many chucklesome comments in this one cos I didn't want to detract from the emotion, but I'm happy it wroked for you :p

[IrishRinoa2]

I don't comment often, but this was defo worth it! Keep them coming, it's excellent.

[dylanxtra]

Thank you, IrishRinoa :p

[xRaex21]

I look forward to these. Your commentary is always funny and appreciated. Thank you.

[dylanxtra]

Thank you for watching, Raex :)

[djanni11]

These are great ! More ! More !

[dylanxtra]

Thank you, djanni :)