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  • i love this. use it in my writing classes

  • @rawreality, @hardcoreartface, I met him in Sydney and I couldn't believe it. He's just incredibly charismatic, ebullient and profoundly interesting to talk to.

  • Amazing work

  • He says "yeah, its like a nose buhleed only backwards..." Bullied nose...that's my take ha

  • He says 'Nose bleed" only backwards meaning the boy said " Bleeed nose"

  • I think the "nose bleed, only backwards" is like taking the word "bleed" and saying it in reverse. It makes that "bee-leed" sound like it would if it were "backwards".

    So not literally a backwards nosebleed, but the word bleed, backwards itself.

    That's just what I got from it.

  • I think the "nose bleed, only backwards" is like taking the word "bleed" and saying it in reverse. It makes that "bee-leed" sound like it would if it were "backwards".

    So not literally a backwards nosebleed, but the word bleed, backwards itself.

    That's just what I got from it though.

  • Can anyone explain the meaning/reference of the line "I am a FOG"?

    I really love this poem, but I don't understand that bit.

  • so fucking deeeeep! you've gotta love him!!!

  • Umm can someone explain to me what's the meaning behind this poem cause I really like poetry but I don't have an ear for it :/

  • @47incher you aren't born with an ear for poetry- but you are born with ears- the more you use them the more you hear- like the first time you hear an orchestra you may be so overwhelmed all you get is the overall feeling- but a few more times you can pick out that viola in the second movement that soars like a broken winged swan that's finally healed- and you discover that's what makes the whole symphony for you- just trust your own imagination to point you in the right direction.

  • We definitely need more beautiful minds like that which springs out of education and simple good old book learning.. yeah reading you know...reading like a former President really hated and were so bad at that he was red to!...we need more intellectuals and not orange old men with a really bad comb over and a far to young wife being a complete asshat on national TV.. after eight years of a complete nightmare with a semi retarded President we really do not need another one and more chaos...

  • Clearly about an autistic child correct?

  • I've been watching all of his videos for the past hour and RIVES=AMAZING! <3

  • Regardless if this poem is fact or fable, you have a beautiful mind and a beautiful soul.

  • ...ive watched it a few times...this performance is incredible. i love poems that you have to put your own meaning into because there is no black and white answer to what it is about..

    ..i take from this one though a poem about a mentally challenged boy....and in that retrospect i absolutely adore the last few lines<3

    thank you rives..

  • my God his delivery is flawless!!!!

  • you know...my major requires me to give a lot of speeches and performances and yet I still get butterflies and tremble at the stares I get in return for speeches....however, you rives, inspire me to confront my audience and keep a cool head and deliver the shock and awe to my audience....thank you kind, sir.

  • Love Love Love! Thank You!

  • I love it...

  • I love it.

  • I've never had a favorite poet, until now.

  • Its like eye candy meant for the heart, and coming in from a world that tries to tear you apart, its nice. It is just nice. Nicer that the icing on the cake. 'Cause this guy, Rives, he doesn't fake it 'till he makes it. He makes it until he doesn't have to fake it anymore. Thanks so much!

  • That was wonderful.

  • Rives = Absolutely Fantastic.

    I come back over and over again.

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  • It's late at night, early morning. I've sat through myriads of performances from this fellow, pockmarked with smiles streamlining my face. I've observed a peculiar habit that I've began to develop while wandering around this section of poetry-land: I've favorited every single one of those videos. I love this. Thank you, Rives.

  • The story reminds me of Donald Zinkoff

  • i love this so much! my brother is autistic and it makes me think of him!!

  • awesome, and he pulls out his harmonica at the end

  • enut utter and elly andwich! wow...id love of of those.....sounds like reverse op-talk...rives, genius stroyteller, privilaged to listen to his stuff, ......

  • Ok, I don't want to sound like a creep, but it's bound to happen. Rives, you have changed my life. Before I stumbled across your work I had no idea words could have such a compelling power to evoke empathy and inspire people. You have shown me what I really want to do with my life and I want to thank you; hopefully in person someday.

  • Rives is the best spoken word artist/poet I have ever heard and all of his videos make my bad days, good days, and I thank him for that. Simply the best.

  • My favourite poem, from my favourite poet.

    I so wish he'd do a mini-tour in the UK.

  • I'm in love.

    I'm not to familiar with poetry but out of every poet I've ever herd he's the best. He really stands out. His style, his flow- rhythm, his energy. Amazing.

  • Does this make anyone incredibly sad?

  • yes but wistful too

  • No not at all.

    My sister is mentally handicapped. She makes up for it by literally reading minds and revealing your thoughts out loud in front of people. It has caused more than one case of uncontrollable laughter around the table.

    This poem makes me happy. My sister isn't alone now.

  • Impressive,he really knows how to hold your attention and; you can hear every word.

  • Wow, I was left speechless

    I want to be this guy

  • I do like these introspective kind of peoms, very therapeutic. He has great metaphors and uses words so oddly but fantasticly. To me the noseblled thing seems like it's more innocent, like the kid tasted metal first then blood as opposed to the taste of nosebleeds. Listen to how he imitates the kid, it is more of a story this way.

  • wow...is any of Rives' stuff published?

  • I like how the crowd occasionally laughs, then thinks about what they are laughing at and realizes maybe it's not so funny, but deeper than they first gave it credit for.

  • This man is amazing! He makes me wish that I could say things as beautifuly as he can. WOW I want to meat him so bad.

  • I wanna meat him too... ;-)

    Meeting him first would be a priority.

  • @RawReality meat him? LOL

  • @RawReality

    okay so 4 years late and I'm sure someone else already said it but......I couldn't help snigger at the fact you wanted to "meat" him so bad.....still though I "holey" agree with the rest of your statement....

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  • @RawReality meat him? is that like stoning people only with meat?

  • What does he mean by ..."i tastes like a nose bleed, only backwards??"

  • hrrmmm.... I'm thinking that he means when you taste something it goes in your mouth but it tastes like a backwards nosebleed because it's not going in, it's going out.. lmao pfft

  • i see that all rives speeches are very very interlectual...thanks for the upload

  • err...I made those comments in response to someone asking a question. I'm not just talking :P.

  • This one in particular....just a feeling

  • Reminds me of Ray Bradbury

  • How so?

  • @shopliftwindchimes It's beautiful, that's how.

    : ]

  • @shopliftwindchimes YouTube has now immortalized the day you were comment stiff-armed, Rives.

  • @shopliftwindchimes This is a really old comment, but I'd say that you're similar to Bradbury in your ability to paint a vivid scene. His characters could be replaced with almost any character from other books, but the settings and themes were spectacular and unique. I think the comparison to Bradbury was a stretch, but there's some truth to it.

  • @Sordov I never even thought of that, though it fits so well. It has a Dandelion Wine carefree summer day sort of taste to it.

  • @Sordov cause he says dandelions?

  • wow...I thought it couldn't get anybetter and you go and surprise me...lol

  • It's that much more than me, it's that much more than you...

    wow.

  • agreed, wow.

  • mine and his brother had the same name why you hitting your self why you hitting your self hahahah

  • I love this one.

  • I watch it everyday...no life..lol

  • I don't get it....

  • As much as I can tell...the boy who can levitate is the young boy with no friends.

    Whenever we "see" the boy, he is alone and doing something sort of strange/klutzy/etc. His brother picks on him. He runs over his own lunch, and spazzes about it. Emily hits a shish kabob into his mouth. He is explaining balloons to people as if they don't know. His hallooween costume makes no sense. He is the boy who doesn't dress himself right.

  • Rives is telling his story from third person to allow us to reflect in our own "boy who can levitate".

    Any more personal information about the boy would remove this effect.

    The beauty is that Rives is the boy's knight in shining armor. Rives never saw the boy levitate, but he says so to give the boy 15 minutes of admiration. Admiration he would never otherwise have. He goes out of his way to tell everyone.

    That's why the end is so poetic.

  • Very well explained. This is exactly what I drew from the poem also. Nice.

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